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Posted: 3 years ago

Something I wrote and posted on the Danish AT...but now its time for it to be on the KTK thread too 😆 Based on Mehak and Shamsher's first meeting and my take on what was going on in Mehak's head.

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(Not) Love At First Sight


Mehak


My heart nearly leaped out of my chest when my father swerved the car, in order to save us from crashing. Nida jumped as my father and uncle half-yelled in anger at the ignorance of the driver who was busy speeding and overtaking most cars around us, causing almost a dozen more accidents.


We slowed at the signal, still disturbed over our near-accident. The silver BMW screeched to a halt, the driver began honking impatiently. A man on a motorcycle in front of the sleek car said something to the driver out of annoyance…only to get smacked repeatedly at the back of his head.


Nida had told me she had dreamed this exact scenario, but with a handsome, prince-like stranger.


However the man in question was a far cry from that. Dressed in all leather with sunglasses which concealed his eyes, not much older than I, he made me go into panic mode the minute he placed a gun on my father’s head. Without think even once I ran upto them, grabbing my father’s arm, apologising profusely to the stranger, the adrenaline causing me to ramble but the horror of losing my father clouding everything else.


The man looked at me and froze, his face masking an expression of something I was not familiar with. Thankfully his lack of action helped me; I managed to drag my father to the car and pushed him in…only to turn and look at the man once again.


A handsome face, undoubtedly, one that could only have been carved by the Almighty…however it was tainted with arrogance, brashness and unfiltered magnanimous ego, which increased my disdain for him, filling my mouth with bile. At that very moment, he smiled, a huge genuine beam spreading across his face, flashing his all-too perfect features. A smile which instantly warmed up his face. A smile, almost as if it were his first real one in years, or possibly his first ever. A smile…for me?


I got into the car, still looking at him from the tinted window of my car. He swayed, almost out of coordination, as if he had suddenly been hit by an intoxicating substance. His friend was finding it difficult to seat him in the passenger seat. It would sound strange to anyone else, but I could vouch for the fact that even with his eyes covered, all this while…he kept on staring in my direction. He was looking for something, seeking something.


No…he wanted something. There was no way a man of his stature would ask. He would take whatever he wanted. The world must be at his feet.


My eyes fell on the number plate of his car…only there was no number. Shamsher, it proudly read.


Shamsher. Brave like a lion.


Yes, definitely a man who had it all.


But what did I have that he would want? Nothing. I only had dreams in my eyes of making my father proud. There was no way a mere middle class girl like me could give anything to a person like him.


The pit in my stomach grew at the thought of the amount of money he must have. The kind of power he must hold. What if…my father’s behaviour had caused problems for us?


No, I mentally scolded myself. He is way too drunk to think straight. I doubt he would even remember this encounter clearly.


I thought of Nida’s dream once again, thinking of how right and wrong I was. Shamsher was not a villain like I had said. He was a prince, albeit of Darkness. He was what nightmares were made of, and I was certain he would be a part of mine until I could put this incident behind me forever.


His face was still crystal clear in front of my eyes as we drove away from this horrific experience, away from the silver BMW, although a small part of me knew and dreaded, this was not the last time I had crossed paths with Shamsher…

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Romantic Reveries

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashley.Tisdale

Something I wrote and posted on the Danish AT...but now its time for it to be on the KTK thread too 😆 Based on Mehak and Shamsher's first meeting and my take on what was going on in Mehak's head.

*************

(Not) Love At First Sight


Mehak


My heart nearly leaped out of my chest when my father swerved the car, in order to save us from crashing. Nida jumped as my father and uncle half-yelled in anger at the ignorance of the driver who was busy speeding and overtaking most cars around us, causing almost a dozen more accidents.


We slowed at the signal, still disturbed over our near-accident. The silver BMW screeched to a halt, the driver began honking impatiently. A man on a motorcycle in front of the sleek car said something to the driver out of annoyance…only to get smacked repeatedly at the back of his head.


Nida had told me she had dreamed this exact scenario, but with a handsome, prince-like stranger.


However the man in question was a far cry from that. Dressed in all leather with sunglasses which concealed his eyes, not much older than I, he made me go into panic mode the minute he placed a gun on my father’s head. Without think even once I ran upto them, grabbing my father’s arm, apologising profusely to the stranger, the adrenaline causing me to ramble but the horror of losing my father clouding everything else.


The man looked at me and froze, his face masking an expression of something I was not familiar with. Thankfully his lack of action helped me; I managed to drag my father to the car and pushed him in…only to turn and look at the man once again.


