Sai FF 'Afterglow' - Epilogue pg. 61 (new) - Page 40

Originally posted by: Moor278

Are you happy with the update Sab04?

V ki jali to acchha laga ya nahi ? 🤣

Are mujhe laga ye to shuruat hae!
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BTW he started dating now?

Filhaal itna hi hai... You want more??? 😉

Originally posted by: Moor278

Filhaal itna hi hai... You want more??? 😉

Sai and Sumit r love yaar!!❤️❤️❤️

Finally she is getting the love and importance she deserved! Thanks for the tag!

Update soooonnnnnn

It must have been few months leap since your last update. Sumit and Sandhya using codeword and their interaction is really cute. So he must have known the Mcdreamy Sai and Sandhya was talking about before was him😉

Sai blaming him for her ‘ruined’ viva is just like couple bickering. He was so thoughfful of her studies and their situation. And he includes her in his decisions❤️❤️

Virat is moving on in his life too. He was annoyed because of his late date and then he had to see Sai and Sumit being lovey dovey together. Are you still in revenge mode🤣? That must be awkward and they become conscious of him.

I thought you have given up because of how the show is going. Really glad you are still continuing the story.

Yes it is a mini leap 😉... Will be clear in the next update.

It's not just that Sumit knows he is McDreamy... He also has a nickname for Sandhya. So they are close friends now.

I wanted to show some relaxed interaction between the two.

V has moved on too.

Actually I started writing the next part but it was not getting connected to this hence added this one.

That is half written... So probably update will be tomm. 😳

P.S. yes I am still in revenge mode. Some readers also want it.

Originally posted by: Moor278

Filhaal itna hi hai... You want more??? 😉

I wrote a whole paragraph but looks like it didn’t go through! 😂

Heres what I said:

Considering how show is going rightnow no amount of crying Virat is enough but its your story so I dont want to hamper your vision.

I know Afterglow is totally different n started before Sai abuse in Shruti track so Virat is not as wrong as he is now in show.

My actual wish from a FF is that address these two things (not this one but in general)

1. Sai’s trauma, and it grave effects on her combined with many fatal head injuries. What she suffered at this age can break anyone n she has no one to guide her. So I want her journey of suffering effects of trauma and abuse all these years and THEN she fights emerges out stringer. She does love Virat, hence she keeps going back , she needs someone who shows her mirror that she is in abusive relationship and this cycle wont break untill she ends it.

2. Virat and Chavans face consequences of their actions towards Devi aai n Sai- the The Karmic justice people talk about. If Virat realize he was wrong and how he damaged that girl and face consequences of his actions, I can even accept his redeemed version.

These are two major things missing in this show that I badly want it in FF.

Got it... But it looks like an individual FF in itself..

And I have dealt with some of it, other writers have to... In some ways or another.

You are right, it started in Shruti track and post divorce, Sai has had limited interaction with V in the story. So it is now moving independent of the show. I cannot add elements that have happened in the show after that. It is now lurching towards pure romance between Sai and Sumit and how different he is to V.

I see an end to this story soon... Maybe another 3-4 chapters. I am yet to write them though. 😃

I have dealt with Sai's suicide attempt in Afterglow.

Her abuse and assualt by Jagtap was dealt in a bit in Begin again.

P and BK ko punishment as you know is being dealt in Lost hope. (Looking at how V is behaving, I have personally lost hope on that story 😆).

Originally posted by: Moor278

Got it... But it looks like an individual FF in itself..

And I have dealt with some of it, other writers have to... In some ways or another.

You are right, it started in Shruti track and post divorce, Sai has had limited interaction with V in the story. So it is now moving independent of the show. I cannot add elements that have happened in the show after that. It is now lurching towards pure romance between Sai and Sumit and how different he is to V.

I see an end to this story soon... Maybe another 3-4 chapters. I am yet to write them though. 😃

I have dealt with Sai's suicide attempt in Afterglow.

Her abuse and assualt by Jagtap was dealt in a bit in Begin again.

P and BK ko punishment as you know is being dealt in Lost hope. (Looking at how V is behaving, I have personally lost hope on that story 😆).

Yes I know This story is different timezone, thats why I said not my expectation from Afterglow as it is in different time.
I am enjoying this as standalone story. This and D dhadakne do are my favorite new ML FFs.

Beautiful update Moor

Love all 3 updates .alot changed between SUMIT and Sai. Love their conversation. I am so happy to Sai happy (at least in this story). SUMIT he is awesome.

Moor your song selection is awesome dear.

Waiting for next update.

Thanks for tagging