Who are u ?? (Seven shots) - Gitya🤔😎♥️ (jealousy track) - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ChannaMereyaFN

This is a far far far better track...I'm loving it

Sad our Hero is in denial mode still 😏

Please continue 😍


That's how he has been written.

Mouth and heart doesn't seem to get along.

Coming to the climax soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Shot five


The worried plus excited husband took the unconscious wife to the nursing home and the doctor examined her informing her condition was getting better.


He thought to himself.

Perhaps she was away from me, that's why.

Who knows she missed me and wanted to return soon.


" U are missing her, that's why she's recovering fast"


Armaan's teasing voice heard from behind who seemed to have read his thoughts.


He shook his head slowly.

" Tujhey galat fehmi hui hai ( u misunderstood). I just want her to cure that's all. Her mother is very upset".


The curious question

" And u?? ".


Silence.


The continuation.

" U are not upset? Ur family told me u have not been eating properly past two days. Even yesterday when we ate in that one plate u envied us. U wanted to leave straight away. If that isn't jealousy then what is it???


Silence.


The denial.

Look, tu kya sochta hain ( whatever u think) I don't care. I just want my old bachelor life back. I can't be with her. I can't accept her ",


The friend left silently without any answer leaving the annoyed, upset husband puzzled.


An hour later

Ginni was discharged and he dropped her with her family to her residence. Took off home to settle some unfinished business


The divorce papers.

He called the lawyer right away and got them ready. Once she recovered, he was determined to get them signed and release her

That would be the best for the both of them.



The day passed silently with still no phone calls . Even Armaan didn't ring.


Perhaps he's angry with me. I will just text him

Sorry Armaan, i know u are upset. Please try to understand. U know me buddy. How i am. U think i can make her happy ?? Yaar , it's better we go separate ways. I've got the divorce papers ready. Once she recovers i will get them signed. Finish story. I hope u are with me on this like always.


He waited,

The message was read. The blue tick appeared but there was no reply.


A sigh

Nevermind, he will surely understand.



Three hours later, 8 pm.


A phone call came in as he surfed the net on his laptop, sitting on the bed.


The husband was glad that finally his friend rang him

" Armaan ".

" Puttarji, main bol rehi hun, Gulabo. Vo Armaan Ginni ko leke mandir geya hain aur phone peeche chod geya".

( Armaan took Ginni to the temple leaving his phone behind)


The puzzled husband

" Mandir? Armaan toh kabhi mandir nehin jaata."

(Armaan doesn't go to the temple).


The excited mother.

" Shadi karne geya hain".( Going there to be married).


The shocked husband, almost falling from the bed.

" Kya!!!. Kissey!!! ".( What?? With whom,??)


The happy mother

" Ginni sey , aur kissey ".( With Ginni, who else)


He screamed at the top of his lungs furiously

" Ginni , meri biwi hain!! . Armaan kaise shadi kar sakta hain!!

( She's my wife. How could Armaan marry her?)


The glad mother.

" Maine undono ko apna ashirvad de diya. Waise bhi ab Ginni usko apna husband manti hain aur Armaan ney betaya ap Ginni ko divorce dene wale hain Toh aap sign kardo aur humey bhejdo. Jaise usko yaad ajayega, vo sign kardi. Armaan ney shimla key do flight ticket bhi book karliye hain. Honeymoon key liye kal nikaljayenge. Wapas do sey teen ho jayengey. Ginni toh ab apke dost ko pasand karne legi hain. Dono ki jodi bhi pyari hain. Kisiki nezer na lege ".

( I have given my blessings. Ginni has accepted him as husband. Armaan said u are getting the divorce papers ready. So u sign and pas to us. Once she recovers she will sign it. Armaan has booked two flight tickets to Shimla for honeymoon . They will return as three( will start a family) . Moreover Ginni likes Armaan now and they look good together)


To be continued.

Edited by Aniash - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Shot six


The shaky, breaking voice of the nervous, devastated husband, who felt his knees went weak after hearing the shocking, unbelievable, depressing news of losing his newly wedded wife to his close friend ..

" Vo ... Vo ..vo..kkkon..kon sey mm...mandir geye hain?? (Which temple they went)


He tried hard swallowing his tears .

The fear of losing her conquered his senses.


The cheerful mother.

" Vo humare ghar ke piche wala mandir. Hum bhi abhi nikal rehe hain. Vahan mandap sej geya hain aur dulha dulhan bhi teiyaar hain bas das minute mein shadi hojaigi".

( The temple behind my house. I am leaving now. The mandap, bride and groom are all ready. Marriage will complete in ten minutes)


"Ten minutes!!!"

The husband freaked out real bad, disconnected the line and ran as fast as he could as though chased by a wild boar towards his car speeding off to the direction of the wedding venue.


God, tell me it's just a bad dream.

It's not happening.