A handsome face, undoubtedly, one that could only have been carved by the Almighty…however it was tainted with arrogance, brashness and unfiltered magnanimous ego, which increased my disdain for him, filling my mouth with bile. At that very moment, he smiled, a huge genuine beam spreading across his face, flashing his all-too perfect features. A smile which instantly warmed up his face. A smile, almost as if it were his first real one in years, or possibly his first ever. A smile…for me?


I got into the car, still looking at him from the tinted window of my car. He swayed, almost out of coordination, as if he had suddenly been hit by an intoxicating substance. His friend was finding it difficult to seat him in the passenger seat. It would sound strange to anyone else, but I could vouch for the fact that even with his eyes covered, all this while…he kept on staring in my direction. He was looking for something, seeking something.


No…he wanted something. There was no way a man of his stature would ask. He would take whatever he wanted. The world must be at his feet.


My eyes fell on the number plate of his car…only there was no number. Shamsher, it proudly read.


Shamsher. Brave like a lion.


Yes, definitely a man who had it all.


But what did I have that he would want? Nothing. I only had dreams in my eyes of making my father proud. There was no way a mere middle class girl like me could give anything to a person like him.


The pit in my stomach grew at the thought of the amount of money he must have. The kind of power he must hold. What if…my father’s behaviour had caused problems for us?


No, I mentally scolded myself. He is way too drunk to think straight. I doubt he would even remember this encounter clearly.


I thought of Nida’s dream once again, thinking of how right and wrong I was. Shamsher was not a villain like I had said. He was a prince, albeit of Darkness. He was what nightmares were made of, and I was certain he would be a part of mine until I could put this incident behind me forever.


His face was still crystal clear in front of my eyes as we drove away from this horrific experience, away from the silver BMW, although a small part of me knew and dreaded, this was not the last time I had crossed paths with Shamsher…

Wow.This is very interesting. It is gr8 to read the story from Mehek's side, or should I say from your side.😉 It described it very well how a girl never forgets a guy who is stunned by her,😃 even though the circumstances were too scary and the guy is very dangerous.☢️ But this guy is Shamsher , he has the power and the looks. 😳

Plz keep on writing.. and I won't mind if you change the story to make him more likeable 😛

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashley.Tisdale

Something I wrote and posted on the Danish AT...but now its time for it to be on the KTK thread too 😆 Based on Mehak and Shamsher's first meeting and my take on what was going on in Mehak's head.

*************

(Not) Love At First Sight


Mehak


My heart nearly leaped out of my chest when my father swerved the car, in order to save us from crashing. Nida jumped as my father and uncle half-yelled in anger at the ignorance of the driver who was busy speeding and overtaking most cars around us, causing almost a dozen more accidents.


We slowed at the signal, still disturbed over our near-accident. The silver BMW screeched to a halt, the driver began honking impatiently. A man on a motorcycle in front of the sleek car said something to the driver out of annoyance…only to get smacked repeatedly at the back of his head.


Nida had told me she had dreamed this exact scenario, but with a handsome, prince-like stranger.


However the man in question was a far cry from that. Dressed in all leather with sunglasses which concealed his eyes, not much older than I, he made me go into panic mode the minute he placed a gun on my father’s head. Without think even once I ran upto them, grabbing my father’s arm, apologising profusely to the stranger, the adrenaline causing me to ramble but the horror of losing my father clouding everything else.


The man looked at me and froze, his face masking an expression of something I was not familiar with. Thankfully his lack of action helped me; I managed to drag my father to the car and pushed him in…only to turn and look at the man once again.


A handsome face, undoubtedly, one that could only have been carved by the Almighty…however it was tainted with arrogance, brashness and unfiltered magnanimous ego, which increased my disdain for him, filling my mouth with bile. At that very moment, he smiled, a huge genuine beam spreading across his face, flashing his all-too perfect features. A smile which instantly warmed up his face. A smile, almost as if it were his first real one in years, or possibly his first ever. A smile…for me?


I got into the car, still looking at him from the tinted window of my car. He swayed, almost out of coordination, as if he had suddenly been hit by an intoxicating substance. His friend was finding it difficult to seat him in the passenger seat. It would sound strange to anyone else, but I could vouch for the fact that even with his eyes covered, all this while…he kept on staring in my direction. He was looking for something, seeking something.


No…he wanted something. There was no way a man of his stature would ask. He would take whatever he wanted. The world must be at his feet.


My eyes fell on the number plate of his car…only there was no number. Shamsher, it proudly read.


Shamsher. Brave like a lion.


Yes, definitely a man who had it all.


But what did I have that he would want? Nothing. I only had dreams in my eyes of making my father proud. There was no way a mere middle class girl like me could give anything to a person like him.


