FF: Ishq-e-Watan *Chapter 78 Posted* - Page 56

Whoaaa!! Koel-Faizi ka little secret is out! 😆 Ishq aur mushq chhupaye nahi chhupte 😆

Param-baby Monu&Sid scenes were adorable!

Sid told his version of story to Karan.

See, here Karan realised there's something missing, latest chapter mein nahi hai wo cheez.

Sid-Sanj scene was nice😳

Sanju comforting Monu 😳 sweet!

Monu giving long deductions to Karan😆

Sahi pakde hai, dawayi nahi khayi janab ne 😆 aalsi! It was well written.

I liked this chapter! 😳 bakwas nahi tha😔

My half-drafted comment is gone 😒

Chapter was fine. Just one thing I found out of context was Sanjana's shots and the sequence between the new couple at SAF, unless you have something coming up.

Diagnosis is a big part of medicine. It is not out of the ordinary. In fact senior doctors swear by it.

You said it: Tests are a confirmation of one's Diagnosis.

I hope Karan understands the (presumably) well intentioned actions of Param.

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Sanjana's shots in the sense? Like, the academy security thing or her scene with Monami and comforting her?

And new couple waala? As in relationship exposing waala scene?

Both of Sanjana's scene. Looked a bit forced (into the story).

Karan ka, No, I meant once Karan knows the complete truth.

Look, in retrospect, a LOT of one's decisions can be made better. Under those circumstances, the maturity at the time etc. the decisions may be right. From a third person point of view, things and perspectives are different.

So, considering, Param understood the argument of Dr.Mahajan to not be in a position to lose another family member and influencing Monami to be with him n lieu of a better and safer life and may be his own condition at the time not being able to raise 3 kids amidst postings etc., the decision to leave may have seemed correct.

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Okay. I'll try to fix that. It might take me a few chapters in order to figure that out, so thoda patient hona, please.

You said something about the new couple waala thing in your original post? Woh kis baare mein tha? Were you talking about KoeZi or what?

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Ofcourse like I have said, we tend to become over scrupulous and critical sometimes. But the thing, this is Only when there are expectations and trust on the work 🙂.

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Yes, was referring to KoeZi. Again, looked thoda out of context to the flow unless there is reference to it in the future.

Honestly, Sanjana ka character is the missing bit of the puzzle.

May be, just may be, showing Sanjana being better at certain things than say Karan and Faizi and that comes out evidently and the cadets start looking up to her for who she is not because Karan and Faizi trust her.

May be her multi-tasking with Investigation while Karan and Faizi are out and managing the Academy being the next in the chain of command to taking sessions to may be even helping in the preparations for Deepawali. I don't know, just thinking out loud.

With Monami being able to interact more with the trainers for the sheer reason of staying back on campus, I don't know yeh kitna achcha hoga. While there is still the cadet-trainer equation, in my view, it is invariably not received well.

It is like saying just because a team member stays up late at office (out of own will), they will naturally be the manager's favourite, has preferred treatment and such. The actual reasons don't really stand a ground.

About KoeZi, waiting to read more! Bahut kuch chut raha hain🤔?!

Originally posted by: Bodhianveshika

Honestly, Sanjana ka character is the missing bit of the puzzle.

It's very hard for me to write Sanju since there is no part of me that really resonates with her. Baaki sab, I can relate to on at least, some level, but Sanju thodi hard hai likhne mein. Mujhe pata hai I am not doing justice to her character par... main try kar rahi hoon. Ab main kya karoon? 😭

May be, just may be, showing Sanjana being better at certain things than say Karan and Faizi and that comes out evidently and the cadets start looking up to her for who she is not because Karan and Faizi trust her.

Haan, I get what ya mean. I have been looking for opportunities and this division of labor- with Sanju managing the security of the academy was an attempt. Ab pata nahi dhang se dikha paungi ya nahi, but I am trying to make her be the head of this particular thing.

Being the head of security when you are anticipating an attack- not in normal situation- is far different and difficult because agar security breech hui toh you are the one held responsible.

May be her multi-tasking with Investigation while Karan and Faizi are out and managing the Academy being the next in the chain of command to taking sessions to may be even helping in the preparations for Deepawali. I don't know, just thinking out loud.

Achha, this is something I have been thinking. Since the academy is a central power, would they celebrate Diwali? Because if that's the case, they should celebrate every festival- Christmas, Eid, etc. with the same grace, which I suppose, is not possible?

Holidays makes sense because Diwali comes with 5 festivals in a row toh along with the weekend, a week long break isn't too out of it, but... Idk, are you getting what I mean?

