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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: aastha12345

y'll know that movie about a lil girl that gets adopted in a family nd kills all people nd turns out its not actually a lil girl but a 27 year old woman


American movie ?

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Posted: 3 years ago

yes, I remember hearing about it like 2 years ago, it was called orphan i remember now

mujhe yaad aaya coz abhi uska sequel trailer dekha

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Intriguing hai, but tumne yeh plot ek basic revenge mystery thriller banane ke aim se hi likha hai kya ??

Bcz plot thoda basic lagg raha hai.

honestly bolu toh kaafi accha hai but i loved ur some other thriller plots more than this.

Yeh plot bhi bahut acchese work kar sakta hai if it executed properly.

Waise poore plot me sirf ek loophole mila mujhe, imean agr woh jail gayi thi toh phir usse already company ne naukri se nikala hoga, phir woh jab wapas naukri pe gayi toh usse suspend kyu kiya office se gayab hone ke liye. Jitna maine dekha hai dramas me usse itna pata hai ki mostly agr kisi wajah se tumhe jail hoti hai toh office wale immediately job se nikal dete hai bus yahi ek loophole mila otherwise its properly written plot.

Edited by IamRaj96 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: IamRaj96

Intriguing hai, but tumne yeh plot ek basic revenge mystery thriller banane ke aim se hi likha hai kya ??

Bcz plot thoda basic lagg raha hai.

honestly bolu toh kaafi accha hai but i loved ur some other thriller plots more than this.

Yeh plot bhi bahut acchese work kar sakta hai if it executed properly.

Waise poore plot me sirf ek loophole mila mujhe, imean agr woh jail gayi thi toh phir usse already company ne naukri se nikala hoga, phir woh jab wapas naukri pe gayi toh usse suspend kyu kiya office se gayab hone ke liye. Jitna maine dekha hai dramas me usse itna pata hai ki mostly agr kisi wajah se tumhe jail hoti hai toh office wale immediately job se nikal dete hai bus yahi ek loophole mila otherwise its properly written plot.


Filhaal i am writing another plot. And this plot might look funny but really bonechilling.

Edited by Arko1 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Arko1


Filhaal i am writing another plot aur ye wala plot thoda zyaada hi bonechilling honewala hai so get ready. 🥶

Tumne abtak kaafi urban character driven thrillers likhe hai right ??

Yeh upar wala thriller likhne ke baad i want u try something rural plot driven thriller.


Ek basic idea deta hu ki story kaisi ho.


In this story setting should be rural/countryside area. Story should be plot driven not character driven. Isme leads jitne bhi ho sabko equal imprtance ho, koi bhi main lead naa ho.

Lead characters more than 6-7 ho, kaafi varied characters ho rural area ke. Story kaafi complicated and detailed ho. Isme tum horror, mystery, supernatural kuch bhi daal sakte ho but thoda realistic lage. Supernatural daala toh uske piche kuch explanation ho ya end me ek foul play ho aisa dikhe.

Happy ending is not needed. Lead characters ka backstory bhi plot me involve kar sakte ho.

Romance should not be included.

Lead characters almost sabhi age ke daal sakte ho from age of 10 to 90.

Leads working ho jaruri nhi, kuch berojgaar ho, koi mental ho aisa kuch bhi add kar sakte ho. Everyone should get equal importance and har ek lead character ke bina story will be incomplete aise incorporate karo unko.

Koi particular villain naa ho toh bhi chalega, story aage badhane har lead character situational villain banega toh better rahega

Aur haa typical rural characters bhi mat rakho and naa hi kaafi urban.

Plot something out of the box hona chahiye.

Abhi aajke aaj likhke mat post karo, 4-5 din lo, 2-3 baar plot likhke phir se tum kya add kar sakte ho nd kidhar loophole raha kya yeh check kro. And then next thursday-friday post karo.


Reference ke liye OCN countryside thrillers le lo naa ki amazon ka mirzapur 🤭🤭.


Iam quite sure tumne aisa kuch likha nhi hoga toh tumhe bahut mazaa ayega likhne me yeh.

