FF: Dooriyan aur Nazdeekiyan part 31 pg 116 - Page 52

Hayeeee main marjawa! 😍😍😍 Pleaseeeeeee updateeee sooooooon!

Hey Noorie🤗🤗

What a beautiful story... I discovered this around two weeks back. As I am not a native hindi speaker, I had to use Google translate🙈🙈 hence the delay... Finally I completed all the chapters... I really admire all the character sketches and arcs you have defined for them. They way you have kept them all in character and such long lovely chapters. It was like reading a love story in a book. I am excited to see how this will proceed❤️

I love all the chapters....but like we all have favorite chapters in a book. My most most most favorite part is chapter 14. I read and re-read that 5 times... Her guilt was so real. It hit me so much. I loved it.

Thank you for writing this... so lovely❤️

Stunning. So nostalgic and beautiful ✨❤️

Thank you so much for tagging me🙌🏽✨👍🏽

Originally posted by: Mita25mita

Congratulations Noorie for the 25th! 🤗🤗I love your poetry as that is what drew me to your story!❤️This update had everything from fun, banter, comedy to romance! Thanks for including Devika! The canteen portion was amazing the best was the last! ☺️☺️

Thank you so much dear Mitu! 🤗Means a lot to me! ❤️So glad you liked the update!

Originally posted by: ektag06

Nooooriieeeee ❤️❤️❤️

No more words to say how beautiful and wholesome this part was. I slept off reading this and I slept happy. I just have one ask - mujhe Mera AK chahiye 🥹🥹🥹💙 and tumhari aur bhi shayaris chahiye. 🧡🧡

Ektaaaaaaa ❤️❤️❤️

Thanks a lot dear! 🤗Tumhare moonh me ghee shakkar! Tumhe tumhara AK jaldi mil jayega! ❤️Aur shayaris toh milti rahengi! Pakka! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: HpTheChosenOne

Enjoyed it dear!! 🤩🤩🤩

Thank you so much dear Gargi! 🤗How have you been? Waiting to read the next part of your story. Hope you'll update it soon.

Originally posted by: Peppss

Your shayari's are always beautiful...they have my heart❤️... congratulations on 25th part...its a treat to read your story...

Hey Priya! Thank you so much for the appreciation and encouragement, dear! ❤️❤️❤️ Means a lot when someone praises my shayaris! 🤗It's a treat to write about MaAn!

This was sooooo beautiful💕💕💕Thank you so much dear Kitty! ❤️❤️❤️

The poems were so apt and loved their friendship and of course romance Thank you for mentioning the poems! Selected the ones which I felt were most apt to convey AK's love. ❤️

I think the makers have been stalking your ff.. They're sending maan to a college date on a bike😍 I guess. I hope the entire college visit turns out to be magical and they show us glimpses of Anu and Anuj both!❤️middle class ghar ki beti ke adhoore sapno ka saga na bana de!

Loved it as usual!!! Was waiting impatiently the entire sunday!! Aww! I'm so sorry dear! Got busy with some urgent work hence the update was delayed. But chalo, I'm glad it was worth the wait.

Can't wait for Wednesday now❤

P.S. congratulations on your 25th part!!🥳Thank you dear!❤️🤗

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Originally posted by: Nashadkhanum

can I tell this was the best part of the whole book❤️..its a full fledged book😊..anyone can make this as a series..

Hey Nash! Wow! That's a totally unexpected complement! I'm humbled. Thanks a ton dear!❤️❤️❤️Means a lot!

fab job yaar the way u connect with us..and ua hindi and Gujarati is fantastic 👏Thank you dear! Gujarati is my mother tongue so that's why. ..congratulations to u and us for 25th chapters of this book..🤗..if I had to recommend any book of maan to the people i would recommend this first.. ..thank you for 25 lovely parts of maan n their romance understanding support and memories with the bonus of bunty samar and devika👏 Bas kar yaar, rulayegi kya!? 😭Honestly yaar I'm super thrilled! Your comment totally made my day!

👏..many more to come..💘 Yesss👍🏼

saprona matlab spelling theek hai?..wo kya haina mujhe Gujarati ati nahi hai jst tumahare translations se samjhti hun aur hindi bhi bas upar upar se aati hai..😔 Soprano is what the smallest ukulele is called. No worries dear. Grammar is secondary.

My replies in bold. Thank you once again for the detailed feedback!