Sai FF 'Afterglow' - Epilogue pg. 61 (new) - Page 35

Thanks for tagging me...

I just want sai to be happy if it is with sumit or with solo journey anything is fine.

This time i want sai shud take her own decision..not under some one influence.

New entry.... interesting...

What happened suddenly when everything was going fine?

Ok... I don't know what you have in mind... if end game is not SaiRat, then I could not read that... I feel weird....still sort of attached to SaiRat.... please let me know if SaiRat is end game or not...

Till now story was very interesting and liked the way chavans were regretting.... brilliant plot 👏🏻...

I guess you got confused... These are two separate stories. This one has always been non SaiRat.

This one has Dr. Sumit as a probable lead for Sai. In case you haven't read, do so from the start.

But if you feel you cannot imagine Sai without V... No issues... Won't tag you henceforth in this one. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Moor278

I guess you got confused... These are two separate stories. This one has always been non SaiRat.

This one has Dr. Sumit as a probable lead for Sai. In case you haven't read, do so from the start.

But if you feel you cannot imagine Sai without V... No issues... Won't tag you henceforth in this one. 👍🏼

Ohh.. yes... I got confused....

you have written SaiRat FF right... so I thought this is story of Sai and Virat...

Please don't tag me in this...

Yes indeed.. thanks for pointing it out 😆

Will change that to avoid further confusion 😃😃

I absolutely understand where you are coming from. I have been sitting with "Love..Thy Destiny", not being able to connect back. Missing that flow. It is special to me because I only retained the character names with a completely different storyline. So it's a fragment of my imagination in its entirety (more or less). So hate to leave it unfinished. Yet the show's fiasco took a toll on me.

Glad you could recover and resume this.❤️ Looking forward to see how you revive the hope and positiveness in Sai and allow herself another chance. I also want to see how to draw the parallel between Sumit and V. It will be interesting. It is something we have conversed on a alot. Sai never had any men in her life apart from V and hence she knows no other form of love, marriage.

Waiting for the next update

Originally posted by: Rosyme

Will read in some time. Thanks for tagging.

Read everything now. It's very nicely written.

I would prefer Sairat end game. With a beautiful remarriage. Virat trying to meet Sai thru the balcony before the wedding rituals . In ghum they spoilt their remarriage. All Kaira s functions n yrkkh was so good.

First i got confused with your other OS. Now read all these from the beginning. Nicely written. Thanks for tagging.

I have read this before when I was a silent reader, decided to reread again from beginning to remember the story back. Then I will have to give my opinion on the story na..this hand just itches to write whats on my mind😃. But after going through about 20 pages trying to find the next part I just left it. Just a request, can you put the page number for all the parts in the first page😊

Thank God at least here Virat is suspended and the family recognizes his action was wrong. Maybe thats why he realized he was wrong too. I really wanted Sai to wear jeans and tops just like she was in Gadchiroli, and you made it happen here. Anyways, you got me at 'tall lanky fellow' when describing Sumit. Reminded me of how curious V was of Aniket's height🤣.

I loved the second part, 'Virah' (page 5). 'main hi to vo bewakoof hun' is the best part. But Sumit didnt take the divorce as a fault or put the blame on Sai, instead blamed the sasural wale. Sumit sach mein samjhdaar hai👍🏼. He recognized Sai's qualities in just few meets. Add to that his 'gyan' about their profession and being perceptive...wah. Hits right where it should😉. Shankar Mahadevan's voice and add to that the lyrics..well thats the beauty of music. You even made me search for the song because of how you described both Sai and Virat's turmoil through the song👏.

Next part (page 14). Kinda liked the interaction between Virat and Sumit. Feel like 2 matured people. Virat admitting his regret and his love for Sai, and Sumit even being attracted to Sai, puts his friend first before himself. Sai has actually said many times that she cannot turn blind to what is in front of her eyes..him registering Shruti as Mrs Chavan at hotel then the birth certificate are proofs that he himself admitted... she just reacted based on that when he couldnt answer her questions. And I still believe Virat had done wrong to Sai and their marriage with this. Anyways, glad Sai told him what she felt and immediately shut him down.. the chance is gone now.

Tere Rang (page 20). The Chavan's are really 'ruthless' here, completely ignoring him. Kinda felt sad for him when he had realized that he was wrong😒. But no worries, no matter what happens P will never leave him😉. The part where Virat noticed Sai's smirk and her eyes moving to his side..he realizes how the picture is presented to her. It reminded me of the scene when Sai was in hospital and left his hand when P entered. I am liking your Sumit more and more. Open minded and gives sensible advice👍🏼.

Awww... Thank you so much. 🤗

I always love your comments... One they are detailed and somehow you always manage to capture those tiny crumbs I leave in the writeups. .

Guess we think too much alike 😳

I will surely try and update the page numbers. It felt odd to be updating them in the first chapter and then I didn't knew how to add and where.

I had left this story in between but I am trying to finish it. This is completely new for me since this character is something only in my mind. So writing this is a total revelation for me as well. 😊

I have envisioned Sumit as everything we criticize V for!!! The good parts continuing. And for the sake of imagining someone... Shaheer is the one in my mind😉. Mast lagega na Ayesha ke saath? 👍🏼

Edit: pg no updated in title... Do enjoy and I will wait for your comments 😉

I have envisioned Sumit as everything we criticize V for!!!

Is that why I am rooting for him and Sai😳

Never seen any of Shaheer's work but look wise 👍🏼👍🏼

Will definitely read and comment ❤️