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Part 11


Anjum: mashaallah se aapka Ghar bahot pyaara hai.

Sitwat: Thank you aap logo ko humare Ghar ka address dudhne me problem to nahi hui.

Anjum:bilkul nahi Umair ko ghar ka pata tha.wo Azka ko lene jo aata tha

Sitwat:Main samjhi nahi.

Azka:wo mom Mrs Anjum ke liye daily hospital aana na pade isliye Me inke Ghar jati thi check up ke liye

Sitwat:ohh accha

Azlan(to him self):to us din jo azka ko car me lene aaya tha wo Umair tha.

Umair:ye to Azka ki kindness hai jo wo mom ke liye Ghar aa jati thi

Azka:nahi aisi koi baat nahi aap log mere liye meri family hi hai. Dr.Umar aur aap sab ne mujhe mere medical time me bahot support Kiya tha.sometimes pick and drop bhi karte the aap dono.

Umair: Azka anything for u.

Azlan ka dyaan umair par hi hai wo Azka ko har thodi thodi der baad dekh raha hai Azlan ko umair ka aise behave karna bilkul bhi accha nahi lag raha.wo use abhi isi waqt apne ghar se nikaalna chahta hai par Azka ki wajah se wo khamosh hai

Anjum:Azka beta ab tumne apna bahot dyaan rakhna hai.jaise hum sabka rakhti ho ab apna bhi rakho.

Sitwat:jee jee me bhi ise yahi bol rahi thi aap logo ke aane se pehle.

Umair:jayada walk na kariyega aap

Azka:jee me dyaan rakh..

Azlan:u don't need to worry about her.main hu na Azka ki care karne ke liye.u know after all she is my wife.

Umair Azlan ko aise uski aur azka ki baat me interfere karta dekhkar use dekhta hai.Azlan use ek Angry look deta hai.umair kuch der azlan ko dekhta hai and than use dekhkar smile karta hai.

Anjum: Mashaallah ye to bahot acchi baat hai.Azka mujhe bahot Khushi hui tumhri family se milkar.

Azka:Thank you aunty.

Sitwat:humari azka bhi to itni acchi hai.mere azlan ne koi neki ki hogi jiski wajah se Azka uski zindagi me aayi.

Azka nervously smile karti hai.Azlan use dekhe Jaa Raha hai aur umair Azlan aur azka dono ko.

Umair:Bilkul me aapki baat se totally agree karta hu.Azka jaisi ladki kisi neki ki wajah se hi mil sakti hai Azlan ko

Umair again given smile to azlan.

Azka:Aunty aapki reports aaj aani hai na?

Umair:wo me collect kar luga u don't worry I will send u.

Azka:thik hai

Azlan:Azka i think ab tumhe rest karna chahiye.

Azlan uske paas use uthane ke liye aata hai tabhi use azka rok deti hai.

Azka:....ruke...

Azka ko azlan ki ye harqat samjh nahi aati ..kaise wo kisi ke bhi saamne use utha sakta hai.

Azka:mujhe yaha accha lag raha hai.me rest hi to kar rahi hu kal se.

Azlan disappointed hota hai.but wo azka ke paas jakar Beth jata hai.

Umair:ohh Azka I forgot me parking me tha tab mene dekha aapke ghar ke bahar koi aaya hai.

Azka:kaun??

Umair azlan ki taraf dekhta hai aur bolta hai

Umair:koi driver hai sayad

Azlan:WHATT ??? me abhi aaya

Azlan ye sunkar foran bahar chala jata hai.Umair Azka ko dekhkar smile karta hai.

Sitwat:Aur beta umair aap bhi doctor ho?

Umair:nahi aunty ghar me ek docter hi bahot hai kyu mom.me dad ke saath business me hu

Sitwat:accha mashaallah

Next scene

Azlan gate ke paas jata hai but use waha koi nazar nahi aata.

Azlan:Bilal

Bilal:jee azlan saab .

Azlan:koi aaya tha yaha?

Bilaal:nahi saab koi nahi aaya

Azlan:r u sure ? Koi driver ya koi aur?

Bilaal:nahi saab koi nahi aaya..agar aata to me aapko call kar ke inform karta

Azlan:accha thik hai tum jao

Azlan wapas aa raha hota hai aur use umair nazar aata hai.jo apni mom ko gaadi me betha Raha hai umair Azlan ki taraf dekhta hai.Azlan use ignore kar ke wapas ghar chala jata hai.

Azka aur sitwat dono azlan ko dekhte hai

Sitwat:kaun tha beta.

Azlan:koi nahi

Sitwat:phir tum aise itni jaldi me kyu Gaye?

Azlan:nothing bas aise hi.

Sitwat:tum bhi ajeeb ho azlan.mujhe laga pata nahi kya ho gaya hai.is wajah se mene guests ko bhi rukne ko nahi kaha.

Azlan:accha kiya kaun aise aa jata hai subah subah.

Azlan gusse me bol deta hai but than he realised ke azka wahi bethi hai.

Azlan:i mean to say shaam ko bhi aa sakte the.

Sitwat:azlan tumhe to kisi se milna julna pasand nahi hai.wo yaha tumse nahi Azka se milne aaye the.mujhe to bahot pasand aaye wo log azka.

Azka smile karti hai

Sitwat:chalo bahot der ho gayi hai tum jao rest Karo Azlan Azka ko room me le jao

Azlan:jee mom

Azlan azka ko utha be lagta hai.

Azka:wo ek minute me ye bouquet pakad lu

Azlan ko umair yaad aata hai aur usko gussa aata hai but wo kuch nahi bolta.Azlan Azka ko lekar room me aata hai.

Azka:Azlan saab

Azlan:jee

Azka:I m sorry

Azlan:wo kis liye

Azka:wo mujhe nahi pata tha ke Anjum aunty aise yaha aapke ghar aa jayegi.agar mujhe pata hota to me unko koi bhi bahana banakar rok deti.

Azlan:Azka aap aisa kyu soch rahi hai ke mujhe unka yaha aana bura laga hai..me to bas ye bol raha tha ke wo shaam ko bhi aa sakte the.me aapke aaram ke liye bol raha tha.aap jise chaahe jab chaahe yaha bula sakti hai.mujhe koi problem nahi hai

Azka:Thank you.

Azlan smile karta hai aur sofe par jakar apne e-mail check karne lag jata hai.uske mind me umair chal raha hota hai.usko umair ka behaviour bahot weird lag raha tha.

Azka flowers ko Dekh rahi hoti hai.wo unhe Dekh dekhkar muskura rahi hai.

Azlan:aapko flowers pasand hai.

Azka:kisko nahi pasand hoge

Azlan:mujhe

Azka ye sunkar heran hoti hai

Azka:aap mazaq kar rahe hai na?

Azlan:nahi

Azka:kyu ye to itne khubsurat hote hai.

Azlan:har khubsurat cheez aapko khubsurat yaade bhi de ye zaruri nahi.

Azka Azlan ki baat sunkar uski taraf dekhti hai.Azlan kisi soch me gum hota hai.azka kuch bole usse pehle azka ko Kanwal ki call aati hai

Azka: Asalam alaikum bhabhi

Kanwal: walekum assalam kaisi hai Azka?

Azka: Allah ka shukar hai..aap batao teeno bacchiya kaisi hai aur Khalid Bhai?

Kanwal:sab acche hai mashaallah se Khalid bhi tera puch rahe the bol rahe the ke tere ghar chale par mene koi jawaab nahi diya.tu janti hai na Azlan saab ka koi bharosa nahi hai

Azka:aap unhe le aaye na yaha.aise accha nahi lagta..wo kya sochege.

Kanwal:wo kuch nahi sochte tu fiqar na kar bahot acche hai wo.

Azka:acche ya bahot acche.

Kanwal:tu phir suru ho gayi.baaz aa ja azka

Azka:haha are me kyu baaz aau ..aap bataye mene koi galat baat kahi hai.

Azlan Azka ki baate sun raha hai.usne pehli baar Azka ko aise kisi se baat karte hue dekha hai

Kanwal:nahi baat to tune bilkul sahi boli hai pata hai aaj bhi hum sab Khalid ke saath bahar ice cream khane gaye hue the.wo bahot khyaal rakhte hai humara.

Azka: mashaallah nazar na lage aap dono ke pyaar ko. Bahot naseeb wali hai aap.

Kanwal:ha wo to hai.par ab bas ye sab baate

Azka hasne lag jati hai and azlan ka dyaan uski taraf hi hai.use smile karti hui azka bahot acchi lagti hai but wo uski taraf jayada der nahi dekhta kyu ke wo nahi chahta Azka use dekhkar reserved ho jaye .use ye care free azka acchi lag rahi hai.

Azka:are ye kya baat Hui ek to aapko itne acche shohar mile hai ab hum unki taarif bhi na kare.isko nashukri kahte hai bhabhi.Ap soch nahi sakti me kitni khush hu aapko aise dekh kar

Azlan ye sab sunkar Khud ke behaviour ke baare me sochne lag jata hai.he realised ke usne Azka ko kabhi bhi wife wali izzat ya phir pyaar nahi diya

Kanwal: mujhe pata hai azka..accha chal phir me kuch der me aati hu unke saath.

Azka:thik hai me intzaar karugi.

Azka phone cut karti hai wo smile kar rahi hoti hai.wo ekdum se face side par karti hai to use azlan nazar aata hai jo use hi dekh raha hai.azka ek dum se apne face expression change kar leti hai.

Azka:Azlan saab

Azlan: jee

Azka:wo Khalid Bhai Ghar aana chaah rahe the ..bhabhi ne wahi batane ke liye call ki thi.

Azlan:ye to acchi baat hai.so kab aa rahe hai wo log

Azka:bas kuch der me.

Azlan:good.

Azlan laptop par kaam karne lag jata hai wo kuch sec ke baad dekhta hai azka use dekh rahi thi.

Azlan:aapko kuch kehna hai?

Azka: jee wo Samra ko bula dege.

Azlan:kuch chahiye aapko aap mujhe bata sakti hai.

Azka:nahi mene wo..i mean mene kal se yahi kapde pehne hue the so fresh hona tha.wo bhabhi aur Khalid Bhai aa rahe hai to.

Azlan:thik hai.

Azlan bahar jata hai.

Azlan:Samra.. Samra..

Bilal:jee azlan saab

Azlan:wo Samra kaha hai?.

Bilal:wo to badi begam sahiba ke saath bahar gayi hai.

Azlan:kab?

Bilal:abhi kuch der pehle..wo begam sahiba ne kuch samaan Lena tha

Azlan:accha thik hai tum jao.

Azlan wapas room me aata hai .

Azlan:Azka wo Samra to nahi hai.

Azka:koi baat nahi aap mom ko bula de

Azlan:wo Samra mom ke saath hi bahar gayi hai.

Azka:accha...chale thik hai.

Azlan:Azka

Azka:jee

Azlan:wo i mean ...me aapko..i mean....me aapki help kar du.

Azka ye sunkar azlan ko wide eyes se dekhne lag jati hai

Azka:ye kya bol rahe hai aap?

Azlan realised ke usne kya bol diya.

Azlan: no no u get me wrong i mean to say aaye me aapko washroom tak le jata hu .jab aap change kar le than awaaz de Dena.

Azka:nahi it's ok.