The pit in my stomach grew at the thought of the amount of money he must have. The kind of power he must hold. What if…my father’s behaviour had caused problems for us?


No, I mentally scolded myself. He is way too drunk to think straight. I doubt he would even remember this encounter clearly.


I thought of Nida’s dream once again, thinking of how right and wrong I was. Shamsher was not a villain like I had said. He was a prince, albeit of Darkness. He was what nightmares were made of, and I was certain he would be a part of mine until I could put this incident behind me forever.


His face was still crystal clear in front of my eyes as we drove away from this horrific experience, away from the silver BMW, although a small part of me knew and dreaded, this was not the last time I had crossed paths with Shamsher…

You are such a brilliant writer Ashley. I wish this was longer

Do tag me whenever you write anything else

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: awida

Wow.This is very interesting. It is gr8 to read the story from Mehek's side, or should I say from your side.😉 It described it very well how a girl never forgets a guy who is stunned by her,😃 even though the circumstances were too scary and the guy is very dangerous.☢️ But this guy is Shamsher , he has the power and the looks. 😳

Plz keep on writing.. and I won't mind if you change the story to make him more likeable 😛

Thank you so much 😊

This is actually the first time I haven't written from my viewpoint 😆 Otherwise it would turn into a Danish simping drabble 😆


Yeah well...she aint in love with him and obv is scared 😆

The entire point is that she doesn't romanticise him. She acknowledges his looks and personality, but she knows he isn't a good person.

That's also what the writers are trying to show...I just put those same thoughts in my words.


I will most definitely continue and will keep an eye out to make him more likeable in the future, maybe tweaking the character's crazy traits 😆


Actually, I have written quite a bit on various Danish characters, so my question to you is, can you handle like outright 18+ romances or what, then I can tag you in like all of them 🤣

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Danish Taimoor

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: evilxbalaa

You are such a brilliant writer Ashley. I wish this was longer

Do tag me whenever you write anything else

Thank you Hinna 😊

Well...so far the KTK stories are based on scenes coz I don't know enough about the characters to spin my own story.

I'll ask you the same question as I asked Awida: can you handle 18+ fanfictions 😆 Coz I have one on Sultan which is on going and will have around 15 chapters in total. I can tag you the next time 😆

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Hammad&Imaan (KAM)

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashley.Tisdale

Thank you Hinna 😊

Well...so far the KTK stories are based on scenes coz I don't know enough about the characters to spin my own story.

I'll ask you the same question as I asked Awida: can you handle 18+ fanfictions 😆 Coz I have one on Sultan which is on going and will have around 15 chapters in total. I can tag you the next time 😆

Dude you will be shocked if you see what books I read🤣 Lets just say they are the darkest they can be😈

Do tag me...is it the same story I was reading in the Danish AT?? The Sultan one but I forgot the name now. I have been waiting for you to continue it since forever

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: evilxbalaa

Dude you will be shocked if you see what books I read🤣 Lets just say they are the darkest they can be😈

Do tag me...is it the same story I was reading in the Danish AT?? The Sultan one but I forgot the name now. I have been waiting for you to continue it since forever

High 5, you need to see the Tumblr content I read, dank af 😈😆


Just go to the Danish AT's first page, the entire index is there. All my fics are listed with various characters.


For the Sultan fic, you might have missed 2 chapters or so 😆 Just see the index and you'll know. 😆

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Hammad&Imaan (KAM)

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashley.Tisdale

High 5, you need to see the Tumblr content I read, dank af 😈😆


Just go to the Danish AT's first page, the entire index is there. All my fics are listed with various characters.


For the Sultan fic, you might have missed 2 chapters or so 😆 Just see the index and you'll know. 😆

Oh wow, I havent checked the AT in ages. Ill have to catch up then

Oh do you also read dark romance like me? I am all ears if you have any recommendations☺️

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Danish Taimoor

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: evilxbalaa

Oh wow, I havent checked the AT in ages. Ill have to catch up then

Oh do you also read dark romance like me? I am all ears if you have any recommendations☺️

Yup, go on and read it, I'll wait for your review 😆


I haven't read any books off late but I'll give you a few:

Captive in the dark - CJ Roberts

His - Aubrey Dark

Buttons and Lace - Penelope Sky

Born Sinner - SL Dennings

Dark Series - Winter Renshaw

After Dark Series - Kahlen Aymes

All of Rebecca Chance's books are freakin hot ☺️☺️😆


Btw I love Tumblr fanfiction too, of any fictional character you like ☺️☺️ I mean Hollywood characters coz that's what they really write about ☺️😆

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