ZDMN EDT#19| 16/5 - pg 111 - Page 56

Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

Apni maa aur uske sapne ko bhul chuki hai kya commando banegi re chinki?

Chinki ko banna hain aadarsh Bahu material

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

I don't think I can ever find Moran boring, lol. SiMi, Moran, KarZi, Baby, full blown missions, I rarely find them boring. Probably unpopular opinion on forum, par... ab hai toh hai.

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Boring cuz unko overdose ho gaya hai..

Aaj ki harkat dekh kar to yahi soch rahi thi ki Karan ek Commando ho kar bhi apne itne important mission ko side pe rakh k romance kar raha hai? if that kiss was a dream.. it would've been better. Like show how much he wants to be with her but can't rn cuz country is more important.

Originally posted by: kavya1994

Chinki ko banna hain aadarsh Bahu material

Chinki k paas saas sasur bhi nHi hai

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Ma'am, us mein toh bahut zyaada time lagega. You should read it... I mean, if you want.

I have so many things in mind, uska toh 1 thousandth bhi abhi nahi hua. It's going to be like a full blown ITV serial, expect in written and way less dramatic. Toh, poora toh ek go mein padh bhi nahi paogi.

😆 I can spend my whole day in reading if I found it interesting 😆

How many chapter u have planned to write ? 50 /100 or more than that ?

Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

Chinki k paas saas sasur bhi nHi hai

Mr and Mrs Batra hain na😆

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

I don't think I can ever find Moran boring, lol. SiMi, Moran, KarZi, Baby, full blown missions, I rarely find them boring. Probably unpopular opinion on forum, par... ab hai toh hai.

Nope, main bhi hoo 😂

Originally posted by: Sana_Jannat

😆 I can spend my whole day in reading if I found it interesting 😆

How many chapter u have planned to write ? 50 /100 or more than that ?

I don't have chapters planned as such. Mere paas bas content planned hai thoda bahut. Like, I have ideas for 10 missions so far. There can always be more, of course... Abhi toh ek bhi complete nahi hua fic mein. Ek ki bhi starting hai, and it's been 10 chapters. Toh 50 ya 100 se toh zyaada hi hoga... if I have the strength to continue.

Uske alaawa, I had planned for interpersonal bonds and relationship and training and other things toh wo bhi hoga. Toh kaafi chapters honge.

https://www.instagram.com/reel/CchIoosA3LL/?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y=

Things we wish Monu n Karan did.. sadly they just hugged on the street 🤪

Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

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Boring cuz unko overdose ho gaya hai..

Aaj ki harkat dekh kar to yahi soch rahi thi ki Karan ek Commando ho kar bhi apne itne important mission ko side pe rakh k romance kar raha hai? if that kiss was a dream.. it would've been better. Like show how much he wants to be with her but can't rn cuz country is more important.

Exactly those part could be Better .

And Just like u said Day-wise Writer or Writer never check whatever she/he is writing .

that's why pyaar couldn't wait , understanding eachother or understanding a Special Agents Sacrificed & his Duty towards his country run somewhere else infact it forced other person to blown his cover seriously

And That one Forget that Duty towards country should be first priority 🤷🏻‍♀️

it doesn't suit to A cadets and Would be wife of A Commando/Army Officer .

When Writer started to fulfill fans demand instead of noticing what she/he is writing or what was the theme of show then this kind of Idiotic stunt bound to happen.

May be i shouldn't react this way but I'm not Searching logic I just can't accept those part .may be I expected little bit better explanation may be better Scene .

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

please let's not kid ourselves. Monami is nothing but the masooqa now. Whatever she does, however she breathes or thinks is dedicated to her lover. She has no existence. She has no purpose in life.

Chaar din k yaar k liye vidhwa ban gyi bandi smh 🤪

Haan sabhi actually kid hi rahe except Karan, Colonel Batra, Siddhart (to some extent), Bala.

Baki bache bachche hi rahe.