Azlan:Azka Samra pata nahi kab aayegi aur agar tab tak aapki bhabhi aa gayi to.trust me ...me bas aapki help karna chahta hu.mera aur koi intention nahi hai

Azlan ye bolkar apna face neache kar leta hai.azka kuch der use dekhti hai and than

Azka:thik hai mujhe aap cupboard tak le jaye

Azlan smile karta hai and azka ko uthakar cupboard tak le jata hai.azka apne kapde choose karne lagti hai.azlan wahi paas khada hai.

Azlan:ye white wala accha hai.

Azka Azlan ke ye bolne par ekdum se ruk jati hai.wo uski taraf dekhti nahi.azlan dekh raha hota hai he thinks ke wo white wala dress choose karegi but azka kuch der baad koi aur dress leti hai.azlan disappointed hota hai but kuch nahi bolta. than Azlan use washroom me lekar jata hai.wo use sink vanity par bithata hai.

Azlan:ek minute rukiye me abhi aata hu

Azlan kuch der baad ek plastic roll sheet lekar aata hai wo azka ke pairo ke paas bethta hai aur uske pair ko apne haath me leta hai.

Azka:ye aap ..

Azlan:relax me kuch nahi kar raha... bas aapki chot ko cover kar raha hu aise pani nahi lagega aapki injury par.aap chaahe to bath bhi le sakti hai.

Azlan waha neache bethkar azka ke pair ko cover kar raha hai aur azka use aise karta dekh rahi hai.wo Azlan ko aise uski itni care karta dekh bahot ajeeb sa mehsoos kar rahi hai.wo azlan jo use kuch samjhta nahi tha aaj aise uski parwaah kar raha hai.

Azlan azka ka pair cover kar ke use dekhta hai..azka usi ke khayalo me ghum hui hai.

Azlan:ho gaya.

Azka:....

Azlan:azka..

Azka::aahh jee

Azlan:i said ho gaya ab aap fresh ho jaye me bahar hi hu.darwaza me bahar se lock kar deta hu.ok

Azlan uthta hai aur waha se chala jata hai.azka wahi kuch der bethi sochti rahti hai.

After sometime

Azlan check karta hai ke bahot der ho gayi hai but azka still washroom me hai.wo sochta hai wo jakar puche ya nahi.

Azlan:itna time ho gaya hai i hope azka thik ho.

Wo uthkar jata hai aur knock karta hai.

Azlan:Azka aapko aur kitna time lagega.

Azka ki koi awaaz nahi aati.

Azlan is baar uchi awaaz me puchta hai.

Azlan:AZKA ..

azka:jee azlan saab

Azlan:aap thik hai.

Tabhi azlan ko kuch girne ki awaaz aati hai.

Azka:aahhnn .

Azlan:azka whatt happened?.

Azka:kuch nahi bas me uth nahi paa rahi aahh.

Azlan:kyaaa...aap thik hai..? Aapko kahi chot to nahi lagi.

Azka:jee bas utha nahi jaa raha..me koshish kar rahi hu.

Azlan:me andar aa jau.

Azka:NAHIIII AAP ANDAR NA AANA.

AZLAN:kyu???

Azka: wo...main...Plz aap andar na aana

Azlan kuch der wahi khada rahta hai.he knows ke azka bilkul nahi chaahegi ke wo use aise dekhe.azka phir try karti hai uthne ka but foot par pressure nahi daal paati

Azka:aahhhh

Azlan: Azka me andar aa raha hu.

Azka kuch bole isse pehle azlan door open kar deta hai.azka apna face dusri side kar deti hai.aur eyes close kar leti hai.usne bathrobe pehna hua hai but still she feel so uncomfortable in front of him.

Azlan:Azka aap kaha hai?

Azka opens her eyes and turns. She sees Azlaan standing at the door with his eyes closed

Azlan:Azka aap kaha hai?

Azka:aapke thik saamne.

Azlan:accha me aapke paas aa raha hu don't move ok.

Azlan azka ke pas aata hai.aur apna haath aage karta hai

Azlan:apna haath de

Azka hands her hand to Azlaan. Azlaan bed down and grabs Azka from her waist.

Azlan:azka apne dono haath thighly mere neck par rakhle.

Azka aisa hi karti hai.aur phir azlan use lekar khada hota hai.

Azlan:azka

Azka:hmmmm

Azlan:aap mujhe guide karti jaye me bahar Jaa raha hu

Azka starts looking at Azlan's face.His doing all this touched Azka's heart.She is looking at Azlaan with respectful eyes.with so much adoration

Azlan:Azka

Azka: aahhmmm right side par seedha.

Azlan:ok

Azlan comes out with azka.azka keeps looking at Azlan all the time there is a tears in her eyes but this tears is not because of pain.this tears is sometimes else.the way he care her respect her all this brought tears in Azka’s eyes


Azlan bed par azka ko bithta hai aur bed spreads se use cover karta hai.

Azlan:Azka can I open my eyes?

Azka ki eyes se ek halka sa aasoo girta hai aur wo smile karti hue use saaf karti hai.

Azka:jee azlan saab .

Azlan eyes open karta hai aur azka ki taraf dekhta hai

Azlan:r u ok?

Azka:jee

Azlan:aap sach bol rahi hai na ...me docter ko bulau?

Azka:nahi me bilkul thik hu.

Azlan:thik hai me aapko kapde laakar deta hu washroom se

Azka:wo kapde geele ho gaye hai

Azlan:koi baat nahi aap dusre bata de

Azlan cupboard open karta hai.

Azka:WO WHITE WALE

Azlan ki back azka ki taraf hai wo ye sunkar smile karta hai.wo white dress leta hai aur azka ko deta hai.

azlan:ap change kar le me bahar hu.agar kuch bhi cheez ki zarurat ho to mujhe call kar dena ok

Azka kuch nahi bolti aur azlan use kapde dekar bahar chala jata hai.azka bahot der tak door ki taraf dekhti rahti hai phir white dress ko dekhne lag jati hai aur smile karti hai.

End of part 11


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Lovely update❤️It was amazing...the next step for both of them❤️

Lo ji Azlan ko pta chal gya ki Umair usko pick karta tha...jealousy mode on😆aur ye anything for you kya hota hai😡...Umair ko bolo ye sirf Azlan keh sakta hai❤️ aur ye Azlan ka bas nahi chal raha Varna Umair ki ankhein nikal leta Azka ko dekhne ke zurm mei😆 and he is quoting that he will take care of her as she is his wife😆my poor jealous Azlan😆

Azlan wants to pick her up again❤️...aur ye bhi chahta hai Umair Azka se baat na kar paye ..and bloody umair Azlan ko chida raha hai😡...Azlan bullet ki speed mei bahar dar ke maare😆😆

Azlan ko un logo ka aana pasand nahi aaya ..means Umair ka aana😆 and bloody bouquet 😡...

I liked Azka and kanwal's banter..how easily she was having fun with her bhabhi...and Azlan looking at her smiling figure and thinking about their own marriage that he did not give her wifely rights..sach baat hai...but now he will ..

Azlan helping her....caring so much...wrapping her dressing...and Azka ke emotions at that time and Azka ne phle vo dress choose nahi kiya jo Azlan ne kaha...it was okay..she is still trying to digest so many things...

Azka was wearing the bathrobe and still saying andar na aana😆But jab Azlan aaya then my god...you know nazaro mei respect aur bhi badh gayi..he respected her enough to keep his eyes closed because he understands her discomfort.. and takes her to the bed and covers her first and then asks for her permission to open his eyes... and Azka' s reactions..thinking... tears... the respect and admiration she felt was awesome. he really deserves all of that... And the icing on the cake was she finally chooses the dress he chose earlier for her...Azlan smiles finally❤️...my heart❤️

Overall I like the entire update❤️.. you know I always like jealous Azlan... The emotions they both are feeling and the ease now they are getting in to is so good to read...Azka is now starting to fall for him...she will realise it soon and Azlan is gold..diamond ..everything now..

So waiting for the next update...keep writing dear..it's too good to read about our Azkaan❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: sanabmw

Part 1 51

Part 2 52

Part 3 55

Part 4 63

Part 5 69

Part 6 72

Part 7 75

Part 8 77

Part 9 78


Part 10

Azlan sofe par jakar Beth jata hai aur apna laptop open kar ke kaam karne lag jata hai.Azka book lekar read karne lag jati hai Par uska pura focus Azlan par hai.wo Azlan ke caring behaviour ko apne mind se nikaal hi nahi paa rahi.otherside Azlan ke dil aur dimaag me bas Azka chal rahi hai.wo use apne dil ki baat batana chahta hai.use kehna chahta hai ke wo kitna pyaar karta hai azka se par jo halaat Bane hue hai wo abhi Azka se kuch nahi keh sakta.

After sometime Azlan ko kisi ki call aati hai

Azlan:jee Mr.saaim

Saaim:sorry sir me aapko itna late disturb kar raha hu.aap office me nahi the.isliye socha call kar ke puch lu papers kaha send karne hai ghar par ya office me?

Azlan:kaunse papers?

Saaim: Divorce papers sir.

Divorce papers ka sunkar Azlan ekdum se ruk jata hai.

Azlan:......

Saaim:sir r u there?

Azlan:haaa wwoo

Azlan se thik se baat nahi ho paa rahi aur use aisa dekhkar azka uski taraf dekhti hai.dono ka eye lock hota hai.

Azlan: Mr.saaim right now I m busy.u can call me in morning

Saaim:as u say sir ,good night

Azlan:good night

Azlan phone side table par rakhta hai.

Azka:sab thik hai?

Azlan:jee sab thik hai.

Azlan kuch der sochta rehta hai ke wo Azka ko apne dil ki baat bole.use bataye ke wo use divorce dena nahi chahta.

Azlan:Azka

Azka Azlan ki taraf dekhti hai.

Azka:ha jee

Azlan kuch bol nahi paata wo samjh nahi paa Raha ke wo kaise Azka ko kahe..aaj subah wo divorce papers ready karne ka bol Raha tha and ab raat ko wo Azka ko kaise kahe ke wo ye rishta khatam nahi karna chahta kyu ke wo usse pyaar karta hai.

Azlan:nahi kuch nahi aap rest kare me studie me hu.

Azlan jane lagta hai

Azka:Sune

Azlan:jee

Azka: aap pareshaan na ho me kal Bhabhi se kahugi ke wo mujhe aakar le jaaye.

Azlan:par kyu?

Azka:me janti hu aap ko mere yaha is kamre me hone se disturbance ho raha hai.par yaqeen kare agar aaj Abid wo sab na karta to me abhi tak aapki zindagi se chali gayi hoti.kal me wapas chali jaugi phir aap apni mom se wahi sab bol dena jo mene aapko kaha tha.

Azlan:,.........

Azlan kuch nahi bolta Aur uthkar chala jata hai.Azka ko samjh nahi aata ke use kya hua hai.Azlan ka aise pal pal badalne wala behaviour use heran kar raha hai

Azka POV

AZLAN AHMED Azka rehman ke liye hamesha se ek confusion personality raha hai , jb wo ek rude arrogant insaan tha tab bhi aur aaj jab wo itna caring hai tab bhi.

Azlan ka changed persona Azka ko uski taraf khech raha hai.wo Azlan me dilchaspi lene lagi hai.uski baate usko acchi lagne lagi hai.uske saath waqt bitana use accha lagta hai.Azlan ka uski fiqar karna.uska khayaal rakhna.ye sab azka se Azka ke jazbaat Azlan ke liye badal rahe hai.