Edited by IamRaj96 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Dekho. 🥶



Sweet Woman is a scifi psychological romantic horror thriller series. Set in the year 2038, Jiana is a sweet, humble and charming beauty who seduces people's taste buds through her baking skills. She runs a bakery business meanwhile her husband Rohit is the CEO of an electronic gadgets company and recently they had launched a new product called Terrorcaller (This is a gadget that identifies whether the person is normal or has some serious disorder). At first when he uses the gadget on Jiana for a trial it shows her normal but later the gadget react abnormally and ultimately shows psychopathic traits inside her. Slowly it is revealed that during an experimental failure, she steals the gadget call mealbox. The purpose of this gadget was to turn an exotic meal from a bunch of ingredients but failure happens with it turning humans and animals into sweet food items. Later the most horrific revealation happens when it is revealed that Jiana has no baking skills, she turns people into baking items and sells them. She had even eaten a lot of cakes in short she is a serial killer who has killed many people. When Rohit comes to know about the mealbox being stolen he asks Jiana to search it everywhere in the house. On the other hand, Jiana gets furious when Rohit ask her to do so. She is attached to the mealbox and will not give it to anymore. When Rohit come to know from Terrorcaller about Jiana's psychopath nature he gets frightened but till then Jiana finds him and turns him into a candy and sucks it ultimately killing him. She remembers how in her childhood her father's sweet factory caught fire due to her father's stupidity, it enraged her and she killed her father, when mother saw her doing so she tried to stop her but she got killed too by her daughter. At present, Naina, Jiana's sister in law comes for a stay and looks for her brother but Jiana tells her that he is on a trip with his colleague for a couple of days. Naina suspects Jiana's words, Naina who is a detective calls her brother nth times but its unreachable as Jiana had burned Rohit's phone. Naina contacts with Rohit's office colleagues secretly and tells them about Rohit's disappearance. Later she gets shocked to know Rohit's disappearance has nothing to do with office trip. All of them start suspecting Jiana and on the other hand Jiana plans to kill Naina but before she could do this she sees the Mealbox is missing. It frustates Jiana and she start losing her sanity. On the other hand, Naina gets called by someone and informed that the person is carrying the mealbox. Naina gets shocked and immediately reaches to that person. And the person turns out to be Vicky (Rohit's best friend). He tells Naina that he saw it with his own eyes how Jiana turned Rohit into a cake and ate him, Naina bursts out in tears after hearing the horrific end of Rohit and gets alerted and informs the cops to arrest Jiana. But when the cops reach they are shocked to see the house on fire and Jiana missing. Everyone search for Jiana and through many advance technologies everybody in the city is informed that Jiana is a psychopath. At night, everyone finally traces Jiana at an auditorium where Jiana accepts all her crimes but it was only for a while until she smiles and snatches the Mealbox from Naina and first transforms her into a pastry then turns everyone present at the auditorium into sweets. In the end, now its dinner time for Jiana so she puts all the pastries on a plate and enjoys them. Atlast she smiles looking at mealbox and kisses the meal box. Through her action she tells everyone that it was her and mealbox's lovestory. :)

Edited by Arko1 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

This was really uniques and never heard before plot. I loved plot but still turning hunans into meal doesnt really go well with me. Matlb kitna bhi advance hojaye hum its still imposdible. Either turn her into sone kind of witch or change that particular plot.


You can make her husband sone kind of man who is expert in witchcraft. And uske lab se woh kuch leke starts turning everybody inti meal aosa karo. Aur plot ko present tym me set karo.


Ya phir second option me plot future me hi set karo lekin koi aur gadget nikalo jisse woh logo ko control me karwake unse khud se suicide ya kuch karwati thi aisa.


Baaki i 100% loved the whole unique plot.

Edited by IamRaj96 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: IamRaj96

Tumne abtak kaafi urban character driven thrillers likhe hai right ??

Yeh upar wala thriller likhne ke baad i want u try something rural plot driven thriller.


Ek basic idea deta hu ki story kaisi ho.


In this story setting should be rural/countryside area. Story should be plot driven not character driven. Isme leads jitne bhi ho sabko equal imprtance ho, koi bhi main lead naa ho.

