MG FF - Indebted Part 45 May 19 Pg 152 New Thread Link Pg 1, 153 - Page 76

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi Anu!

Thank you for updating.........

Chapter 33

Sensational update…. fantastically written

loved Maan's care for Geet

he cannot help but tease Geet

as expected he hired a chef and cleaner

hmm Geet must concentrate on the office and him

Yash's thoughts are reasonable

he has only seen Geet's saintly side and unware of Geet and Maan's past

so he is concerned about Geet

well Yash is amazed to feel in the difference in Geet's voice and her talks

of cos Geet was unhappy hearing Yash

she is indeed possessive of her relationship with Maan

liked how Geet responded to Yash about staying at the apartment and not in the mansion

Maan was clearly happy that she supported him

Yash was taken aback seeing Maan there and how close Maan and Geet were

Maan and Geet's comments flabbergasted Yash

pleased how Maan handled Yash

glad when Geet said... "his girl..."

not surprised that Maan will not let anyone dictate his relationship with Geet

Yash was confused seeing a different Geet

so Geet apologised to Maan for Yash's questions

at least Maan has no issues

he did have a point that they gave people space to come between them

great that Maan wants to know each details of Geet's life for the past 8 years

can understand why Geet does not want to tell Maan

he does have a right to know

will she tell him?

adore this bold yet shy Geet

good that Geet told Meera what happened when Yash called

wonderful seeing Geet take a stand for Maan

finally Meera told Yash about Maan and Geet

his reaction was justified

now she shares her childhood with him

wonderful that Maan spends time with dadima and Annie

aww Maan misses Geet

oh dadima saw Maan leaving at night with a bag

he was unable to tell her where he was going

alas she understood and did not find it correct to dictate his life

update soon

Thanks so much dear for your wonderful and awesome comments always.😊

You know how much i like your line by line analysis, it has it's own flavor. You make me revisit my own update by your comment😆

@bold - yes they are now openly coming up with their relationship.

Geet anyways was always very open about her possessive ness for Maan😆, in her own childish way though.

Brij and Meera are used to this from childhood but Yash still need to get taste of that side of Geet😆

He has big illusion of his Sali Sahiba being a saint🤣

Originally posted by: janu2006

Beautiful part

So happy for maaaneet

Yash in shock seeings Geet’s nature with maan

Dadima is so sweet hope she doesn’t take this routine of maan in wrong way and make any regards of Geet

Cont soon

Thanks dear for commenting here and in FF section. ❤️

Yash, still have more to be shocked 😆

Dadima, not only love but also respect Maan. He has brought them back from rags and made them stand in society will their head held high. He has done it singlehandedly. That kind of give him position of decision maker of family, that includes him as well. She can guide Maan but will not dictate his life. But she will have her own view on things going forward though she will never interfere in Maan's ways.

Originally posted by: coderlady

chapter 33

Geet will be fully taken care of now. No more hardship.

Yeah her hard days are gone, Maan has taken the charge of her life.😆

❤️

Originally posted by: babelicious

Lovely update. Made my day(night) as usual!

Maan is so sweetly taking care of everything related to Geet.. he has made sure she is living like a queen even though alone at the moment. While I understand Yash’s interest is more of a concern about Geet being forced into this relationship, he needs to realize this is what Geet wants. He could have read Geet’s behavior that she looks happier & taken a step back in his advices. He was coming across so strongly it was getting annoying. Good that both Geet and Maan didn’t entertain his interference. Was happy to see Geet openly taking stand for Maan. Something she never did before. Maan was equally happy, and also didn’t hesitate in openly showing his authority over her.

And most importantly I’m happy with Maan asking her about those 8 yrs he missed. Geet diverted this hurtful topic but I hope Maan caught on this intentional diversion. Glad that the seed has been planted in his head that it must have been a painful period for her. This would make him get nearer to knowing the truth. I only wish Meera would have told him in simple ways that Geet had suffered enough … Can’t wait for Maan to know the whole truth.
I’m so happy with these updates. I’m on a vacation yet I can’t stop reading and re-reading this. Thank you. And Oh btw, I’m also waiting desperately for the longgg night these 2 are going to have ☺️ You had to stop when Maan was leaving to Geet’s house at 10pm at night 🤢

and like you mentioned, oh no no please don’t skip any emotions related to Maan and Geet ❤️ nothing gets boring between these 2 and the passion has just begun so feel free to add as much romance as possible.. it will only make me enjoy more & increases your story views 😆

I so so much look forward to your analysis. If my update makes your day(night)😆, same goes here. Your detail intake, where you give how your felt as a readers make me reread your comments😊 and i really really look forward to your intake.

Your take on Yash, so bang on. He is not able to take the change in scenario. Maan's sudden entry and immediately getting the position in family, where no one is questioning his decision. He is not able to digest. Not to blame him, he does not know the past.

Yes, that 8 yrs to come in few updates. Maan chorega toh nahi, when it's matter of Geet😆

And I stopped at that point because lonnggg night hai to thorda longg hoga na😉

I already started typing next update because of this long night😆

Next Update is full entertainment package ☺️😉, you definitely can look forward to it.

Originally posted by: jeyanthi123

Congrats for new story

Lovely introd

Eagerly waiting

You will see Maan and Geet relation in very different light but i will make sure you will love their relation and fall for Maaneet here.

It is story of two mature people but even in that you will keep getting full feel of our Maaneet.

Waiting for new story . Thank you very much for entertaining us .

Fantastic update

Loved Maan's care for Geet

Loved Yash concern because he doesn't know the depth of Maaneet's love

So he is right on his place

Loved possessive Geet

Sorry yaar was super busy from now on will comment on all the ffs.

Lovely update..

Yash is protective towards geet..

He is indirectly insulting maan ..

Geet told this to Meera ..

Maan is moving to geets appartment..

Waiting for next update..

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