Azka:bhabhi sahi keh rahi thi us din, mujhe unse dur rehna chahiye.ek attachment si hoti jaa rahi hai mujhe azlan saab se ye sahi nahi hai.wo jo kuch bhi kar rahe hai mere liye wo sirf ek humdardi ki wajah se kar rahe hai.unko guilt hai aur kuch nahi.unki acchayi hai aur kuch nahi.jitna unhone mere liye kiya hai wo koi nahi karta.jis izzat ke saath wo mere saath pesh aate hai.ye to kabhi mene socha bhi nahi tha.Azka tere liye yahi bahot hai.mene ek din Jana hi tha is ghar se aur Azlan saab ki zindagi se.Allah ne humara sath yahi tak ka rakha tha.me kal Amma ya bhabhi ko bulakar wapas chali jaugi.

Next scene

Azlan lawn main chakkar laga raha hai aur kuch der baad use sitwat ke room se awaaz aati hai wo sitwat ke paas aata hai

Sitwat: Azlan

Azlan:aap soyi nahi?

Sitwat:tumhe kaise pata chala?

Azlan:aap khaas rahi thi mom.kya hua hai tabiyat thik hai aapki?

Sitwat:bilkul thik hu me.bas aaj baate jayada ki na isliye.jab se Azka aayi hai mujhe baate karne ke liye koi mil Gaya hai warna pehle is pure Ghar me me akeli thi

Azlan lays his head in Sitwat's lap.

Sitwat:Mera baccha thak gaya hai na?

Azlan:pata nahi kuch samjh nahi aa raha

Sitwat:kuch dino ke liye kahi ghum aao.Azka ko bhi accha lagega.

Azlan:......

Sitwat:Azlan humara Ghar Azka ke aane se muqammal ho gaya hai

Azlaan says nothing and Sitwat running her hands in his hair.

Azlan:mom aapko pata hai mene shadi kyu ki?

Sitwat: kyu ke me tumhre peeche padi hui thi ke shadi kar lo.

Azlan:par aapne ye nahi pucha ke mene Azka se hi kyu ki?

Sitwat:matlab?

Azlan:Nahi..aur bhi to ladkiya thi par Azka hi kyu?

Sitwat:haa kyu ke Mere bete ko wo acchi lagne lagi thi.

Azlan:AAPKO PATA HAI AAPKO KIDNEY KISNE DEE THI?

sitwat ke haath ruk jate hai.wo Azlan ko dekhne lag jati hai Azlan sitwat ki goad se apna sir uthata hai aur bed par bethta hai.

Sitwat:AZLAN.

Azlan:mene Azka ke saath bahot galat kiya mom.wo mujhe kabhi maaf nahi karegi.

Sitwat:kya kiya hai tumne? Mujhe sach sunna hai Azlan.

Azlaan closes his eyes and then opens after a while taking a deep breath.

Azlan:Mene ... Mene Azka se contract Nikaah kiya tha mom.

Sitwat: contract???

Azlan:so after that she can give you a kidney.

Sitwat ye sunkar stunned ho jati hai.Azlan Apna face neache kar leta hai.sitwat kuch nahi bolti.bas azlan ko dekhti rahti hai.

Sitwat:Azlan ye sab kar ke kaisa mehsoos kar rahe ho Azlan?

Azlan:Mujhe darr lag raha hai mom.

Sitwat:"AUR AB TUMHE AZKA SE MOHABBAT HO GAYI HAI.AB TUM NAHI CHAHTE YE NIKAAH I MEAN TO SAY ,TUMHRA SO CALLED CONTRACT KABHI KHATAM NA HO"

Azlan kuch nahi bolta.wo apni aakhe kholta hai aur sitwat ko dekhne lag jata hai.sitwat Azlan ke face ko apne haath me leti hai

Sitwat:kyu ....kyu Azlan ?kyu kiya aise tumne?

Azlan:I m sorry mom.

Sitwat:kyu azlan? kaise itna bada zulam kar bethe tum us masoom ke saath.tumhe Zara sa bhi reham nahi aaya uspar.apni maa ki mohabbat me tum itna gir gaye.

Dono ki aakho main aasoo hai aur azlan sitwat ko hug karta hai.

Azlan:MOM PLZZ USE ROK LE MAIN MARR JAUGA AGAR AZKA MERI ZINDAGI SE CHALI GAYI.KUCH NAHI BACHEGA MERI ZINDAGI ME.PLZZ USE ROK LE.WO CHALI GAYI TO MERI ZINDAGI ME KUCH NAHI BACHEGA.

sitwat sab sunkar rahi hai.Azlan ka ye love confession uska aise rona.ye sab sitwat ko heran kar raha hai.wo kuch nahi bolti.azlan use hug kiye hue hai aur jis tarah wo confess kar raha hai ye sab sitwat ke liye shocking hai kyu ke usne kabhi azlan ko aise nahi dekha.shanaya ke baad Azlan ek cold emotions less insaan ban gaya tha.

Sitwat:Azlan mujhe puri baat batao.

Azlan broke the hug and looks at her

Azlan:mom Shanaya ki wish thi ke wo Azka ko docter banaye.mene bina azka ko pata lage Shanaya ki wish puri to ki par jab Azka mujhe dudhte hue mere office aayi mene uski bahot insult ki mom.shanaya ki neki ko mene apna ehsaan ka naam dekar Azka ko itna Zaleel kiya ke wo bechari.....

Azlan ruk jata hai.

Sitwat:Azlan tumne apne gunaah me mujhe bhi shariq kar liya.wo bacchi kaise ...tumne kaise kar liya ye sab.

Azlan:mom mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha.us time aapki health mere liye sabse jayada important thi.

Sitwat:itni important ke tumne ek ladki se uski saari zindagi ki khushiya cheen li?meri zindagi bachane ke liye tum is hadd tak gir gaye ke tumne Nikaah jaise pakiza rishtey ko use kar liya.

Azlan:Mom mujhe nahi pata tha.

Sitwat:kya nahi pata tha Azlan?yahi ke tumhe ek din Azka se pyaar ho jayega.socho agar tumhe usse pyaar na hota tab bhi tum is tarah bolte.

Azlan:mom me aapse juth nahi boluga.mujhe ye baat ka ehsaas Azka se mohabbat hone se pehle ho gaya tha.me use secured dekhna chahta tha.mene usse maafi bhi maangi thi mom.phir pata nahi kaise mujhe usse mohabbat ho gayi.aur aaj wo mujhe chodkar wapas apne ghar jana chahti hai.

Sitwat:usse baat karo Azlan use batao ke tum kya soch rahe ho

Azlan:me nahi bata sakta mom wo yaqeen hi nahi karegi.mene to uske saamne divorce papers ka bhi bol diya tha aaj subah.

Sitwat:Azlan jis tarah tumne apni nafarat se use khud se dur kiya tha ab utni hi mohabbat se use apne kareeb lao.

Azlan ye sunkar sitwat ki taraf dekhta hai.

Sitwat:ha beta Aurat ka dil jitna majboot hota hai utna hi nazook bhi hota he.agar wo ek choti se baat se ruth jati hai to ek pyaar bhari nazar se Maan bhi jaati hai.

Azlan:mom wo nahi menegi peechle 5 saalo ki nafarat dee hai mene use.

Sitwat:to ab un 5 saalo jitna pyaar do use.jo jo mehrumiyat use is shaadi me dee hai ab use utna hi nawaazo.uska dil jeet lo azlan.

Azlan just stare at sitwat

Sitwat: agar me dekh sakti hu tumhri aakho me Azka ke liye itna pyaar to use kyu nahi dikha sakte.apni mohabbat aur apni Ibaadat se Azka ki mohabbat ko paa lo.

Azlan:Ibaadat ??

Sitwat: ha ibadat ,Allah ne Azka ko tumhri zindagi me bejha hai.wo koi bhi kaam bina maqsad ke nahi karta.agar bina duaa kiye Azka ko paaya hai to ab dua se use rok lo

Azlan smiled at sitwat

Azlan:Mom me Azka ko kahi jane nahi duga.aap nahi janti aapne kya Kiya hai

Azlan sitwat ko hug karne lagta hai

Sitwat:aahh bilkul nahi ,me tumhe tab maaf karugi jab tum meri Bahu ka pyaar jeet loge

Azlan:mom pata nahi darr lag raha hai wo nahi maani to.

Sitwat:ye tum keh rahe ho.azlan tum to kabhi nahi haarte.

Azlan:Dil haar betha hu mom kya karu.

Sitwat muskurati hai

Sitwat:mene kabhi nahi socha tha me ek din tumhe aise dekhugi.itne nervous to tum kabhi kisi deal par bhi nahi the.

Azlan:mom nervous kaise na hu Azka meri life ki sabse badi deal hai.

Sitwat: inshaallah mujhe pura believe hai is baar bhi jeet tumhri hogi.

Azlan kissed her hand and go to hug her.

Sitwat:mene kya kaha tha ..jab azka ka dil jeetoge tab.

Azlan smile karta hai aur sitwat bhi.

Next scene

Azka bed par bethi hui Azlan ke room ko dekh rahi hai.use wo sab moments yaad aa rahe hai jab perfume ko uthate hue use chot lagi thi.jab wo shadi ke next day is kamre me aayi thi aur azlan ne kaha tha yaha dobara mat aana.aur phir aaj ke sab moments Azlan ka azka ko uthakar yaha kamre me Lana aur bed par bithna

Azka ko kisi ke chalne ki awaaz aati hai aur wo ekdum se bed par sone ki acting karne lagti hai.Azlan room me enter hota hai aur dekhta hai ke Azka soyi hui hai.wo bina awaaz kiye apna cell aur laptop side table par rakhta hai.uski awaaz se azka Apni body ko stiff kar leti hai.Azlan notice aur wo samjh jata hai ke Azka jaag rahi hai.wo jaanbujhkar Bed ki dusri side jata hai.Azka apni eyes ko tight closed karti hai.aur Azlan use aise dekhkar muskurata hai.

Azlan:Docters bolte hai ke aakho ko jayada tightly bandh kare to sir dard start ho jata hai.Azks need nahi aa rahi to aap mujhe bata sakti hai.

Azka ye sunkar apni aakhe kholti hai aur uthkar Beth jati hai

Azka:aapko kaise pata chala ke me jaag rahi hu ?

Azlan:jaise aapko pata chala ke me room main aa raha hu.

Azka halki si smile karti hai.

Azlan:so ...

Azka:jee ?

Dono ekdusre ko dekhte hai aur phir yaha waha dekhne lag jate hai.dono ke dil me bahot si baate hai.

Azlan(him self): Relax azlan sab sahi ho jayega tumhe bas Azka ko rokna hai kisi bhi tarah se koi bhi bahane se.sab sahi hoga mom ne bola hai na.par me itna nervous kyu ho Raha hu.me aise behave karuga to Azka ko uncomfortable kar duga.

Azlan azka ko dekhkar muskurata hai

Azka(to her self) kitne khush hai ye jaise ke inko aisa kuch mil gaya ho jiski inko talash thi..zaahir hai hoge hi me jo kal jaa rahi hu.Yahi to chahte the ye.