Lead characters more than 6-7 ho, kaafi varied characters ho rural area ke. Story kaafi complicated and detailed ho. Isme tum horror, mystery, supernatural kuch bhi daal sakte ho but thoda realistic lage. Supernatural daala toh uske piche kuch explanation ho ya end me ek foul play ho aisa dikhe.

Happy ending is not needed. Lead characters ka backstory bhi plot me involve kar sakte ho.

Romance should not be included.

Lead characters almost sabhi age ke daal sakte ho from age of 10 to 90.

Leads working ho jaruri nhi, kuch berojgaar ho, koi mental ho aisa kuch bhi add kar sakte ho. Everyone should get equal importance and har ek lead character ke bina story will be incomplete aise incorporate karo unko.

Koi particular villain naa ho toh bhi chalega, story aage badhane har lead character situational villain banega toh better rahega

Aur haa typical rural characters bhi mat rakho and naa hi kaafi urban.

Plot something out of the box hona chahiye.

Abhi aajke aaj likhke mat post karo, 4-5 din lo, 2-3 baar plot likhke phir se tum kya add kar sakte ho nd kidhar loophole raha kya yeh check kro. And then next thursday-friday post karo.


Reference ke liye OCN countryside thrillers le lo naa ki amazon ka mirzapur 🤭🤭.


Iam quite sure tumne aisa kuch likha nhi hoga toh tumhe bahut mazaa ayega likhne me yeh.


Already likh rakha thaa. 🤭




Bad Guy is a supernatural thriller series. Set in a rural area where dark clouds are constant above small and broken houses, frustated by his life, a young teenager decide to finish his life when he is stopped by a tresspasser who gifts him a bottle of alchohol. Unaware of what it is actually he drinks it for the first time thinking his all stress will be vanished but he had no idea that that some evil spells are mixed in the liquor which will slowly turn him into an angry, evil and vengeful person. The liquor intoxicates him and he slowly start turning into an evil. But his best friend who is the daughter of a famous exorcist in the village, initiates a fight with the devil inside him in order to finish the liquor effect that lasts for more than a month only if he dont keep drinking it again. Also who is the tresspassers who brought him another misery to end all his miseries. SPOILERS, with the help of the liquor effect he burn down his house killing his foster family the ones who use to make him sell his handsome body to the village ladies who are widows, murders a middle aged man who sexually abused him when he was playing with his cows, mercifully killed an old woman whose miseries made him annoyed after a point as she kept on going on and on with her miseries without listening to what he is going through, killed his high school teacher for whiping him, tortured all his bullies and then brutally killed them. He kept commiting crimes for avenging but afterwards commiting crimes and murdering villagers became his habit and he then started killing for fun. To stop his terror, FL sacrificed herself and finished his liquor effect but after realizing that he killed many lives under the possession, he breakdown and amputate his hand. The series ends with the disclosure tresspasser turning out to be the ML himself who came from future to change his past and make new memories, the liquid was a highly powerful energy drink which was made by future FL (Future ML's wife) who had turned into a big exorcist. But future FL has turned very greedy and dark woman so to kill her and all his past demons, ML changes his whole past. Atlast future ML goes back to the future with an amputated hand but with an evil smirk.


This is the title track -


https://youtu.be/qcRQnflR6N8

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: IamRaj96

This was really uniques and never heard before plot. I loved plot but still turning hunans into meal doesnt really go well with me. Matlb kitna bhi advance hojaye hum its still imposdible. Either turn her into sone kind of witch or change that particular plot.


You can make her husband sone kind of man who is expert in witchcraft. And uske lab se woh kuch leke starts turning everybody inti meal aosa karo. Aur plot ko present tym me set karo.


Ya phir second option me plot future me hi set karo lekin koi aur gadget nikalo jisse woh logo ko control me karwake unse khud se suicide ya kuch karwati thi aisa.


Baaki i 100% loved the whole unique plot.


Let it be whatever it is bas ek kaam karta hoon isme comedy genre add kardeta hoon toh hogaya scifi horror comedy romantic thriller. 😈


Kyunki ye plot hai hi itna funny ki dark comedy nahi hui toh pheenka lagega ekdam. 🤭🤭

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