With Monami being able to interact more with the trainers for the sheer reason of staying back on campus, I don't know yeh kitna achcha hoga. While there is still the cadet-trainer equation, in my view, it is invariably not received well.

It is like saying just because a team member stays up late at office (out of own will), they will naturally be the manager's favourite, has preferred treatment and such. The actual reasons don't really stand a ground.

Nah, nah, I don't mean favorite in any sense. Ab jaise, taking the example you said, about a team member staying late at office and then getting to talk to the manager, because they now have free time that they can afford to idle away doesn't mean the person is now a favorite and they'll have any sort of preferred treatment.

Aise dekho toh Karan, who has openly declared that Monami is his best cadet, or Faizi, whose girlfriend is Koel, should be biased towards them in training but neither did Faizi protest to the punishment Koel was dished out, nor was Karan any gentle to the cadets for the punishments.

Aise samjho- if you are my boss and I talk to you about anything other than work, and we end up having a friendly relationship based on that, uska matlab yeh thodi naa hai ki main tumhaari favorite aur tum mujhe special treatment dogi.

Spending a little time because you are FREE doesn't mean favorite and being favorite also doesn't mean preferred treatment, especially when it comes to training.

As for getting to spend time more, ab aap kahin par rukoge, toh ek kamre mein side par toh nahi baith jaoge. You'll interact with people. Moreover, Sanju is her roommate, Karan is her friend, and Faizi is a friendly person in general, toh it's a given she'll get to talk to them more.

Is that what you meant or was it something else and I understood it differently?

P.S. I don't know if this is intentional or I am reading it wrong ya kya, par kabhi kabhi tumhaari tone seems so passive aggressive ya sarcastic. 😆 Complaint nahi tha, just a comment.

Originally posted by: Bodhianveshika

About KoeZi, waiting to read more! Bahut kuch chut raha hain🤔?!

I have planned arcs about all of them. Yaar, plan bahut kuchh karti hoon, execute karte hue popat ho jaata hai.

I had so many training scenes planned for the cadets- SO MANY!- par daalne ki sahi jagah hi nahi milti thi mujhe.

Monami ke past ke baare mein agar 100 piece hain toh you only have about 10. That's a weird way of saying you only know about 10% of the things.

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

I have planned arcs about all of them. Yaar, plan bahut kuchh karti hoon, execute karte hue popat ho jaata hai.

I had so many training scenes planned for the cadets- SO MANY!- par daalne ki sahi jagah hi nahi milti thi mujhe.

Monami ke past ke baare mein agar 100 piece hain toh you only have about 10. That's a weird way of saying you only know about 10% of the things.

And that is the best part. It's nice to look forward to things. It's good to play the guessing game.

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

[Me]: Honestly, Sanjana ka character is the missing bit of the puzzle.

[Noe]: It's very hard for me to write Sanju since there is no part of me that really resonates with her. Baaki sab, I can relate to on at least, some level, but Sanju thodi hard hai likhne mein. Mujhe pata hai I am not doing justice to her character par... main try kar rahi hoon. Ab main kya karoon?

[Me]: I know. The 6 characters are differently similar and similarly different 🤷🏻‍♀️.

May be, just may be, showing Sanjana being better at certain things than say Karan and Faizi and that comes out evidently and the cadets start looking up to her for who she is not because Karan and Faizi trust her.

[Noe]: Haan, I get what ya mean. I have been looking for opportunities and this division of labor- with Sanju managing the security of the academy was an attempt. Ab pata nahi dhang se dikha paungi ya nahi, but I am trying to make her be the head of this particular thing.

Being the head of security when you are anticipating an attack- not in normal situation- is far different and difficult because agar security breech hui toh you are the one held responsible.

[Me]: Which us also an opportunity that how she is able to balance so many roles and do so, really well. She is reasonable, responsible and skilled. Despite her relatively lesser experience, she has grown to make a place of her own. She knows when to yield to her instincts and step back.

May be her multi-tasking with Investigation while Karan and Faizi are out and managing the Academy being the next in the chain of command to taking sessions to may be even helping in the preparations for Deepawali. I don't know, just thinking out loud.

[Noe]: Achha, this is something I have been thinking. Since the academy is a central power, would they celebrate Diwali? Because if that's the case, they should celebrate every festival- Christmas, Eid, etc. with the same grace, which I suppose, is not possible?

Holidays makes sense because Diwali comes with 5 festivals in a row toh along with the weekend, a week long break isn't too out of it, but... Idk, are you getting what I mean?

[Me]: You are right.

Festivals me we have seen some being celebrated na, like Deepawali. Honestly, not sure.

But I guess, celebrating Holidays may be a good alternative to terming them Festival Celebrations.