Raya SHORT STORY: Tvam, Mama Jevana Hetuna(NOW ON WATTPAD, note Pg.20) - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: DahtPluviophile

Lol come on! We'd be blind to not notice the twist it's literally written all over there that too in bold!! 😂😭

But seriously, ig you too helped out with writing this. You guys have done so well, this first one was so lighthearted and fun tp read! Good job ❤

no, I get it… I was just… you know…😆

How do I explain it?🤔🙈

sometimes being the oblivious to the obvious can be endearing, and I tried pulling that ☺️ ,

glad that you loved it! 🤗

All writing is strictly sb’s.

We just pushed and pulled her to put it out. 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: TheCoolDocSid

no, I get it… I was just… you know…😆

How do I explain it?🤔🙈

sometimes being the oblivious to the obvious can be endearing, and I tried pulling that ☺️ ,

glad that you loved it! 🤗

All writing is strictly sb’s.

We just pushed and pulled her to put it out. 😆

In simpler words you were being Joey from friends!! 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

Awww...you finally posted this, so happy, much much love to you and this story. 🥳🥳

Now everyone will know what talent you have been hiding from everyone.

And I'm always happy to help❤️ and as CDS said it was a pleasure from the first draft to the final one❤️

Can't wait for the next part⏳, tick-tock tick-tock⏰

Also please explain the meaning of the title to me. I dont speak malyalam 😅😅😅

Edited by RitikaS99 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#14

Loved it😍

Priya ke mood swings and her putting ram through hell🤣

Thank you for this as we would never get to see something this brilliant in the show!

You certainly have a way with words! Eagerly waiting for the next part

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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

Cool! What to expect when expecting? 😆


You know the part where you talk about the secret code - three taps - you got me there. Love, love, love it! I can completely visualize how to direct that scene. How romantic that one is and how ingenious! ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Awesome story continue soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Too good Gadadhari Bheem !!

Very romantic , cannot wait for the next part !! 🥰

Sick Pri makes me feel sad , hope everything gets sorted , come back super soon with the next part

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Such a interesting story.👏

Can't wait to read next part.

Please update soon.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Saving my spot here baad mein aati hoon🤗


My, my, you made us wait for so long and now I understand why!!! You were perfecting this piece to make it this beautiful and dreamy.


The moments we didn't get to watch in the show, you've made us day dream and feel all those emotions. It's so endearing to see how Priya is feeling and to see the extent to how love has changed her.


The moment I read Priya has been tired, I could tell where this is going and I'm so happy for them. This is the gift Priya was waiting to let Ram know how much she loves him. Can't wait for their reactions❤️


Is Ram going to take her to the doctor instead of the cinema? After all he's Mr. Kapoor, industrialist from Bandra 😂


Hope you don't make us wait that long for the next part.. I'm your fan👏

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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Doodle

Cool! What to expect when expecting? 😆


You know the part where you talk about the secret code - three taps - you got me there. Love, love, love it! I can completely visualize how to direct that scene. How romantic that one is and how ingenious! ❤️


I loved the secret code bit too..and it's so true! Every couple has their own code..and it just comes naturally once you have spent time together. Sometimes it's a word, sometimes and expression or an action. ❤️

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