Dono ke mind me ekdusre ki hi baate chal rahi hai.tabhi Azlan ko ek msg aata hai.wo apna cell check karta hai aur padhkar muskurata hai.

Azlan:Mil gaya.

Azka:Kya mil gaya?

Azlan:Bahana ...i mean (Coughing) ek contract.NAHI NAHI contract nahi ek deal mil gayi.

Azka:bahot Mubarak ho aapko

Azlan turn to Azka and said softly.

Azlan:KHAIR MUBAARAK...AZKA BAS DUAA KARE KE YE HAMESHA MERE PAAS MERE SAATH RAHE.

Azka:ye itni zaruri deal hai?

Azlan bed par aakar bethta hai

Azlan:bahot !! yu samjhe ke meri zindagi ki Sabse badi deal hai.agar ye mil gayi to meri zindagi sawar jayegi.

Azka ye sunkar kuch der chup rahti hai.

Azka:aapke pas itna sabkuch hai phir bhi ?

Azlan azka ki aakho me dekhta hai aur uske thode kareeb aakar bolta hai.

Azlan:Azka mere paas Jo kuch bhi hai wo iske aage kuch bhi nahi.agar mujhe apna sabkuch bhi khona pade bas isko paane ke liye to me sabkuch khone ke liye ready hu.

Azka:......

Azlan:Azka Allah tumhri sab duaa sunte hai na to Aaj mere liye ek baar aur dua maang lo

Azka:Allah Aapko wo sab de jiski aapko khawaish hai.

Dono ek dusre ki aakho main dekhte rahte hai aur phir ek saath same time par bolte hai

Both: AMEEN

Dono ki aakho me nami hai.ek ko khushi hai to dusre ko ek ajeeb si bechaini.Ek ko apne saamne apna aane wala kal nazar aa raha hai to dusri ko aisa lag raha hai jaise uska sabkuch peeche chut raha hai.

After sometimes Azka broke the eye contact.

Azka:mene sona hai .subah jaldi nikalna bhi hai

Azlan:Azka mujhe aapse ek baat karni hai

Azka:kya baat?

Azlan: divorce ke bare me.

Azka:kuch aur bhi baki hai.mera matlab hai ...bataye.

Azlan:Azka me nahi chahta aap aise is condition me ghar jaye.me chahta hu ke aap bilkul thik sehatyaat hokar jaye

Azka:Azlan saab aapka bahot shukriya par mene ek din to jana hai na Aaj jau ya kal?

Azlan:jaha itne din aap rahi hai waha ek week aur ruk jaye.atlist humare beach dosti ka rishta to ban Raha hai so ek dost hone ke naate me aapse Req kar sakta hu aap par force nahi kar sakta.

Azlan ye bolkar khamosh ho jata hai.he knows azka ab Maan jayegi.because usne aise pehle bhi kaha tha aur tab bhi azka uske saath uske ghar aa gayi thi.

Azka:thik hai me yahi hu ek hafta.

Azlan khush ho jata hai aur azka ke haatho ko apne haath me le leta hai.

Azlan:aapko pata hai mujhe aapki ye aadat sabse jayada acchi lagti hai .aap bahot jaldi maan jati hai.


Azka kuch nahi bolti wo bas azlan ko aur apne haatho ko dekhne lag jati hai.Azlan ka bilkul bhi dil nahi hai Azka ka hath chodne ka but he knows ke wo itna free nahi ho sakta.atlist not now.wo apna haath hata leta hai.

Azlan:chale ab aap aaram kare raat bahot ho gayi hai.aapne medicine lee hai apni?

Azka:nahi bas lene lagi thi

Azlan:Wait me laata hu.

Azlan azka ko medicine deta hai and than use cover karta hai.azka ko ye sab accha lag raha hai par kyu accha lag raha hai ye baat use samjh nahi aa rahi.ya phir samjh aa rahi hai par wo abhi samjhna nahi chahti.

Azlan:good night

Azlan goes and lies down on the bed and stares at Azka for a long time.He is in peace today, because the emptiness that was in his life and this room has been ended today.

Next morning

Azka soyi hui hai aur Azlan Fajar namaaz padh kar duaa kar raha hai

Azlan: Ya Allah Mene aapse hi mangna hai aur mujhe aapne hi dena hai.Allah jaise aapne Azka ko aapki rehamat banakar meri zindagi me bhejha hai waise hi use hamesha meri zindagi me rahne Dena.Mujhe is qabil bana de ke Azka ke dil me apne liye jagah bana saku.wo sab use de saku jo use pehle nahi de saka.uska saath hamesha ke liye meri zindagi me likh de.me Shanaya ke bina to jeena sikh liya par azka ke bina meri zindagi khatam ho jayegi

Azlan Namaaz ke baad quraan ki tilawat kar raha hota hai aur uski awaaz se azka ki aakh khulti hai.wo azlan ko aise quraan padhta hua dekhkar bahot khush hoti hai.wo Azlan ki awaaz me tilawat sun rahi hoti hai.

After sometime Azlan bed ke paas jata hai to dekhta hai azka usi ko dekh rahi hai.

Azlan:Aap kab uthi?

Azka:jab aap tilawat kar rahe the.mashallah bahot pyaari awaaz hai aapki.mujhe nahi pata tha ke aap Roz aise padhte hai.

Azlan wahi Azka ke paas bethta hai.

Azlan:sikh raha hu.Ye sab professor Rehmaan ki wajah se hai.

Azka: professor Rehmaan...wo jo TV me aate hai wo.

Azlan:jee

Azka:aap jante hai unko?

Azlan:me nahi Shanaya janti thi.

Azka: mujhe wo bahot pasand hai aapko pata hai me kai saalo se unke program sunti hu.

Azlan Azka ki excitement dekhkar hasta hai

Azlan:milna pasand karegi unse?

Azka:main...aap mujhe unse milayege?

Azlan:ha jab aap bole

Azka:Sacchi ...Aapko pata hai aap bahot acche hai.

Azka Azlan ko hug karti hai.Azlan ek sec ke liye use aise apne itne paas dekhkar shocked ho jata hai.Azka still hugging him.azlan jaise hi azka ko hug karne ke liye apne haath aage karta hai.Azka ekdum se peeche ho jati hai.azlan ko ekdum se khali pan mehsoos hota hai.

Azka:wo sorry me khush thi isliye..aapse aise

Azlan:aap Khushi me sabko aise gale lagati hai.

Azka:nahi wo to Main bas.

Azlan hasne lag jata hai.

Azlan:me mazaq kar raha hu aap to serious ho gayi

Azlan smile karta hai aur azka bhi

Azka:azlan saab wo Samra is waqt aa gayi hogi. mene namaaz padhni hai

Azlan:Samra to 7 baje aati haj.

Azka:accha

Azlan:Azka wo yaha hoti bhi to me use aise bula nahi skta tha..u know na wo kya sochti i mean to say.i m ur husband and ye sab to me bhi kar sakta hu

Azka:.......

Azka ye sunkar Azlan ko dekhne lag jati hai.

Azlan:aaye aap mere saath

Azlaan gives his hand to Azka and Azka looks at him first than Hasitantalay holds Azlaan's hand.Azlaan takes Azka in his arms and takes her to the washroom.Azka could not meet her eyes with him but Azlaan's eyes are on Azka's eyes. He is looking at every feature of her face.Every feature of Azka is pulling Azlan towards her.Azlan takes down Azka

Azlan:aap mujhe awaaz de Dena me bahar hi hu.aur ha apne pair par weight mat dena jayada der.

Azka kuch nahi bolti.Azlan waha se bahar chala jata hai.after sometime Azka door tak aati hai.Azlan uski awaaz se uske paas jata hai.

Azlan:aapko mene kaha tha na mujhe awaaz dena.

Azka:wo jayada pain nahi hai

Azlan:phir bhi aapko pata hai weight nahi daalna hai.chale aaye

Before Azka can say anything, he lifts her in his arms azka feel shy but Azlaan likes this closeness very much.

Suddenly Knock on the door.Azlan Azka ko bed par bithata hai.

Azlan:Aa jaye

Samra:Azlan saab wo me puch rahi thi Azka bibi uth gayi hai to unka nashta le aau?

Azlan think for something

Azlan:aap nashta lagaye hum bahar hi aa rahe hai.

Azlan Azka ko dekhta hai

Azlan:wo Aaj Sunday hai to mene socha mom ke saath I mean unko accha lagega

Samra:par aap to roz begam sahiba ke saath hi to nashta karte hai.

Azlan: ha wo wo azka aise akele yaha nashta kare accha nahi lagta na isliye tum jao

Samra:Par Azka bibi kaise chalegi.mera Matlab hai me madad kar du?

Azka:ha Samra tum bas mera haath pakad lo

Samra room me enter hone lagti hai but azlan use rok deta hai

Azlan:TUM JAO ME AZKA KO LE AAUGA.

Azlan ko aise bolta Dekh azka samjh nahi paati.usko nahi pata ke ye sab azlan jan bujh kar kar raha hai Bas uske kareeb rahne ke liye.

Samra:Accha ji

Azlan Azka ko lekar dining room me aata hai.sitwat azka ko aise azlan ke paas dekhkar bahot khush hoti hai.wo azka ke paas jati hai.

Azka:Asalam alaikum

Sitwat:Walekum Assalam beta kaisi tabiyat hai ab?

Azka:bahot behtar

Sitwat Azka ke sir par haath rakhti hai aur uske forehead par Kiss karti hai.sitwat ki aakho me aasoo aa jate hai.wo Yaad karti hai jo azlan ne use raat ko bataya tha ke use kidney Azka ne dee thi.

Sitwat:Azka beta Tum bahot acchi ho

Azka:aap ro kyu rahi hai ?aapki tabiyat thik hai?

Sitwat:ha beta me Bilkul thik hu aur tum jaisi beti ko paa kar koi kaise bura ho sakta hai.tumhra bahot shukriya jo tum mere is Battmiz ,Sang dil bete ke zindagi me aayi.

Azka ye sunkar Azlan ki taraf dekhti hai jo sitwat ko dekhkar muskura raha hai aur Azlan ko ghurti hai.Aur azka ko phir se kiss karti hai.

After some hours

Samra:begam sahiba Azka bibi se koi milne aaya hai?

Sitwat:Azka se kaun?

Samra:bilal bata raha tha koi Mrs.ANJUM aur unke kya naam bataya tha me bhul gayi

Azka:UMAIR …aao unko andar bula ko

Azlan ye sunkar Azka ki taraf dekhta hai.par puchna kuch nahi hai.Azka feel ke Azlan use hi Dekh raha hai

Azka:wo Mrs.Anjum Dr.Umar ki mother hai aur meri patient bhi hai.

Azlan:ohhh accha

Azlan relax ho jata hai tabhi Azlan ko kisi ki call aati hai aur wo apne room main chala jata hai.

IN BALCONY

Azlan:jee Saaim saab.

Saaim:Mr Azlan aapne bataya nahi wo papers ka kya karna hai.aaj Sunday tha to mene apne driver ko bhejh diya hai papers lekar

Azlan:kaunse papers ?.

Saaim: divorce papers sir

Azlan:WHATTT? AAPNE DIVORCE PAPER MERE GHAR KYU BHEJHE HAI?

