Wow!!! I loved it...
Waiting for the next one so badly
I loved the way you elaborated on their intimacyā¤ļø, so pure, full of love... can't wait for the suspense...
This is amazing!!!
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Wow!!! I loved it...
Waiting for the next one so badly
I loved the way you elaborated on their intimacyā¤ļø, so pure, full of love... can't wait for the suspense...
This is amazing!!!
SOON SOON! MAYBE TODAY OR TOMORROW... WHENEVER YOU'LL BE UP FOR ITOriginally posted by: TheCoolDocSid
Awww, you called yourself greeshmaputri!
OFC! THATS MY NAME NOW... SOUNDS VERY RAJSI!š
It was my pleasure , Ma Cherie!
AHHHH! ITS FRENCH
I am yet to read many os and ff and ts that I have been taggedā¦
but in the name of editing/christening the ff, I read yours atleast a dozen timesš YA! I KNOW... IF ONLY I CAN GET SUCH ENTHUSIASTIC READERS IN REAL LIFE TOO, I'LL ONE DAY WRITE A BOOKš
From original to nowā¦it transformed from hot mess to cute mush! š¤š THE HOT MESS THAT NEVER MADE IT TO THE FINAL POST FOR "REASONS" ONLY WE KNOW
and I canāt wait for the next part š
NAHI NAHI! Ab thodi himmat aa gayi k i can write okay-ish stuff... himmat k people wont throw tamatar and ande at me for writing trash stuff... so wont keep you waiting for longšOriginally posted by: DazzlingLight
Thank you for posting your story..been waiting to read š
Was it worth the wait? A resounding yes! ā¤ļø Awwww! Honey, you dont know how much it means to me to know i dodnt bore you guys!š
The way their relationship, understanding, intimacy was established in the beginning was simply beautiful! Yeh 'active' Ram & Priya mujhe bade acche lage āŗļø Mere Ram Priya hai... they gotta keep pace with toh they gotta keep pace with the foreign fictional characterš
I want the next part to be where it's leading to, but I'm curious to see where the story goes from here!
I hope you have the next part waiting in the wings..zyaada intezaar nahin hoga š
Quite literally and very diligently you worked to make me post it... Persuasion level-- BESHT!Originally posted by: TheCoolDocSid
no, I get it⦠I was just⦠you knowā¦š
How do I explain it?š¤š
sometimes being the oblivious to the obvious can be endearing, and I tried pulling that āŗļø ,
glad that you loved it! š¤
All writing is strictly sbās.
We just pushed and pulled her to put it out. š
looks i found the joey to my chandler...
aiyooo murugan! I dont speak malyalam either... and its sanskrit not malayalam! But the christening was done for this baby of mine by of its two god mothers... CDS( rits you are the second god mother... just to be clear)Originally posted by: RitikaS99
Awww...you finally posted this, so happy, much much love to you and this story. š„³š„³
Now everyone will know what talent you have been hiding from everyone. making me blushš
And I'm always happy to helpā¤ļø and as CDS said it was a pleasure from the first draft to the final oneā¤ļø cheers to us for building something innocent out of that what was not-so-innocentš
Can't wait for the next partā³, tick-tock tick-tockā°
Also please explain the meaning of the title to me. I dont speak malyalam š š š
Toh i think i'll let her do the honours of explaining the meaning to youš
THANK YOU... for showering so much love on me and my forst ever fiction pieceOriginally posted by: NoviceWriter
Loved itš
Priya ke mood swings and her putting ram through hellš¤£
Thank you for this as we would never get to see something this brilliant in the show! And i really wanted this track in the show... had so much potential for then to be cutely in love while they explored this phase
You certainly have a way with words! Eagerly waiting for the next part
Doods you speak the language of my heart..šš i have mentally visualised and directed each of these scenes... and you called the scene ingenious𤩠thats the biggest compliment for me from our most creative forum and group memberšCool! What to expect when expecting? š
You know the part where you talk about the secret code - three taps - you got me there. Love, love, love it! I can completely visualize how to direct that scene. How romantic that one is and how ingenious! ā¤ļø
bahut jald! Its almost ready... bas final touches left...Originally posted by: vaidharbhi95
Too good Gadadhari Bheem !!
Very romantic , cannot wait for the next part !! š„°
Sick Pri makes me feel sad , hope everything gets sorted , come back super soon with the next part
PART TWO COMING UP SOONOriginally posted by: Hero_Coconut
Saving my spot here baad mein aati hoonš¤
My, my, you made us wait for so long and now I understand why!!! You were perfecting this piece to make it this beautiful and dreamy. Nai nai. Mere phone ne mujhe beech raah mein dhokha de diya mujhe and then it took me almost a week to figure out the editing apps in android... but i did itš
The moments we didn't get to watch in the show, you've made us day dream and feel all those emotions. It's so endearing to see how Priya is feeling and to see the extent to how love has changed her. It would have been so good to watch something like this on screen. I am bummed about the factbthat we didnt... so we only have to rely on our imagination nowš¤·š»āāļø
The moment I read Priya has been tired, I could tell where this is going and I'm so happy for them. This is the gift Priya was waiting to let Ram know how much she loves him. Can't wait for their reactionsā¤ļø yeh toh pehle din se hi sabko pata hai k plot kya hai bas story ni pata(even i dont know... i dont plan my stories before hand so most often i too dont know what i am going to write in the next scene...š even i am inquisitive to see where this story goesššš)
Is Ram going to take her to the doctor instead of the cinema? After all he's Mr. Kapoor, industrialist from Bandra š YOU NEVER KNOW AND MAIN BATA NI RAHA... YEH JAANANE K LIYE PADHEIN PART TWO JOH JALD AA RAHA HAI AAPKE FORUM PEš
Hope you don't make us wait that long for the next part.. I'm your fanš