Raya SHORT STORY: Tvam, Mama Jevana Hetuna(NOW ON WATTPAD, note Pg.20) - Page 10

Originally posted by: DazzlingLight

SB..this is too good! I love the pace at which the story is progressing, giving time to unpack all the emotions of R & P in this new joyride they are setting out on 😊

Love how Shubhu made an entry, perfect sibling vibes! Manraj deserved more screen space, and he would have pulled off the sibling bond with NM beautifully given the chance ❤️

Waiting for the next part now..😊

Originally posted by: Monaparekh12

Awesome update you made my day such a beautiful story can't wait to see raya reaction when they will finally come to know that they are becoming parents can't wait for it already loved how shubham become positive and his bond with his ram bhai and loved raya continue soon

Originally posted by: fkhr30

Priya is pregnant but unaware?

You gotta read in to know what’s happening exactly. Bear with me and the slow burn😁

Originally posted by: tina_1234

Nice cute story

This support and your cheers push me to write more for you guys. 💓 next part coming up soon💓

Originally posted by: Poojac2510

I am eagerly waiting for the next part.

Please update asap.

I love Shubham in this story.

Originally posted by: Anonymmus

SB darling, god! Now this is the perfect distraction from my stupid exams!!! Ahh, how much I loved this cannot be expressed. But damnnnn, it was too good. And Yaasss!!! Shubhu teasing Ram about Priya is the best thing ever, it had me laughing so bad. There are so many things in this part that got me, in short it was incredible....

Yaar, aaj he paatha chala ki part 3 aaya hai, u didnt tag me, sad :(. But it's fine, this amazing chapter made it up.

Can't wait for the next <3

Originally posted by: SummerBorn

won’t keep you waiting for long. Shall update as soon as Rits get a little free to edit the part😁 Shubham… ya! That’s how I always imagined him as a brother… someone who is there for Ram in real life and in a way that shows that he MEANS it… that the love is not fake… and that he understands Ram and his goodness and love for his family… so that’s how I chose to shape his character! I am glad that you guys approve

Yes, i will read it tonight. Pakka promise. Off hai mera😂

Originally posted by: RitikaS99

Yes, i will read it tonight. Pakka promise. Off hai mera😂

Originally posted by: DazzlingLight

SB..this is too good! I love the pace at which the story is progressing, giving time to unpack all the emotions of R & P in this new joyride they are setting out on 😊

Love how Shubhu made an entry, perfect sibling vibes! Manraj deserved more screen space, and he would have pulled off the sibling bond with NM beautifully given the chance ❤️

Waiting for the next part now..😊

Originally posted by: vaidharbhi95

Finally u r here author , let me tell u never ever hv I been so impatient for a ff to be updated.. You have driven me crazy , refreshing IF every day to check if you have updated 😂

It was all wait the worth , coz it's so heartwarming and beautiful ..

Sick and vulnerable Priya is not a good sight but the way Ram is extra sensitive to her health as well as her pride to not let anyone know of her state has my entire heart ..❤️

Leaving aside all the romance and passion which u capture so vividly , it is these small involuntary gestures that makes this story so heart warming ..

My fav part .. 😭🥰

Ram must have understood from her facial expressions the thoughts running in her head, for he held out his hand to help her get up from the couch and taking her bag from her hands

Also the way you describe Priya as a queen thorugh Shubham , gosh the bond we deserved to see...

He called his bhabhi “Queen”… because she literally was the queen of his brother’s life, of his life and of Kapoor Mansion and Kapoor Empire. She was the guiding light they searched for all their life and finally got it the day she entered Kapoor Mansion

What an opportunity wasted by the makers..

From Shubham calling Ram sautela to understanding the depth of Priya's words when she said " Mujhe naam lekar batao Shubham is ghar me Mr.Kapoor se zyada kaun apna hai tumhara "

Sigh !! Sigh !! Sigh !! They could have explored so much with Shubhu Shivi redemption and especially Shubham bonding with Pri ..

Keep writing GadaDhari Bheem , your pen is surely mightier than your gada..

In love with your writing ❤️

Already eager for the next part..

Seems you have shifted to eat or not eat precap to the next part..