Saaim:sir aapne urgent banwaye the so mujhe laga aapko zarurat hogi

Azlan: AAPKO KISNE IJAZAT DEE MERE BEHALF ME SOCHNE KI?MUJHE UN DIVORCE PAPERS KI ZARURAT NAHI HAI APNE DRIVER KO PHONE KARE MSG KARE DO WHATEVER U WANT BUT ABHI KE ABHI USE WAPAS BULAYE.AND JUST THROWN THEM IN DUSTBIN.

Saaim: I am sorry sir mujhe na...

Azlan cut the call

Azlan: idiot accha hua driver ke aane se pehle mene Saaim ko mana kar diya warna Azka dekh leti to.mera use yaha rokne ka saara plan kharaab ho jata.

azlan gusse me room me jata hai.par koi neache parking area me hai jisne Azlan ki ye saari baate sun Lee hai.UMAIR yes umair ne sab sun liya hai and now he enter the house .

IN THE DRAWING ROOM

azka mrs.Anjum se milti hai

Azka: Asalam alaikum aunty kaisi hai aap?

Anjum: walekum assalam Azka tum pehle mujhe batao kaisi ho ab tum.mujhe Umair ne bataya ke tumhre saath kal haadsa ho gaya tha.

azlan enter the room.wo aur azka dono pareshaan hote hai ke kahi sitwat ko pata na chal jaye Abid ka.

Sitwat:HAADSA???

Anjum: jee me to sunkar bahot darr gayi thi Allah ne bacha liya azka ko warna wo kuch bhi kar sakta tha.

Sitwat: kaun??

Azka aur azlan ekdusre ki shaqal dekhte hai.Tabhi ek awaaz aati hai.

AUTO WALA ...DR.AZKA KA ACCIDENT AUTO WALE KI BEWAKUFI KI WAJAH SE HUA THA NA.

Everyone looks to the door side where Umair is standing.he has a bouquet in his hand.Umair enters the room, he comes to Azlaan, he stops for a moment and look at him for a sec.Both give cold stare to each other. And then Umair goes to Azka who is sitting on the sofa right next to Azlaan.he leans towards Azka and with a smile gives the bouquet to her

Umair: Hiii Azka kaisi hai ab aap I hope u feel good after see this flowers.

Azka bhi smile karti hai aur Azlan ye sab dekh raha hai.

Azka:thank you so much aur Alhamdulillah me bahot behatar hu.

Umair:That's good.

umair apni mom ke paas jata hai.

Umair: auto wale ki wajah se hua tha na accident mom.

Umair ki mom samjh jati hai ke sitwat ko sach nahi pata.

Anjum:jee bas aajkal jise dekhi jaldi hoti hai .

Sitwat: ha sahi kaha aapne..are aap log bethiye na.

Anjum:Thank you.

Azka umair ki taraf dekhti hai jaise ke use Thank you bol rahi ho nazro se.umair azka ko dekhkar smile karta hai.Azlan umair ko ghoorne lag jata hai.uska bas nahi chal raha wo umair ko ghar se nikaal de.

End of part 10

Do comments and batao umair ki entry kaisi lagi .kya aap sabko bhi Azlan ki tarah jalan Hui ya gussa aaya..ya phir meri tarah enjoy Kiya smiley37

So finally story moved at last and azlaan told his mother the truth...i just love Sitwat as a supportive mother and saas❤️

Love seeing Azlaans tactics to keep azka close😆

ab dekhte hain divorce papers ka kya banta hai

I am liking Umair so far...but hope he doesnt turn irritating

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@kamlesh


Yaar bata to deti ke comment kar diya hai🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: la_Reine

Hayeee i loved how he took care of her in the hospital...and when he put ring on her finger

but car mein se carry kar ke ghar laana kuch ziada nahi hogaya? i mean aisa PDA pak mein hota hai kya? Log joote nahi maarte?🤣

Now lets see how he will convince Azka of his love and gain her trust❤️

Pyaar ho Gaya hai azlan ko ab wo care bhi karega and ring bhi khud pehna raha hai😳abe Yaar ye Pakistan hai Afghanistan nahi 🤣tu abhi to aakar gayi hai Dekha nahi aur waise bhi azlan apne ghar ke gate se utha raha tha so it’s not a big deal

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Originally posted by: swetha10

Wonderful update..

Jealous Azlaan was cute..

Loved the bathroom scene..

finally Azka wears Azlaan’s choice..

Enjoyed the update.. thank you

Cheers


Yes azlan ko ab jealousy start ho gayi hai..azlan ka bathroom act se not only azka sab hi impressed ho Gaye hai😆Thank you for liking my work ❤️

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Originally posted by: la_Reine

So finally story moved at last and azlaan told his mother the truth...i just love Sitwat as a supportive mother and saas❤️

Love seeing Azlaans tactics to keep azka close😆

ab dekhte hain divorce papers ka kya banta hai

I am liking Umair so far...but hope he doesnt turn irritating


Azlan darr jo Gaya hai ab usne sitwat ko sab batana hi tha 😊

Azlan ke bahane azka ko goad me uthane ke🤣

Umair abhi to sahi hai aage ka pata nahi 😆

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Originally posted by: kamleshmehra

Lovely update❤️It was amazing...the next step for both of them❤️glad aapne kar diya comment 🤣aapko yaad tha lol

Lo ji Azlan ko pta chal gya ki Umair usko pick karta tha...jealousy mode onus him yahi to tum chahti thi azlan jal jal ke pagal ho jaye😆aur ye anything for you kya hota hai😡...Umair ko bolo ye sirf Azlan keh sakta hai❤️ aur ye Azlan ka bas nahi chal raha Varna Umair ki ankhein nikal leta Azka ko dekhne ke zurm mujhe to tumhra bhi aisa hi kuch lag raha hai 🤣umair tum ko bhi koi khaas nahi pasand aaya mei😆 and he is quoting that he will take care of her as she is his wife😆my poor jealous Azlan😆

Azlan wants to pick her up again❤️...aur ye bhi chahta hai Umair Azka se baat na kar paye ..and bloody umair Azlan ko chida raha umair ki wo smile 😆jab wo azlan ko dekhkar deta haihai😡...Azlan bullet ki speed mei bahar dar ke maarekabhi usne nahi socha hoga ek driver usko aise bhagayega😆😆

Azlan ko un logo ka aana pasand nahi aaya ..means Umair ka aana😆 and bloody bouquetare Itna to pyaara tha bouquet 🤣 😡...

I liked Azka and kanwal's banter..how easily she was having fun with her bhabhi...and Azlan looking at her smiling figure and thinking about their own marriage that he did not give her wifely rights..sach baat hai...but now he will ..yes now he realised usne azka ko ye sab nahi diya

Azlan helping her....caring so much...wrapping her dressing...and Azka ke emotions at that time and Azka ne phle vo dress choose nahi kiya jo Azlan ne kaha...it was okay..she is still trying to digest so many things...ha azka liye aise pyaar azlan saab dekhna tuff ho raha hai but usko aadat pad jayegi

Azka was wearing the bathrobe and still saying andar na aana😆sharmili hai mere jaisi 🤣tum par nahi gayi But jab Azlan aaya then my god...you know nazaro mei respect aur bhi badh gayi..just because he is my azlan tumhra hota to gir jata nazro se aur sofe se bhi🤣he respected her enough to keep his eyes closed because he understands her discomfort.. and takes her to the bed and covers her first and then asks for her permission to open his eyes.haaye kitna accha hai na humara Azlan ❤️. and Azka' s reactions..thinking... tears... the respect and admiration she felt was awesome. he really deserves all of that... And the icing on the cake was she finally chooses the dress he chose earlier for her...Azlan smiles finally❤️...my heart❤️azka ko clean bold kar diya Azlan ne aur tumko bhi lol

Overall I like the entire update❤️.. you know I always like jealous Azlan... The emotions they both are feeling and the ease now they are getting in to is so good to read...Azka is now starting to fall for him...she will realise it soon and Azlan is gold..diamond ..everything now..maza aayega aage tumko to pata hai mera

So waiting for the next update...keep writing dear..it's too good to read about our Azkaan❤️thank you so much for this lovely long comment love u ❤️

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Jealous Azlan❤️

Ji Janab maine toh nikal leni thi ankehin😆 Umair ko kaho Azka ko nahi dekhne ka...

And ji nahi vo nazro se nahi girta .. absolutely not...chahe vo kuch bhi karta....and what do you mean sofe se gir jata...vo girta bhi toh yahan nahi ...you know secret mei girta and only tumhe pta chalta mere alawa😆😆

Well he is very sweet and gentlemen here...Azka is falling for him.... waiting for the next update...I always enjoy your writing❤️ toh update dedo ab

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Part 12

Azka does not say anything and Azlan gives her clothes and goes out.Azka keeps looking at the door for a long time, then starts looking at the white dress and smiles.

Azlan pov

Azlan:Azka ki aakho me jo mujhe abhi nazar aaya kya wo sach tha ya mera wahem..? Kya me azka ke dil me apni jagah bana paya hu..ya aaj bhi me wahi hu jaha aaj se 5 saal pehle tha..ye 5 saal ki duriya me 5 dino me nahi teh kar sakta.me janta hu aur waise bhi jaisa mera behaviour tha past main ,me azka se ye expect kar hi nahi sakta ke wo mujhe…

Tabhi Kanwal aur Khalid Azka se milne aate hai.

Azlan: Asalam alaikum Aap log aaye na.

Khalid: Walekum assalam

Kanwal bahot ajeeb sa mehsoos karti hai as usual azlan ki ye new side use still digest nahi ho rahi.

Azlan:bhabhi aaye na bethe.

Kanwal:wo Azka kaisi hai ab?

Azlan:jee Allah ka bahot sukar hai.

Kanwal:wo kamre me hai.

Azlan:aap bethe me use lekar aata hu.

Kanwal:AAP..nahi nahi .me aati hu.

Azlan door pehle knock karta hai.

Azka:aa jaye.

Azlan:aap jaye me bahar hi hu Khalid Bhai ke paas.

Kanwal again shocked hoti hai.wo room me jati hai.

Azka: ASALAM ALAIKUM bhabhi.

Kanwal: walekum assalam mashaallah aaj to bahot fresh nazar aa rahi hai.

Azka:accha bas abhi change kiya.bacche nahi aaye?

Kanwal:nahi bas me aur Khalid hai.

Azka:wo waha bahar akele bethe hai.aap chale mujhe lekar unke paas.

Kanwal:nahi wo azlan saab hai unke paas.

Azka ye sunkar khush hoti hai.

Azka:accha

Kanwal:ha wo khud mujhe bole ke me tumhre paas aa jau wo Khalid ke paas bethte hai.

Azka:chale acchi baat hai.

After sometime Azlan room me azka ko bahar lene ke liye aata hai.use Kanwal ki awaaz aati hai to wo wahi ruk jata hai.

Kanwal:Khalid bahot pareshan the Tera sunkar.wo Amma ka bhi itna hi khyaal rakhte hai.

Azka:aap bahot lucky hai bhabhi.me jab bhi aap dono ko ek saath dekhti hu dil khush ho jata hai.itna pyaar karne wala shohar naseeb walo ko milta hai.

Azlan ye sab sun raha hai.use azka ki baat me uska dard mehsoos hota hai

Kanwal:azka tu yahi hai kal se.

Azka:jee kal se yahi hu.

