ViDev SS: Aakhir Kaise - One Curious ❤️ - pt3 @pg5

Great 😃 I always wanted the tranfer incident to be a proper track which could take the story forward. Looking forward to read what would happen next.

Originally posted by: zack69

Great 😃 I always wanted the tranfer incident to be a proper track which could take the story forward. Looking forward to read what would happen next.

art 2 up

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162091785

2 parts are up girls.. 3rd one will take some time..

tag 1

Wow, simply superb. What a clear depiction of Dev's thought process 😍. You made me smile with this. Rocky wala Thank you tumko. Haaye Dev ka visualisation de diya yaar. Too good 👍

Originally posted by: Revutty

Wow, simply superb. What a clear depiction of Dev's thought process 😍. You made me smile with this. Rocky wala Thank you tumko. Haaye Dev ka visualisation de diya yaar. Too good 👍

thank you soooooooooooooo much...

do read part 2 and let me know ur views

Aise hi monologue milna chahiye tha show mei

Wow very nice !!! Vaise dev ki monologue sunne ke liye tharas rahe hain hum log .aapne vohi dia . Bahut maza aaya uski confusion, protectiveness that unknown feeling to see her you described Dev’s feelings so beautifully thank you telly for this awesome piece of work!!

I will read the second part and come!!!!!

Originally posted by: carljung

Aise hi monologue milna chahiye tha show mei

thank you so much..

show me nahi tha isiliye likhna pada.. show wale to gadi rajdhani ki speed me bhaga rahe hai...