He drove recklessly almost hitting a few vehicles on the busy street and finally reached the place freaking out once again seeing no one at the mandap.

The temple was empty.

Thr marriage already took place!

God , noooooo!!

He fell on his knees and cried

Ginniiiiiiii!!

He screamed at the top of his lungs


He sat for at least an hour reminiscing tthe moments he spent with her.


It was too late now. His friend had snatched her away from him taking an advantage of her mental state. But it wasn't Armaan's fault either. He will never betray me. It's my idiocracy of pushing her away . It's all my fault. I can't even blame my friend and wife.


God, it's so painful


Just then, his phone rang and he picked up at the fourth ring

A nurse's calm voice.

Sir, ur wife is just admitted. She has regained her memory asking for u.


He stood up straight.

" What the hell"

"What's going on??


To be continued.

The climax

Edited by Aniash - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Shot seven - the climax.


What exactly happened on that day???


The flashback.


As soon as Aditya dropped Ginni and family home, that afternoon, Dimpy poisoned Ginni's mind stating we don't have yours and Armaan's marriage photo. Why not we dress u like a bride and Armaan as a groom, go to the studios to take beautiful photos. And then hang them on the wall.


Ginni noticed the same. There was no single marriage photo on any of the house walls. How come?? The puzzled wife then gave her consensus and started pestering her mother to allow her for a photoshoot with her husband stating the late father would be happy.


The annoyed Gulabo rang Armaan who apparently was already pissed with Aditya's decision to release Ginni. He was being adamant and ridiculous. It was absurd. Armaan could see clearly that Aditya had developed feelings for his wife but just too stubborn to accept it.


So when Gulabo complained about her daughter's absurd decision, Armaan finally knew what he had to do to unite the duo


Set up a mandap and get the marriage rituals repeated so Ginnii would start recalling her own marriage. At the same time, Aditya should be informed so he would freak out and run to save his marriage. An evident to show him that he was so wrong to release her when he had actually fallen real hard for her. He needed to realize the growing feelings in him before he fully released his wife and it became too late to even repent.


He would suffer full life. As it is he had already gone through a lot of sorrow. Armaan wanted him to have a blissful marriage life and Ginni was the perfect life partner for him who would mend his wounds and cherish his life with joy


Gulabo gave her consensus. Anything to unite the duo.


The plan worked.

As soon as Giinni was dressed in almost the same red bridal attire, she started getting the flashbacks before reaching the temple itself and with the grace of the Lord, the moment she saw the mandap, she started panicking. More flashbacks and she felt dizzy . As they sat in the mandap to start the marriage rituals and the priest lighted the holy fire, she collapsed there and then.


Taken to the hospital immediately and her memory returned.


The shocked angry husband to his friend puling his collar after the mother in law naratted the whole incident.

" Don't u ever play such a disgusting joke with me again. It almost took my life.. u hear me".


Silence.


The smiling friend,

" So u admit, u are in love ".


Silence.


He didn't answer.


Am i in love with her???


Ginni was discharged with full return memory and pissed with her husband


On. the way to Singh's residence.


The angry wife

" Seeda seeda bol nehin sekte they ki ap hie mere husband ho. Gol gol jelebi ki terah mujhey pagal benadiya".

( Couldn't u be straight forward that u were my husband. Unnecessary confusion that drove me crazy)


The defensive husband

" Pagal toh tune mujhey benadiya jabse meri zindagi mein ayi ho sab kuch ulta seeda ho geya.

( U drove me crazy. Since u walked into my life, u turned it upside down)


Silence.


She looked away towards the window ignoring him.


Trying to make up. .

" Ice cream khaogi??".( Wanna eat ice cream)


No answer.

She still looked away saying.


"Nehin khaungi. Ketti ho geyi".

( I don't want to eat. I am angry)


The teasing smiling voice.

" Oi gol gappa, muh fulake bethi hain. Ok chalo, main hie sorry bol deta hun".( Why a sulky face. Ok, i apologize).


Silence.


Then she giggled.


They spent their first outing after marriage at an ice cream stalk.


The husband finally learnt his lesson.

All credits to Dimpy and Armaan.

The former was upset her plan backfired but glad the next day when Aditya sent her a box of chocolates .and a note. Thank u little sister.


The journey went on with the husband finally realising one very important aspect of his marriage.

The worth of his wife

Which was

Priceless!



The end


Ps

A few episodes on this onscreen would have been a treat.

Edited by Aniash - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

This was funny and cute.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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loved it, wish it could be like this in the show for a few episodes

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Adi pagal ho jayega and hum hass hass ke thak jayenge 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

loved it, wish it could be like this in the show for a few episodes


Tq 😘👌

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Namita-M

Adi pagal ho jayega and hum hass hass ke thak jayenge 🤣


Satyavachan 🤣🤣🤣

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