Kanwal:Aur azlan saab

Azka:aaahh bhabhi wo ..wo bhi.

Kanwal: kyaa tere saath ek hi kamre me?

Azka:jee

Kanwal:sote kaha hai?

Azka:bhabhi ye kaisa sawaal hai ?

Kanwal:Azka mera wo matlab nahi tha.par Azka unke liye ye koi badi baat nahi hogi par tere liye hai.

Azka:kya matlab hai is baat se?

Kanwal:azka wo to tujhe talaq dekar apni purani zindagi me wapas chale jayege Mard hai .par Tera kya..Teri zindagi bhi to hai..kal ko teri shadi honi hai.agar tere hone wale shohar ko tujh par ya tere qirdaar ko lekar Shaq hua to.

Azlan ko ye sunkar bahot bura lagta hai.wo Azka ke jawaab ka wait kar Raha hai.

Azka:bhabhi mujhe pata hai aap kya kehna chahti hai par sach to yahi hai na ke mere talaq ke baad sabki soch to yahi hogi jo aap bol rahi hai.kaun yaqeen karega ke mere aur Azlan saab ke beach koi rishta nahi tha.

Kanwal:tune kyu kiya azka ye?.kyu apni puri zindagi barbaad kar dee.wo bhi us shakhs ke liye jo ke samjh hi nahi saka ke tune kitni badi qurbani dee he.

Azka:ehsaan the bhabhi utaarne to the na.

Azlan ye sunkar bahot bura mehsoos karta hai.

Azka:chode ye sab.koi aur baat kare.

Kanwal:meri duaa hai azka tujhe ek bahot pyaar karne wala shohar mile..dekhna tujhe milega.

Azka:mujhe meri kismat par yaqeen nahi raha bhabhi.mene ab sab Allah par chod diya hai.

Azlan ko ye sab sunkar accha nahi lagta.use Azka ke dard ka ehsaas hota hai.wo dard jiski wajah wo khud hai.

Kanwal:sab accha hoga dekhna Allah ne tere naseeb me bahot si khushiya likhi hai bas wo tere darwaaze par khadi hai.

Tabhi Azlan darwaaze par knock karta hai.Azka aur kanwal dono use dekhte hai.Azka ekdum se apna face neache kar leti hai she don't want ke azlan use aise kamzor dekhe.

Azlan:Wo Khalid Bhai ne aapse milna tha.

Kanwal:jee me azka ko lekar aati hu

Azlan waha se chala jata hai but uske dil se azka aur kanwal ki baate nahi jaa rahi.Azka Kanwal ke saath bahar aati hai

Azka: Asalam alaikum Khalid Bhai

Khalid: walekum assalam Azka beta kaisi ho?

Azka:bahot behtar.

Khalid: mashaallah bas jaldi jaldi thik ho jao.

Azka:jee ek do din ki baat hai bas.

Khalid:Azlan bahot pareshan hai aapke liye.mene dekha hai iski aakho me.

Azka Azlan ki taraf dekhti hai than Khalid ki taraf aur smile karti hai

Azlan:kaise nahi pareshan hu after all meri zindagi me Mom aur azka ke alawa hai kaun? Aur waise bhi as a husband ye meri duty hai ke me azka ka har tarah se khayaal rakhu.Azka is se bhi jayada deserve karti hai.

Azka ye sab sunkar nervous feel karti hai wo Kanwal ko dekhne lag jati hai.kanwal bhi ye sunkar heran hoti hai.

Khalid:bahot Khushi hui aapse milkar.me sach kahu nikaah ke time dil me darr aaya tha aapse milkar.par ab saare darr dur ho gaye. azka Allah tumhe aur Azlan dono ko bahot khushiya de.

Azlan azka ki taraf dekhta hai aur muskura kar kehta hai.

Azlan:Ameen

Kanwal:chale hum ab chalte hai

Azlan:are aise kaise raat ka khana khaa kar jayiye ga

Kanwal:nahi itna sab to liya humne.bas ab ijazat de

Khalid:Azka kisi din Azlan ko lekar aana humari taraf.

Azka:jee ..

Azlan: inshallah hum bahot jald aayege.

Kanwal aur khalid dono chale jate hai.Azka waha bethi hui Azlan ko hi dekhti rahti hai.

Azlan:aapki bhabhi mashaallah se bahot khush hai apni nayi zindagi me.

Azka:jee Allah ka bahot shukar hai.khalid bhai bahot acche hai.Bhabhi pehle dusri shadi ke liye mana kar rahi thi par Amma ne bilkul sahi faisla liya tha bhabhi ke liye.

Azlan:ha zindagi ke kuch faisle hume pehle galat lagte hai par kuch waqt ke baad hume ehsaas hota hai ke wo humare liye kitne sahi hai.

Azka kuch nahi bolti wo kuch sochne lag jati hai

Azlan:Azka aap bore to nahi ho rahi.

Azka:nahi kyu?

Azlan:kyu ke me bore ho Raha hu aap baat hi nahi kar rahi

Azka:sorry me bas kuch nahi aise hi kuch soch rahi thi.

Azlan:kya ?

Azka:kuch nahi.

Azlan kuch nahi bolta wo janta hai ke azka nahi batayegi.

Azlan:chale aaj lunch bahar karte hai.

Azka:hum....

Azlan:ha kyu ?

Azka:nahi mera matlab tha aapki mom aa jaye phir unko bhi saath.

Azlan:unko bahar ka khana abhi allowed nahi hai doctor AZKA AZLAN AHAMAD.

Azlan se ye sunkar Azka use dekhne lag jati hai.but azlan bilkul bhi hesitate nahi hai ye bolkar.

Azlan:ab chale??

Azka node

Azlan:come

Azlan use apna haath deta hai aur phir Azka ko waist se pakad ke chalne lagta hai Azka thoda sa uncomfortable ho rahi hai b/c aaj se pehle kisi ne use aise nahi pakada tha azlan notice this aur wo usse baate karne lag jata hai.

Azlan:aapki favourite ice cream kaunsi hai?

Azka: favourite aise koi bhi nahi hai par ha mujhe PISTA flavour nahi pasand.

Azlan:kyu ?

Azka:bas nahi pasand.

Azlan:accha accha me samjh gaya bas nahi pasand.

Azlan muskurata hai aur azka bhi

Azka:aapne mom ko bata diya ke hum ghar nahi he.

Azlan:nahi kyu?

Azka: nahi wo aise hi mujhe aadat hai suru se kabhi bhi bahar jati thi to Amma ko batakar jana

Azlan:don't worry guard hai na wo bata dega..aur waise bhi aap mere saath hai so wo kyu pareshan hogi.

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Azlan Azka dono lunch kar rahe hai.Azlan baar baar azka ki taraf dekh raha hai but azka ka face neache hai.

Azlan:Azka can I ask u something?

Azka:jee puche.

Azlan:me aise aapko achanak yaha le aaya aapko bura to nahi laga?

Azka:aap ye sawaal kyu kar rahe hai?

Azlan:i mean to say kahi aisa..i mean.mera aise aapko lunch par Lana pasand na aaya ho

Azka:Azlan saab mere aur aapke beach aajtak jitni bhi mulaqate hui hai us me ,me kai baar aappar gussa Hui hu..naraaz Hui hu ..sharminda Hui hu par uncomfortable kabhi nahi hui.

Azlan:isse ye pata chal raha hai ke aap siwaay khushi ke sabkuch hui hai.


Azlan sad si smile deta hai

Azka:aapko pata hai me jab kabhi aapki personality ko lekar sochti hu to aap mujhe har baar alag nazar aate hai

Azlan:kya matlab me samjha nahi?

Azka:wo ye ke aap ka kuch pata nahi chalta aap kabhi bina baat ke gussa kar jate the to agale hi pal zarurat se jayada caring.

Azlan:dimaag jo kharaab tha

Azka hasti hai.

Azlan:to aapko lagta hai me unpredictable hu?

Azka:me ye kaise bata sakti me aapko janti hi kitna hu.

Azlan ek sec ke liye rukta hai and than azka ki taraf bend hota hai aur uski aakho me dekhkar bolta hai

Azlan:To aap mujhe jaane na kisne roka hai?

Azka ye sunkar use dekhne lag jati hai.aur azlan hasne lag jata hai

Azlan:kya hua?

Azka:kuch nahi aap aise khush Raha kare acche lagte hai.

Azlan:kisko aapko?

Azka:Mariam …..

Azlan confused ho jata hai

Azlan:kaun Mariam?

Azka:wo aunty jo ghar aayi thi mera rishta lekar

Azlan:WO HARRIS Ki mom

Azka:AAHISTAA..….peeche na dekhiyega wo yahi dekh rahi hai.

azlan:me kyu dekhuga usko?

Azka:par wo aapko hi dekh rahi hai seriously

Azka hasti hai ye bolkar aur azlan usko ghoorne lagta hai.

Mariam:Hey azka kaisi ho aap?

Azka: Asalam alaikum me thik aap kaisi hai?

Mariam:sab thik hai aap log bhi lunch karne aye hai.

Azka:jee

Mariam:well us din jo kuch bhi hua i m really really sorry par sach me hume nahi pata tha.

Azlan:it's ok misunderstanding thi aap logo ki clear kar dee mene

Mariam:aap ko tab bahot gussa aa gaya tha.

Azlan: ofcourse meri biwi ke liye koi rishta lekar aayega to me uska ISTAQBAAL to nahi karuga.

Azka Azlan ko dekhne lag jati hai,aur Mariam ko bhi.

Mariam:ok than have a nice day Allah hafiz.

Azka: Allah hafiz.

Mariam waha se chali jati hai.

Azka:waise aap rude hue bina bhi bat kar sakte the.

Azlan:R U serious ?

Azka:wo aapse kitne pyaar se baat kar rahi thi.

Azlan:Aur aapko usse koi problem nahi hui.

Azka:mujhe kyu problem hogi?

Azlan kuch der ke liye azka ko dekhta rahta hai.Azka pehle kuch nahi bolti but phir Azlan ka aise dekhte rahne se wo apni aakhe jhuka leti hai.Azlan still use dekh raha hai aur phir wo Mariam ko awaaz deta hai.

Azlan:Mariam

Azka Apna face upar kar ke azlan ki taraf dekhti hai.Azlan Azka ko dekhte hue apni chair se uthta hai aur Mariam ke paas jata hai.azka wahi bethi hui hai.Azlan Mariam se baate kar raha hai aur uska dyan azka par hi hai.Azka ko distance hone ki wajah se pata nahi chal raha ke wo kya baat kar rahe.

Azlan:aapki job ka kya bana?.

Mariam:wo bas Interviews diye hai ek do jagah but kuch samjh nahi aa raha.

Azlan:good all the best.

Azlan smile karta hai and Mariam bhi

Azlan:koi bhi kaam ho aap batana

Mariam: Awww thank you so much Azlan.

Azka dekh rahi hai ke Azlan smile karte hue baat kar raha hai.wo unki side nahi dekhna chahti but phir bhi kuch kuch der baad wo wahi dekh rahi hai.azlan notice this and he smirk

Azlan:ok take care

Wo waha se wapas aa jata hai aur Aise behave karta hai jaise wo bahot khush hai

Azka:kya hua?

Azlan:nothing u r right Mariam bahot sweet hai.me aise hi rude baat kar raha tha.

