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Posted: 3 years ago

Me first again 🥳

Gotta make it a permanent reservation😆


Sid and Monu talking to their dad's.. typical avoidant parenting style .. there's a lot to unpack there. 👍🏼

Sid found the perfect gift for Sanju 🥺🥺 aww! Him getting things for Bala! Sweet❤️ golgappe to Sanju k sath hi 😈

Karan finding the cadets sincerely studying and rethinking if he judged Monu too soon.. ooh we see the change coming!

Sunday aa gaya!! loved Baby, Barkha and Param's dynamics. So, I was right 😎 yuss! Param has a difficult life, Karan feels responsible for it. :( Guilt pulls you down, no matter how long it's been, it will always be there.

Cadets had a fun Sunday!

Faizi Monu moments were nice! Them together is gonna be fun, especially when they poke fun on Karan together. He taught her about guns! Yay!👏

Koel is going slow, loving it. Date abhi nahi 😆 haan, friends to lovers! gonna be fun slow burn.

Take your time with updates love!❤️ no rush!🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

NOTE FOR CHAPTER 9:

Here's chapter 9! Sorry if it's a little patchy. I haven't had much time to sit on it. I literally just completed it. I might be skipping on daily updates for a while now, because my boards are starting from 7th May, and I would need to amp up my studies. I'll try my best to update regularly (perhaps every other day) but studies are the priority. Hope you understand!


Now, as for the chapter:

1. So, Neha and Shefu were right. Param is physically disabled. He has amputated legs. He does have prosthetics and he can walk, but he prefers to stay on his wheelchair.
There are two reasons I wanted this:

A. I really wanted to explore some Param-Karan bonding and basically, Param's dynamics with everyone.
B. I wanted to highlight all the things soldiers go through and this is one of them- physical disability.

It takes a lot of toll on someone and it not only affects them but also the people around them.

2. Karan's thought of whether he's judging Monami too quick is just contemplative. It's not a quick switch, and not him diminishing his judgement. He's just wondering if he was wrong in judging her without any mistake and not yet decided if he was.


I think that's all! Hope you liked the chapter! 👍🏼

I wrote a long post and before I could copy it for backup, page got refreshed 😐

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hmmmm... some of the cadets are taking the training seriously and maybe slowly paving the way to their trainer's heart. I know it's a long way to go but good start!!


I am soo excited to see how Koel and Faizi's bond will progress. Both are mature and hence their relationship would be the most mature and beautiful. You have penned it down just like it should have been.


Karan kya jeevan bhar taunt maarta rahega kya ab use khana khane nahi dia 😂 Looking forward to see more leg pulling.


Sid and Monu's dad as expected 😐 I know how does it feel when you are ignored by someone whose attention you craved the most throughout life. But the saving grace is they have atleast each other.


Faizi and Monu 😍 I think he has seen a spark in her and can sense how serious how serious she is about her training and can be a good commando in future. It's good to see that Monu is getting comfortable with someone other than Sid. I think Faizi would be the first person after Sid whom she can talk to without any nervousness in future. Or it can be Sanju too. Let's see.


So Chirkut bought gift for Sanju....Noice..... Abhi golgappe nahi khaye but ek din zarur khaega 😂

And his gesture towards Bala ❤️ I liked how he didn't say something like it's fine, you don't have to pay for it or something like that. He sweetly asked him to switch off the lights of room for a week. Sweet and funny. SidG dil lelo yaar....


Shergill family is love ❤️

Param is alive but physical disabled. This would make Karan guilty but atleast he has has father figure with him who will try to pull him out from this guilt time to time. He is the person who can give love and warmth to Karan when needed. This would keep base of his character intact but with different perspective. Writer sahiba, amazing thought process here.


Overall, amazing as usual!!


P.s. It is absolutely fine if you do not update during your exams. We understand that studies are priority and this is crucial time for your career. So, don't take stress regarding update.

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Posted: 3 years ago

I always felt monu's dad ka hardness comes from deep rooted fear of losing her just like his wife. Show mein to villain bana diya, wish here we get some layer. Monu deserves more hero on her life, not just sid or karan or faizi.


Koel faizi ❤️❤️ he wants to see nikhil ka pic. Aww


Did Param actually move on from the incident or there is something else? Karan clearly didn't.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Another great chapter ❤️ It was lovely.

The cadets were focusing on studying and doing well. Karan got impressed and probably surprised too 😆They also did not notice he was in the mess, I think.

Koel-Faizi's start was great. Return gift, huh? Faizi has a locker full of excuses for Koel 😆 And Karan was the perfect best friend with pulling his leg And Faizi started to work for the future date too 😆

Sid's disappointment hurt and Monu's father does not have a sensitive bone in his body 😡 I hope he gets a reality check.

Faizi making Monu happy was so cute 👍🏼Sid told her not to study but she technically studied with Faizi 😆Monu would ace this future lesson and Karan would be so shocked 🤣Then his mind-made images won't match with the real Monu and he would drown in the ocean of confusion...so fun!😆 I can't wait.

