FF: Dooriyan aur Nazdeekiyan part 31 pg 116 - Page 53

Originally posted by: Ishabharatdwaj

OMG, it was magical, how I wish to explore their college life more and more and you make it alive by ur writing, ❤❤❤ Thank you so much dear Isha! I wish the producers would've come up with a prequel on MaAn college life instead of namaste America! I would've loved to see something on this on screen! GauRup would totally rock as college goers!

the best part is this story that there is not unnecessary Shah family involvement, Purposely tried to keep shah family away from this. Thats why the secret affair of MaAn as I don't want any unwanted intruders! 🤬

shaayari was once again ❤❤❤, Thank you for appreciating the shayari! Means a lot! ❤️❤️❤️

waiting for next phase of their life. Hope it's worth the wait!

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Originally posted by: DJ_3

Wonderful noorie, Thank you so much dear DJ! 🤗

I always appreciate how you translate the dialogues from gujrati tot hindi or english for all readers. It's my duty. Being a Gujarati if I want my MaAn to converse in their native language, then it cannot be at the cost of inconveniencing my non Gujarati readers.

I always feel like I watching a play on MaaN story as I read each section and how well you link the story to each characters past. 🤗👏🙌 Thank you so much! I agree. The dialogue heavy format is more like a play. I'm so glad you liked the connection to the past! Sometimes I wonder if readers are able to connect when I keep oscillating several times between past and present in the same part.

My replies in bold. Thanks for the feedback dear! ❤️

Originally posted by: nish_vir

Macchar uthakar le jaaenge🤣This one broke me😆 Finally Nish is back!

I will say this again but you are so so thorough. And you are thorough becoz you have clarity of thoughts and you know how to express them- something I really want to learn from you- this impeccable detailing because I 🥱am super lacklustre at writing these. Aww! Not at all dear. You're too good and in no way can your writing be termed as lack lustre.⭐️ This story is a mix of reality and fiction (as you know 😳)and also because I have a memory like AK, that is partly responsible for the detailed writing.

Lastly, your shayari as always was mind-blowing❤️. Full on mahol banane wali🤣 Thank you so much for appreciating my shayari! ❤️❤️❤️

(Lowkey was expecting more😳...you know what😉)Abhi toh haseen sham ki shuruat huyi hai aur college visit bhi khatm nahi hui hai! So wait for your more! ☺️

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Hey Noorie🤗🤗 hey Tia!🤗🤗

What a beautiful story... Thank you so much dear! Coming from a wonderful writer, like you it means a lot!❤️❤️❤️totally made my day!

I discovered this around two weeks back. As I am not a native hindi speaker, I had to use Google translate🙈🙈 hence the delay... Finally I completed all the chapters... I'm touched to know that you went to such great lengths to read the story! Thanks a lot dear! 🤗🤗🤗blessed to have readers like you! ⭐️

I really admire all the character sketches and arcs you have defined for them. They way you have kept them all in character and such long lovely chapters.It was like reading a love story in a book. I am excited to see how this will proceed❤️ Thank You! I'm happy when readers appreciate MaAn in my story but when they mention about other characters too then I'm truly satisfied! 😊

I love all the chapters....but like we all have favorite chapters in a book. My most most most favorite part is chapter 14. I read and re-read that 5 times... Her guilt was so real. It hit me so much. I loved it. Wow! Part 14 is one of my personal favorite parts as well! It's an honor for me that you liked it so much that you wanted to re read it again and again!💕💕💕

Thank you for writing this... so lovely ♥ Pleasure is entirely mine! Thank you for the detailed feedback!😘😘😘😘

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Originally posted by: Nour21

Hayeeee main marjawa! 😍😍😍 Pleaseeeeeee updateeee sooooooon!

Hey! What can I call you dear? I guess this is the first time you're commenting on my story. Thanks for the appreciation! Means a lot! ❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: SKCS

Stunning. So nostalgic and beautiful ✨❤️

Thank you so much dear SK! Means a lot! 🤗❤️

NOTE: Hello readers! Update will be delayed till Thursday or Friday. Shall tag everyone when I post it.

Originally posted by: tanu90

Thank you so much dear Gargi! 🤗How have you been? Waiting to read the next part of your story. Hope you'll update it soon.

I am good, dear!! How are you?? 🥰🥰

Actually I have a couple of exams approaching😒, so I will probably start updating from june...

Nyccc part dear welldone......sorry for late reply.....and Thanks for tagging me dear ....thanks for long part

my name is radha. and reading your story is a honor!😊