Azka kuch nahi bolti aur chupchaap khana khane lag jati hai.Azlan azka ko aise dekhkar enjoy karta hai.

After lunch both are in car Azka notice karti hai ke Azlan ghar ki taraf nahi jaa raha

Azka:hum ghar jaa rahe hai?

Azlan:nahi

Azka:kyu?

Azlan:bore ho gayi hai mere saath

Azka:aisi baat nahi hai.

Azka window ki taraf dekhne lag jati hai.azlan samjh jata hai ke wo baat nahi karna chahti.after a minute

Azka:aap Mariam se kya baat kar rahe the?

Azlan(with smile):as kuch khaas nahi kyu?

Azka:nahi aise hi bas.

Azlan:aapko mera usse baat karna accha nahi laga?

Azka:nahi to aisa nahi hai.mujhe kyu bura lagega aap jisse marzi baat kare.

Azlan:ha wahi to aapko kyu problem hogi

Azka:matlab?

Azlan:matlab phir kabhi!!! abhi mene ice cream khani hai

Azlan stop the car

Azlan:chale aaye.

Azka:mujhe bhi aana hai?

Azlan:haa to kya me akela ice cream khata hua accha laguga.

Azka:nahi mera matlab tha ke aap jo marzi le aaye.

Azlan:aur meri pasand aapko acchi nahi lagi to

Azka:koi baat nahi me adjust kar lugi

Azlan:jaise abhi kar rahi hai.

Dono ek dusre ko dekhte hai.Azlan kuch nahi bolta aur chala jata hai

After sometime

Azlan:here u go me Chocolate Chip for u and brownie with coffee and vannila for me.

Azlan azka ko dono icecream deta hai aur drive karne lag jata hai.

Azka:aap kahi gaadi rok de na, drive karte hue ice cream kaise khayege?

Azlan:kyu aap hai na aap khila de apne haatho se

Azka ye sunkar azlan ko dekhne lag jati hai with wide eyes Azlan hasne lag jata hai

Azlan:relax me mazaq kar raha tha.bas kuch der meri ice cream pakad to sakti hai na.

Azka kuch nahi bolti aur azlan drive karne lag jata hai.after sometime azlan gaadi rokta hai aur azka ko waha lekar aata hai jaha usne Shanaya ko shaadi ka bola tha

Azka:ye kaunsi jagah hai?

Azlan:hum hamesha yaha aaya karte the

Azka:Hum???

Azlan:Shanaya aur me.

Azka kuch nahi bolti wo dekhti hai ke azlan kuch soch raha hai.wo samjh nahi paati wo kya soch raha hai.sayad wo udas hai ya phir kuch aur baat hai.wo janna chahti hai ke azlan kya soch raha hai

Azlan:aapko koi problem to nahi hogi na .i mean bas thodi si walk hai

Azka:aap hai na saath phir kaisi problem

Azlan ye sunkar azka ki aakho me dekhne lag jata hai.he feel happy.azlan azka ke saath us jagah aata hai aur azka ko bithata hai.dono ice cream khaa rahe hai.

Azlan:ice cream kaisi lagi..?

Azka:bahot acchi.aapko ye pasand hai?

Azlan:nahi

Azka:par aapne to kaha tha ke aapko jo pasand hai wo khilayege.

Azlan:ha kaha tha but mujhe laga aapko pasand na aayi to.i don't want ke aap mere saath adjust kare.

Azka Azlan ki taraf dekhti hai.

Azka:aur aisa kyu laga aapko?

Azlan:pata nahi may be aapko meri choice na pasand aati. mujhe laga aap mere saath comfortable nahi hai

Azka:aisa aapko isliye laga kyu ke me ice cream parlor nahi aayi ?

Azlan kuch nahi bolta azka use dekhkar smile karti hai.

Azka:agar me aapke saath comfortable nahi hoti to yaha bhi nahi aati.jab ke yaha dur dur tak hum dono ke alawa koi nahi hai.mujhe bas jayada logo me Jane ki aadat nahi hai mujhe nahi pasand sab mujhe dekhe aur...

Azka ruk jati hai.

Azlan:aur ???

Azka:aap mujhe aise haath pakad kar le jate to log aur jayada dekhne lag jate.

Azlan hasne lag jata hai.

Azlan: seriously Azka...aap is wajah se nahi aayi.aap mujhe bol sakti thi.

Azka:mujhe Darr laga pata nahi aap kya sochte

Azlan:aapke darr ki wajah se aapne itni acchi ice cream khane ka chance Gawaa diya.

Azlan phir se hasne lag jata hai azka use kuch der dekhti rahti hai.aur phir wo uske haath se uski ice cream le leti hai.

Azka:jee nahi me abhi bhi khaa sakti hu.ye dekhe

Azka azlan ki ice cream taste karti hai.azlan ne socha nahi tha ke azka aise uski ice cream taste karegi.he was surprised plus happy.

Azka:hhmmmmm ye to bahot tasty hai.chale aap ye saari mujhe de de.

Azlan:Azka

Azka:kya…ap ye meri wali lele.

Azlan happily take it her ice cream aur wo khane lagta hai.wo soch raha hai ke usne kuch to azka ke dil me jagah banayi hai.



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Part 9 78

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Part 11


Anjum: mashaallah se aapka Ghar bahot pyaara hai.

Sitwat: Thank you aap logo ko humare Ghar ka address dudhne me problem to nahi hui.

Anjum:bilkul nahi Umair ko ghar ka pata tha.wo Azka ko lene jo aata tha

Sitwat:Main samjhi nahi.

Azka:wo mom Mrs Anjum ke liye daily hospital aana na pade isliye Me inke Ghar jati thi check up ke liye

Sitwat:ohh accha

Azlan(to him self):to us din jo azka ko car me lene aaya tha wo Umair tha.

Umair:ye to Azka ki kindness hai jo wo mom ke liye Ghar aa jati thi

Azka:nahi aisi koi baat nahi aap log mere liye meri family hi hai. Dr.Umar aur aap sab ne mujhe mere medical time me bahot support Kiya tha.sometimes pick and drop bhi karte the aap dono.

Umair: Azka anything for u.

Azlan ka dyaan umair par hi hai wo Azka ko har thodi thodi der baad dekh raha hai Azlan ko umair ka aise behave karna bilkul bhi accha nahi lag raha.wo use abhi isi waqt apne ghar se nikaalna chahta hai par Azka ki wajah se wo khamosh hai

Anjum:Azka beta ab tumne apna bahot dyaan rakhna hai.jaise hum sabka rakhti ho ab apna bhi rakho.

Sitwat:jee jee me bhi ise yahi bol rahi thi aap logo ke aane se pehle.

Umair:jayada walk na kariyega aap

Azka:jee me dyaan rakh..

Azlan:u don't need to worry about her.main hu na Azka ki care karne ke liye.u know after all she is my wife.

Umair Azlan ko aise uski aur azka ki baat me interfere karta dekhkar use dekhta hai.Azlan use ek Angry look deta hai.umair kuch der azlan ko dekhta hai and than use dekhkar smile karta hai.

Anjum: Mashaallah ye to bahot acchi baat hai.Azka mujhe bahot Khushi hui tumhri family se milkar.

Azka:Thank you aunty.

Sitwat:humari azka bhi to itni acchi hai.mere azlan ne koi neki ki hogi jiski wajah se Azka uski zindagi me aayi.

Azka nervously smile karti hai.Azlan use dekhe Jaa Raha hai aur umair Azlan aur azka dono ko.

Umair:Bilkul me aapki baat se totally agree karta hu.Azka jaisi ladki kisi neki ki wajah se hi mil sakti hai Azlan ko

Umair again given smile to azlan.

Azka:Aunty aapki reports aaj aani hai na?

Umair:wo me collect kar luga u don't worry I will send u.

Azka:thik hai

Azlan:Azka i think ab tumhe rest karna chahiye.

Azlan uske paas use uthane ke liye aata hai tabhi use azka rok deti hai.

Azka:....ruke...

Azka ko azlan ki ye harqat samjh nahi aati ..kaise wo kisi ke bhi saamne use utha sakta hai.

Azka:mujhe yaha accha lag raha hai.me rest hi to kar rahi hu kal se.

Azlan disappointed hota hai.but wo azka ke paas jakar Beth jata hai.

Umair:ohh Azka I forgot me parking me tha tab mene dekha aapke ghar ke bahar koi aaya hai.

Azka:kaun??

Umair azlan ki taraf dekhta hai aur bolta hai

Umair:koi driver hai sayad

Azlan:WHATT ??? me abhi aaya

Azlan ye sunkar foran bahar chala jata hai.Umair Azka ko dekhkar smile karta hai.

Sitwat:Aur beta umair aap bhi doctor ho?

Umair:nahi aunty ghar me ek docter hi bahot hai kyu mom.me dad ke saath business me hu

Sitwat:accha mashaallah

Next scene

Azlan gate ke paas jata hai but use waha koi nazar nahi aata.

Azlan:Bilal

Bilal:jee azlan saab .

Azlan:koi aaya tha yaha?

Bilaal:nahi saab koi nahi aaya

Azlan:r u sure ? Koi driver ya koi aur?

Bilaal:nahi saab koi nahi aaya..agar aata to me aapko call kar ke inform karta

Azlan:accha thik hai tum jao

Azlan wapas aa raha hota hai aur use umair nazar aata hai.jo apni mom ko gaadi me betha Raha hai umair Azlan ki taraf dekhta hai.Azlan use ignore kar ke wapas ghar chala jata hai.

Azka aur sitwat dono azlan ko dekhte hai

Sitwat:kaun tha beta.

Azlan:koi nahi

Sitwat:phir tum aise itni jaldi me kyu Gaye?

Azlan:nothing bas aise hi.

Sitwat:tum bhi ajeeb ho azlan.mujhe laga pata nahi kya ho gaya hai.is wajah se mene guests ko bhi rukne ko nahi kaha.

Azlan:accha kiya kaun aise aa jata hai subah subah.

Azlan gusse me bol deta hai but than he realised ke azka wahi bethi hai.

Azlan:i mean to say shaam ko bhi aa sakte the.

Sitwat:azlan tumhe to kisi se milna julna pasand nahi hai.wo yaha tumse nahi Azka se milne aaye the.mujhe to bahot pasand aaye wo log azka.

Azka smile karti hai

Sitwat:chalo bahot der ho gayi hai tum jao rest Karo Azlan Azka ko room me le jao

Azlan:jee mom

Azlan azka ko utha be lagta hai.

Azka:wo ek minute me ye bouquet pakad lu

Azlan ko umair yaad aata hai aur usko gussa aata hai but wo kuch nahi bolta.Azlan Azka ko lekar room me aata hai.

Azka:Azlan saab

Azlan:jee

Azka:I m sorry

Azlan:wo kis liye

Azka:wo mujhe nahi pata tha ke Anjum aunty aise yaha aapke ghar aa jayegi.agar mujhe pata hota to me unko koi bhi bahana banakar rok deti.

Azlan:Azka aap aisa kyu soch rahi hai ke mujhe unka yaha aana bura laga hai..me to bas ye bol raha tha ke wo shaam ko bhi aa sakte the.me aapke aaram ke liye bol raha tha.aap jise chaahe jab chaahe yaha bula sakti hai.mujhe koi problem nahi hai

Azka:Thank you.