Sid and Golgappe! Koel ne diya na isliye nehi khaya, Sanju khilati toh kha leta shayad 😆

Baby-Barkha-Param-Karan ending scene has my heart ❤️It was terribly sweet...Don't worry Param bhaiya, Monu ajaygi toh aap usse complain krna...fir wo Karan ki class legi....waha pe to Barkha bhabhi bhi kuch nehi kahegi 🤣

I sort of guessed that he may have had a disability but I am glad Karan has his brother with him, who would knock some sense into his stubborn self!


P.S. Best of luck for your boards! A quick question! 10th or 12th? Online or Offline? And don't worry about your updates! Studies comes first, always 👍🏼



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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Kuchh bhi likh sakti ho. It's just to make a post. "Reserved" ya something of the like likhne se bas baakiyon ko samajh aa jaata hai, this post is going to be edited later.

If you write a full fledged post, you don't need to write reserved in the end, because... point nahi hai uska. Even if you want to edit that post, you can just go and do it.


Basically, ek post banao, kuchh bhi likho (preferably something along the lines reserved) and that post is reserved. Baad mein you can edit it and write whatever you want.


... Zyaada jaankar log, please verify... 🤣

Gotcha Di! Thanks for dealing with my stupid self ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mirai07

Gotcha Di! Thanks for dealing with my stupid self ❤️

Do baatein.

Pehli, is mein kuchh stupid nahi hai.

Doosri, main tumse chhoti hoon, probably. Di mat bolo. Nahi bhi hoon, toh bhi mat bolo. You can call me Noe.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Another great chapter ❤️ It was lovely.

Glad you liked it!

The cadets were focusing on studying and doing well. Karan got impressed and probably surprised too 😆They also did not notice he was in the mess, I think.

Nope. Too engrossed. Bande ko shauk laga, kahan yeh naalayak soch raha tha sab ko, yeh toh padte bhi hain.

Koel-Faizi's start was great. Return gift, huh? Faizi has a locker full of excuses for Koel 😆 And Karan was the perfect best friend with pulling his leg And Faizi started to work for the future date too 😆

Faizi hai experienced banda. Saare tareeke pata hai kaise bandi ke saath time spend karna hai.

Sid's disappointment hurt and Monu's father does not have a sensitive bone in his body 😡 I hope he gets a reality check.

I have plans. 🤗

Faizi making Monu happy was so cute 👍🏼Sid told her not to study but she technically studied with Faizi 😆Monu would ace this future lesson and Karan would be so shocked 🤣Then his mind-made images won't match with the real Monu and he would drown in the ocean of confusion...so fun!😆 I can't wait.

Gun waali classes bahut baad mein aayengi. Usse pehle bahut kuchh hoga. Mind made images nahi rahengi tab tak. According to my plan...

Sid and Golgappe! Koel ne diya na isliye nehi khaya, Sanju khilati toh kha leta shayad 😆

Banda commit hone se pehle bhi loyal hai.🤣

Baby-Barkha-Param-Karan ending scene has my heart ❤️It was terribly sweet...Don't worry Param bhaiya, Monu ajaygi toh aap usse complain krna...fir wo Karan ki class legi....waha pe to Barkha bhabhi bhi kuch nehi kahegi 🤣

Nope. Wahan par sirf Monami bolegi. Param Monami ke paas jaayega, Karan Barkha ke paas jaayega, dono ladkiyan soch rahi hongi kahan phas gaye in bhaiyon ke beech.🤣

I sort of guessed that he may have had a disability but I am glad Karan has his brother with him, who would knock some sense into his stubborn self!

Sabne hi guess kar liya kya? Param ke saath bhi mere plans hain. Personal front par, don't worry, tumhe probably pasand aayenge.

P.S. Best of luck for your boards! A quick question! 10th or 12th? Online or Offline? And don't worry about your updates! Studies comes first, always 👍🏼

12th. Waise jaise haal hain, lagta hai dimaag 10th mein hi bhool kar aa gayi hoon. Offline hain, aur mere mann kar raha hai sab chodh doon aur kamre mein baithkar moh maaya se door raho. Chemistry aur Physics ne jo dimaag ki dahi kari hai, na... 🤬

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Posted: 3 years ago

Interesting one, girl.

Param is on wheelchair despite prosthetics, is strange especially because he is a soldier. If he makes efforts to stand up himself, chances are, Karan's guilt reduces and Param can continue to serve the country by training cadets.

Am so glad Faizi's character is being explored.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Bodhianveshika

Interesting one, girl.

Param is on wheelchair despite prosthetics, is strange especially because he is a soldier. If he makes efforts to stand up himself, chances are, Karan's guilt reduces and Param can continue to serve the country by training cadets.

Am so glad Faizi's character is being explored.

Param can walk. He prefers being on a wheelchair because it's more comfortable for him (depends on person to person from what I have read). If he has to, though, he can walk around. And he does walk around. It's wheelchair sometime, and walking sometime.

He cannot be declared fit for duty again. From what I have researched, people with such injuries aren't medically fit. The army has a very high medical criteria.
Yahan par toh he has to use prosthetics. From what I have read, people who are on regular medication for literally anything (be it mental problems like anxiety or heart problems etc.), they aren't cleared since it's a very demanding job, both mentally and physically.

He can preside over things, he can advise on things, purely on the basis of being an excellent commando, but he would never be able to return to active duty.


I am trying to make all 6 leads be explored. I am glad you guys are enjoying it. 👍🏼

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