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Here you go readers - Chapter 24 - Slipping Heart.

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-Anu 🤗

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wonderfull update,,,,

both are in love and pain and it is not ending at all and both are losing badly to each other feelings but misunderstanding props up..

Geet working with maan now closely will be a double dhamaka to watch but these two are no way near each other .maan giving her dead projects initially i too felt the same thing as geet obviuosly anyone would get hurt.and maan also was hurt as she didnt trust him.

Brij is so good and had put some akal in her brain(one thing i didnt understand here is why did brij said atleast you could have got some good projects ? was he also under the assumption that maan is way above them )

. maan giving work to avoid her and already 1 month passed and nothing happened between the two.kab tak guys you wasted almost 8-9 years .

Loved annie too much .she wants to take geet with her.and geet can't say to annie.

now comes maan with farak padtha hain thing ..he is loosing him self to her and she is with guilt and jealousy is not able voice it out.

maan and annie talikng about picnic and geet was not in any way in their personal space .geet felt bad about it.yeah obviously she will feel bad. he didn't say to anyone about geet ,to annie,to his dadima,he didn't even take her to his house also rather kept her in apartment,and pari being involved in his personal space .. she is always left behind in all his personal space.(even tough she is in his heart but his actions has not shown it in any way to her that she is valuable to him)

obviously geet would not feel good about anything about the picnic and she will feel unwanted.it was not him who is taking her to picnic but it was annie who proposed her name...if i was in geets place i will not go i think geet should also not go to the picnic. but only for annie she agreed

before she used to have a long list of fiends even then he was her priority and now maan has big list of friends now and then also.But now she doesnt have any friends she left all of them. and she is a lonely soul with maan and his toughts. But whers as maan he is with so many friends....poles apart.

she was not in his personal space now but in the past maan was always there in her space not matter what.she always had him in her mind and soul.her ways of showing her love was different and somewhat bad but she kept him above all but maan is behaving compeltely in opposite way if her.

the whole scenario of geet trying to come in taxi is so well put in words cant describe it. how can he expect her to say farak padtha hain when he himself is showing no signs of farak padtha hain and only showing only responsible side of him..

he is willing to forget all the past and bend on his knees for her but it is not that easy maan babu.

i think she will tell it only when there is a dire situation or when she is confident that she is truly valuable to him in real sense in actions, words and affection but not when he is doing all this as responsibility.true she is in pain and in a complete pathetic situation of trying to handle herself seeing maan with pari

He is happy most of the times even tough he is sad with geets toughts but geet is always in pain and sadness.not an inch of happiness is seen from that past 8 yrs.her happiness and liveliness is gone with maan.but maan he is finding happiness elsewhere without geet.

he is also in pain and want geet to be his and rule him in all ways but has fear.

Awesome update

Love it

Waiting for next update

Chapter 24

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How long are they both going to keep this up. The whole misunderstanding and assumptions in what the other person is thinking

If only they talked wvwegthjbv would be cured. But then there would be no story right

love it. Maan knowing her decided to help her and is so jealous and possessive

geet takes it all in the wrong way and can only see Maan and pari

hope they get a push to reveal

glad brij made geet open her eyes. How can she doubt Maan. He is hurt

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Wonderful update…. excellently written

Can understand Geet's nervousness

its indeed hard for both Maan and Geet to control their feelings

when will they actually talk?

so Geet doubts Maan's intentions when he assigned her dead projects

oh Maan is angry and confronts her

at least she realise after speaking to Brij why Maan was giving her dead projects

not surprised that Maan is preparing to to handle Handa Group with Brij

Maan is indeed a good businessman

great that Geet is now working on the projects assigned her

well Maan behaves professional with Geet

as expected he keeps their interaction minimal

Geet's reaction hearing Annie and Maan discuss the camping trip was anticipated

they misunderstanding that Geet has that Maan and Pari are together continues to grow

glad that Annie wants Geet to accompany them

Geet assumes that Maan does not want her to go but Maan was waiting for her response

ahh Geet has no choice but to go

Pari is indeed excited hearing this

Gosh Geet decided to take a taxi

Annie is clearly upset

of cos Maan knows why Geet was irritated and went to fetch her

good that Maan confronted Geet and wanted to say that she was affected with him being with Pari

alas Geet will not admit it

feeling for Maan...

why is Geet doing this?

hate seeing the distance between Maaneet

hmm Maan is jealous and angry as Annie's guy friends are flirting with Geet

Geet thinks Maan is not affected

Gosh Maan shouted them

Maan knew Geet feared hiking and tried to stop her but Geet mistook him

adore this possessive Maan

loved that he went to help Geet and explained to her

wow the old Geet is surfacing.... but only for Maan

sad that they again argued

Geet is naturally upset seeing Maan with Pari

oh no Geet resolves to keep her distance from Maan

will Pari bring them closer?

update soon

Geet start working with Maan and he guiding her very well so she can handle her own business with Brij

Maan friends and Annie friends going

camping Annie insist to take Geet too

And Maan went to bring her from her place bz she said she come by taxi but in comping both getting jealous sometimes with Annie's friends and sometime Geet seeing Pari

Pari understanding them but they both mu each other

Nice part ❤️

Geet working with Maan 🤗 and he give her dead projects,she realised he try to help her and training her so she can handle Handa groups.maan get jealous when boys try to flert with geet and

Geet also jealous of pari

Thank you for update 😊❤️

Great update! Thank you so much. Maan just wants her to confess and she is still stubborn and thinks she does not deserve him now and he is happy with Pari. That’s what happens when you get two stubborn individuals.

Maan is jealous and still wants to be the one to help and care for her. You can’t blame him as that was all he ever did when he grew up and despite being hurt and angry, his heart still wants that same bond with her.

Something needs to happen, where Geet gets hurt and our hero comes and saves her ( obviously will shout at her too) and they need to lose the rest of the group and have a heart to heart.... lol. Don’t see it happening but who knows.