Azlan smile karta hai aur sofe par jakar apne e-mail check karne lag jata hai.uske mind me umair chal raha hota hai.usko umair ka behaviour bahot weird lag raha tha.

Azka flowers ko Dekh rahi hoti hai.wo unhe Dekh dekhkar muskura rahi hai.

Azlan:aapko flowers pasand hai.

Azka:kisko nahi pasand hoge

Azlan:mujhe

Azka ye sunkar heran hoti hai

Azka:aap mazaq kar rahe hai na?

Azlan:nahi

Azka:kyu ye to itne khubsurat hote hai.

Azlan:har khubsurat cheez aapko khubsurat yaade bhi de ye zaruri nahi.

Azka Azlan ki baat sunkar uski taraf dekhti hai.Azlan kisi soch me gum hota hai.azka kuch bole usse pehle azka ko Kanwal ki call aati hai

Azka: Asalam alaikum bhabhi

Kanwal: walekum assalam kaisi hai Azka?

Azka: Allah ka shukar hai..aap batao teeno bacchiya kaisi hai aur Khalid Bhai?

Kanwal:sab acche hai mashaallah se Khalid bhi tera puch rahe the bol rahe the ke tere ghar chale par mene koi jawaab nahi diya.tu janti hai na Azlan saab ka koi bharosa nahi hai

Azka:aap unhe le aaye na yaha.aise accha nahi lagta..wo kya sochege.

Kanwal:wo kuch nahi sochte tu fiqar na kar bahot acche hai wo.

Azka:acche ya bahot acche.

Kanwal:tu phir suru ho gayi.baaz aa ja azka

Azka:haha are me kyu baaz aau ..aap bataye mene koi galat baat kahi hai.

Azlan Azka ki baate sun raha hai.usne pehli baar Azka ko aise kisi se baat karte hue dekha hai

Kanwal:nahi baat to tune bilkul sahi boli hai pata hai aaj bhi hum sab Khalid ke saath bahar ice cream khane gaye hue the.wo bahot khyaal rakhte hai humara.

Azka: mashaallah nazar na lage aap dono ke pyaar ko. Bahot naseeb wali hai aap.

Kanwal:ha wo to hai.par ab bas ye sab baate

Azka hasne lag jati hai and azlan ka dyaan uski taraf hi hai.use smile karti hui azka bahot acchi lagti hai but wo uski taraf jayada der nahi dekhta kyu ke wo nahi chahta Azka use dekhkar reserved ho jaye .use ye care free azka acchi lag rahi hai.

Azka:are ye kya baat Hui ek to aapko itne acche shohar mile hai ab hum unki taarif bhi na kare.isko nashukri kahte hai bhabhi.Ap soch nahi sakti me kitni khush hu aapko aise dekh kar

Azlan ye sab sunkar Khud ke behaviour ke baare me sochne lag jata hai.he realised ke usne Azka ko kabhi bhi wife wali izzat ya phir pyaar nahi diya

Kanwal: mujhe pata hai azka..accha chal phir me kuch der me aati hu unke saath.

Azka:thik hai me intzaar karugi.

Azka phone cut karti hai wo smile kar rahi hoti hai.wo ekdum se face side par karti hai to use azlan nazar aata hai jo use hi dekh raha hai.azka ek dum se apne face expression change kar leti hai.

Azka:Azlan saab

Azlan: jee

Azka:wo Khalid Bhai Ghar aana chaah rahe the ..bhabhi ne wahi batane ke liye call ki thi.

Azlan:ye to acchi baat hai.so kab aa rahe hai wo log

Azka:bas kuch der me.

Azlan:good.

Azlan laptop par kaam karne lag jata hai wo kuch sec ke baad dekhta hai azka use dekh rahi thi.

Azlan:aapko kuch kehna hai?

Azka: jee wo Samra ko bula dege.

Azlan:kuch chahiye aapko aap mujhe bata sakti hai.

Azka:nahi mene wo..i mean mene kal se yahi kapde pehne hue the so fresh hona tha.wo bhabhi aur Khalid Bhai aa rahe hai to.

Azlan:thik hai.

Azlan bahar jata hai.

Azlan:Samra.. Samra..

Bilal:jee azlan saab

Azlan:wo Samra kaha hai?.

Bilal:wo to badi begam sahiba ke saath bahar gayi hai.

Azlan:kab?

Bilal:abhi kuch der pehle..wo begam sahiba ne kuch samaan Lena tha

Azlan:accha thik hai tum jao.

Azlan wapas room me aata hai .

Azlan:Azka wo Samra to nahi hai.

Azka:koi baat nahi aap mom ko bula de

Azlan:wo Samra mom ke saath hi bahar gayi hai.

Azka:accha...chale thik hai.

Azlan:Azka

Azka:jee

Azlan:wo i mean ...me aapko..i mean....me aapki help kar du.

Azka ye sunkar azlan ko wide eyes se dekhne lag jati hai

Azka:ye kya bol rahe hai aap?

Azlan realised ke usne kya bol diya.

Azlan: no no u get me wrong i mean to say aaye me aapko washroom tak le jata hu .jab aap change kar le than awaaz de Dena.

Azka:nahi it's ok.

Azlan:Azka Samra pata nahi kab aayegi aur agar tab tak aapki bhabhi aa gayi to.trust me ...me bas aapki help karna chahta hu.mera aur koi intention nahi hai

Azlan ye bolkar apna face neache kar leta hai.azka kuch der use dekhti hai and than

Azka:thik hai mujhe aap cupboard tak le jaye

Azlan smile karta hai and azka ko uthakar cupboard tak le jata hai.azka apne kapde choose karne lagti hai.azlan wahi paas khada hai.

Azlan:ye white wala accha hai.

Azka Azlan ke ye bolne par ekdum se ruk jati hai.wo uski taraf dekhti nahi.azlan dekh raha hota hai he thinks ke wo white wala dress choose karegi but azka kuch der baad koi aur dress leti hai.azlan disappointed hota hai but kuch nahi bolta. than Azlan use washroom me lekar jata hai.wo use sink vanity par bithata hai.

Azlan:ek minute rukiye me abhi aata hu

Azlan kuch der baad ek plastic roll sheet lekar aata hai wo azka ke pairo ke paas bethta hai aur uske pair ko apne haath me leta hai.

Azka:ye aap ..

Azlan:relax me kuch nahi kar raha... bas aapki chot ko cover kar raha hu aise pani nahi lagega aapki injury par.aap chaahe to bath bhi le sakti hai.

Azlan waha neache bethkar azka ke pair ko cover kar raha hai aur azka use aise karta dekh rahi hai.wo Azlan ko aise uski itni care karta dekh bahot ajeeb sa mehsoos kar rahi hai.wo azlan jo use kuch samjhta nahi tha aaj aise uski parwaah kar raha hai.

Azlan azka ka pair cover kar ke use dekhta hai..azka usi ke khayalo me ghum hui hai.

Azlan:ho gaya.

Azka:....

Azlan:azka..

Azka::aahh jee

Azlan:i said ho gaya ab aap fresh ho jaye me bahar hi hu.darwaza me bahar se lock kar deta hu.ok

Azlan uthta hai aur waha se chala jata hai.azka wahi kuch der bethi sochti rahti hai.

After sometime

Azlan check karta hai ke bahot der ho gayi hai but azka still washroom me hai.wo sochta hai wo jakar puche ya nahi.

Azlan:itna time ho gaya hai i hope azka thik ho.

Wo uthkar jata hai aur knock karta hai.

Azlan:Azka aapko aur kitna time lagega.

Azka ki koi awaaz nahi aati.

Azlan is baar uchi awaaz me puchta hai.

Azlan:AZKA ..

azka:jee azlan saab

Azlan:aap thik hai.

Tabhi azlan ko kuch girne ki awaaz aati hai.

Azka:aahhnn .

Azlan:azka whatt happened?.

Azka:kuch nahi bas me uth nahi paa rahi aahh.

Azlan:kyaaa...aap thik hai..? Aapko kahi chot to nahi lagi.

Azka:jee bas utha nahi jaa raha..me koshish kar rahi hu.

Azlan:me andar aa jau.

Azka:NAHIIII AAP ANDAR NA AANA.

AZLAN:kyu???

Azka: wo...main...Plz aap andar na aana

Azlan kuch der wahi khada rahta hai.he knows ke azka bilkul nahi chaahegi ke wo use aise dekhe.azka phir try karti hai uthne ka but foot par pressure nahi daal paati

Azka:aahhhh

Azlan: Azka me andar aa raha hu.

Azka kuch bole isse pehle azlan door open kar deta hai.azka apna face dusri side kar deti hai.aur eyes close kar leti hai.usne bathrobe pehna hua hai but still she feel so uncomfortable in front of him.

Azlan:Azka aap kaha hai?

Azka opens her eyes and turns. She sees Azlaan standing at the door with his eyes closed

Azlan:Azka aap kaha hai?

Azka:aapke thik saamne.

Azlan:accha me aapke paas aa raha hu don't move ok.

Azlan azka ke pas aata hai.aur apna haath aage karta hai

Azlan:apna haath de

Azka hands her hand to Azlaan. Azlaan bed down and grabs Azka from her waist.

Azlan:azka apne dono haath thighly mere neck par rakhle.

Azka aisa hi karti hai.aur phir azlan use lekar khada hota hai.

Azlan:azka

Azka:hmmmm

Azlan:aap mujhe guide karti jaye me bahar Jaa raha hu

Azka starts looking at Azlan's face.His doing all this touched Azka's heart.She is looking at Azlaan with respectful eyes.with so much adoration

Azlan:Azka

Azka: aahhmmm right side par seedha.

Azlan:ok

Azlan comes out with azka.azka keeps looking at Azlan all the time there is a tears in her eyes but this tears is not because of pain.this tears is sometimes else.the way he care her respect her all this brought tears in Azka’s eyes


Azlan bed par azka ko bithta hai aur bed spreads se use cover karta hai.

Azlan:Azka can I open my eyes?

Azka ki eyes se ek halka sa aasoo girta hai aur wo smile karti hue use saaf karti hai.

Azka:jee azlan saab .

Azlan eyes open karta hai aur azka ki taraf dekhta hai

Azlan:r u ok?

Azka:jee

Azlan:aap sach bol rahi hai na ...me docter ko bulau?

Azka:nahi me bilkul thik hu.

Azlan:thik hai me aapko kapde laakar deta hu washroom se

Azka:wo kapde geele ho gaye hai

Azlan:koi baat nahi aap dusre bata de

Azlan cupboard open karta hai.

Azka:WO WHITE WALE

Azlan ki back azka ki taraf hai wo ye sunkar smile karta hai.wo white dress leta hai aur azka ko deta hai.

azlan:ap change kar le me bahar hu.agar kuch bhi cheez ki zarurat ho to mujhe call kar dena ok

Azka kuch nahi bolti aur azlan use kapde dekar bahar chala jata hai.azka bahot der tak door ki taraf dekhti rahti hai phir white dress ko dekhne lag jati hai aur smile karti hai.

End of part 11


Do comments

Ufff now this umair is getting annoying already...i am sure yeh dobara phir entry maarega😆...feel bad for azlaan...but azlaan needs to stop being so insecure and act like a man

Yeh azlaan azka ko uthaane ka koi mauka nahi chorta🤣 i loved the bathroom scene...and she knew ke he likes the white dress

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