ViDev SS - She fell first but He fell hardest- last part, pg#12 - Page 13

I have started reading it.

You made me very much happy with this FF. Great work. I was thinking 🤔 so much over the dramebaazi of today's episode. But you just chilled out me with this. First part was like a bang. I was able to visualise them before me. Dev desperately need Vidhi's smile, her cute 👀 eye sights and he thinking over what he did to her as everything was going well and Vidhi be like an adamant kid as this time he have to tell it was so realistic. Second part was like the thought processes and confusions of them and it was worth reading. And the longest yet the final part is my top favourite among these three because it poured the essence of true love. Being together in that umbrella ☔ ,rain and Dev giving the saree, Vidhi's thoughts every thing was simply beautiful ❤️. And the most awaited I love you Dev ,it was so heartwarming to read. He cupping her face and giving the finest kiss 💋 😘😘😘😘😘 Oh God!!! I imagined them before and I just loved this story. You are absolutely a talented person. Send this FF to makers of NUKSH. May be they will get some ideas 💡 from it as there were so many lovely things. Arjun as the friend and well wisher was good. It was all over a beautiful story.

Originally posted by: Revutty

You made me very much happy with this FF. Great work. I was thinking 🤔 so much over the dramebaazi of today's episode. But you just chilled out me with this. First part was like a bang. I was able to visualise them before me. Dev desperately need Vidhi's smile, her cute 👀 eye sights and he thinking over what he did to her as everything was going well and Vidhi be like an adamant kid as this time he have to tell it was so realistic. Second part was like the thought processes and confusions of them and it was worth reading. And the longest yet the final part is my top favourite among these three because it poured the essence of true love. Being together in that umbrella ☔ ,rain and Dev giving the saree, Vidhi's thoughts every thing was simply beautiful ❤️. And the most awaited I love you Dev ,it was so heartwarming to read. He cupping her face and giving the finest kiss 💋 😘😘😘😘😘 Oh God!!! I imagined them before and I just loved this story. You are absolutely a talented person. Send this FF to makers of NUKSH. May be they will get some ideas 💡 from it as there were so many lovely things. Arjun as the friend and well wisher was good. It was all over a beautiful story.

thank you so much dear friend for such lovely words.... and it made me so happy that all my hard work feels worth now reading ur words...

though i wasnt able to make it more romantic (as everyone must have wanted) cause i cant visualize Dev that way.. he is different from other young age lovers... and there cant be a better way for him to show his love is by understanding her, by being with her in her ups n downs.. but so glad you connected with it as much i did while writing.

thanks again...🤗☺️

Omg this is so so beautiful and mene aaj pdha kahan rh gyi thi mein. But i must say aapne phle hi kiss krwa di dono ki aaj discuss hi kia just vidhi ka gift yahan bhi vidhi ne hi shuruaat ki kiss ki🤣pagli film ki film kaafi interesting hai🤣

Dev ko thoda sa push krne ki der h bs mjhe pta h usk baad bnda sari seemayen laangh jayega fer chahe umar ki seema ho ya ahem ahem🤣🤣

But tell me one thing jb Dev ne cake crush kr di aa hath mein to vidhi ko hold krte time cake vidhi k bhi to lg gya hoga face pr iska zikr nhi kiaa aage🤣

Originally posted by: Parud7

Omg this is so so beautiful and mene aaj pdha kahan rh gyi thi mein. But i must say aapne phle hi kiss krwa di dono ki aaj discuss hi kia just vidhi ka gift yahan bhi vidhi ne hi shuruaat ki kiss ki🤣pagli film ki film kaafi interesting hai🤣

Dev ko thoda sa push krne ki der h bs mjhe pta h usk baad bnda sari seemayen laangh jayega fer chahe umar ki seema ho ya ahem ahem🤣🤣

But tell me one thing jb Dev ne cake crush kr di aa hath mein to vidhi ko hold krte time cake vidhi k bhi to lg gya hoga face pr iska zikr nhi kiaa aage🤣

thank you so much.. and glad you liked it.

Dev is a kiddo... for sure. push ki bhi jarurat nahi hai.. just touch karo and he will all bonkers...

gubbara hai bas uspar se phula hai andar hawa hai hawa...🤣

wo cake abhi rakha hai sambhal ke agar aage likhna hua ya kuch aur likha hua to kaam aayega usko continue karne me

Mein bhi read karti hoon thodi der mein

Originally posted by: prs_725

Mein bhi read karti hoon thodi der mein

okies.. take you time..

looking forward to your feedback

Mei to dobara padhungi Sunday ko Videv nhi milte lekin apne forum ki writer telly zindabaad.ye padh lo saare miss nhi karoge.

Originally posted by: carljung

Mei to dobara padhungi Sunday ko Videv nhi milte lekin apne forum ki writer telly zindabaad.ye padh lo saare miss nhi karoge.

thank you ji...

you make me happy by saying so

Awww that was soo sweet!! Why I can I imagine dev actually cutting cake in perfect shape just to avoid Vidhi in reality too hahahah use jab kuch kuch feel hota hain toh aise hi karta hain 😂😂🙈🙈 you did such a great job! Please cont w more FFs 💕