Raya SHORT STORY: Tvam, Mama Jevana Hetuna(NOW ON WATTPAD, note Pg.20) - Page 3

Wow!!! I loved it...

Waiting for the next one so badly
I loved the way you elaborated on their intimacy❤️, so pure, full of love... can't wait for the suspense...

This is amazing!!!

Originally posted by: TheCoolDocSid

Awww, you called yourself greeshmaputri! OFC! THATS MY NAME NOW... SOUNDS VERY RAJSI!🙃

It was my pleasure , Ma Cherie! AHHHH! ITS FRENCH

I am yet to read many os and ff and ts that I have been tagged…

but in the name of editing/christening the ff, I read yours atleast a dozen times😆 YA! I KNOW... IF ONLY I CAN GET SUCH ENTHUSIASTIC READERS IN REAL LIFE TOO, I'LL ONE DAY WRITE A BOOK😂

From original to now…it transformed from hot mess to cute mush! 🤭😍 THE HOT MESS THAT NEVER MADE IT TO THE FINAL POST FOR "REASONS" ONLY WE KNOW

and I can’t wait for the next part 😉

Originally posted by: DazzlingLight

Thank you for posting your story..been waiting to read 😊

Was it worth the wait? A resounding yes! ❤️ Awwww! Honey, you dont know how much it means to me to know i dodnt bore you guys!🙃

The way their relationship, understanding, intimacy was established in the beginning was simply beautiful! Yeh 'active' Ram & Priya mujhe bade acche lage ☺️ Mere Ram Priya hai... they gotta keep pace with toh they gotta keep pace with the foreign fictional character😂

I want the next part to be where it's leading to, but I'm curious to see where the story goes from here!

I hope you have the next part waiting in the wings..zyaada intezaar nahin hoga 😆

Originally posted by: TheCoolDocSid

no, I get it… I was just… you know…😆

How do I explain it?🤔🙈

sometimes being the oblivious to the obvious can be endearing, and I tried pulling that ☺️ ,

glad that you loved it! 🤗

All writing is strictly sb’s.

We just pushed and pulled her to put it out. 😆

Originally posted by: DahtPluviophile

In simpler words you were being Joey from friends!! 😆

Originally posted by: RitikaS99

Awww...you finally posted this, so happy, much much love to you and this story. 🥳🥳

Now everyone will know what talent you have been hiding from everyone. making me blush😅

And I'm always happy to help❤️ and as CDS said it was a pleasure from the first draft to the final one❤️ cheers to us for building something innocent out of that what was not-so-innocent😂

Can't wait for the next part⏳, tick-tock tick-tock⏰

Also please explain the meaning of the title to me. I dont speak malyalam 😅😅😅

Toh i think i'll let her do the honours of explaining the meaning to you🙃

Originally posted by: NoviceWriter

Loved it😍

Priya ke mood swings and her putting ram through hell🤣

Thank you for this as we would never get to see something this brilliant in the show! And i really wanted this track in the show... had so much potential for then to be cutely in love while they explored this phase

You certainly have a way with words! Eagerly waiting for the next part

Originally posted by: Doodle

Cool! What to expect when expecting? 😆

You know the part where you talk about the secret code - three taps - you got me there. Love, love, love it! I can completely visualize how to direct that scene. How romantic that one is and how ingenious! ❤️

Originally posted by: vaidharbhi95

Too good Gadadhari Bheem !!

Very romantic , cannot wait for the next part !! 🥰

Sick Pri makes me feel sad , hope everything gets sorted , come back super soon with the next part

Originally posted by: Hero_Coconut

Saving my spot here baad mein aati hoon🤗

My, my, you made us wait for so long and now I understand why!!! You were perfecting this piece to make it this beautiful and dreamy. Nai nai. Mere phone ne mujhe beech raah mein dhokha de diya mujhe and then it took me almost a week to figure out the editing apps in android... but i did it🙃

The moments we didn't get to watch in the show, you've made us day dream and feel all those emotions. It's so endearing to see how Priya is feeling and to see the extent to how love has changed her. It would have been so good to watch something like this on screen. I am bummed about the factbthat we didnt... so we only have to rely on our imagination now🤷🏻‍♀️

The moment I read Priya has been tired, I could tell where this is going and I'm so happy for them. This is the gift Priya was waiting to let Ram know how much she loves him. Can't wait for their reactions❤️ yeh toh pehle din se hi sabko pata hai k plot kya hai bas story ni pata(even i dont know... i dont plan my stories before hand so most often i too dont know what i am going to write in the next scene...😂 even i am inquisitive to see where this story goes😂😂😂)

Is Ram going to take her to the doctor instead of the cinema? After all he's Mr. Kapoor, industrialist from Bandra 😂 YOU NEVER KNOW AND MAIN BATA NI RAHA... YEH JAANANE K LIYE PADHEIN PART TWO JOH JALD AA RAHA HAI AAPKE FORUM PE😂

Hope you don't make us wait that long for the next part.. I'm your fan👏