FF: I can't take it anymore! *Part 6 in pg 9* - Page 4

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Originally posted by: AliceAgarwal

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Originally posted by: priyavishu18

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Hello everyone. I am super sorry. I apologize for the late update. I was super busy with my class and assignments. And it was my sister's birthday so we celebrated the whole weekend. As an apology, I will update part 4 tonight for y'all and I promise it will be a long one. Here you go Part 3

Part 3

“Bhai, why are you so tense?” asked Neil racing through the road at night. Thankfully it was almost midnight and a weekday so the road was almost empty.

“I can’t marry someone who can’t stand with the truth, who lies to save someone who is not worth your love. I am breaking off this marriage.”

What was I thinking?

Was I really going to break my marriage with Akshu over a message?

What if she wanted to say something important?

What was she saying about medicines and Aarohi?

Abhi’s mind was repeating what he had texted Akshu without realizing the consequences. He knew that he needs to tell Neil everything. There is no point in hiding the truth now. And Abhi told Neil what happened before they went to Goenka Mansion, the confrontation, him yelling at Akshu and what he had texted her in anger.

To say Neil was shocked was an understatement. He was flabbergasted that his bhai, his bhai who is crazily and madly in love with his bhabhi has called off the wedding over a text, A FREAKING TEXT.

“Bhai, are you out of your mind? What were you thinking? Wait a minute, were you thinking at all in the first place? How could you do that to bhabhi? Do you know how heartbroken she must have been? You did not even give her a chance to explain herself and there you go spoiling things because of your world-famous anger," spatted Neil without taking any remorse over Abhimanyu.

Neil was pissed. He knew that his bhai was hurt, heck his mother got hit and almost died. He saw his bhai losing his mind when he couldn’t find Manjari maa anywhere. Of course, everyone has a right to be angry, but that doesn’t mean that you will go breaking your marriage over a text without talking and trying to solve the problem and hearing out the other side of the story.

He looked over to his left and instantly regret filled him. His bhai was silently crying holding Akshara’s bracelet close to his heart. His heart broke at that sight. He felt so bad for his bhai and bhabhi.

“They don’t deserve this, not after every hurdle that they have crossed to become one,” Neil thought to himself. His two-favourite people in this world are suffering endlessly.

“I will not leave that chipkali, she is the reason for all these mess,” thought Neil to himself as he pulled up to Goenka mansion.

“Bhai, we are here. Come, let’s go to bhabhi and ask her what actually happened,” Neil started off softly not to trigger his brother.

Abhimanyu who was in trance since Neil fired all the questions at him, jolted up as though he got pushed down the staircase. He looked around and realized that he is in front of Goenka’s mansion. He took a deep breathe, wiped off his tears and looked at Neil. Neil gave a small nod, assuring that he is right by his brother’s side.

That’s all Abhi needed. He sprinted out of the car as though it was on fire. He needed to reach his Akshu before she reads the message.

"Akshara, Akshara, where are you? Akshu, please bahar aao, mujhe tumse baat karni hai," yelled Abhi running into Goenka Mansion.

AG, Mimi and Swarna are shocked to see Abhi all distraught and worried shouting for someone whom he did not even spare a glance just now.

“Where is she, Mimi?” trembled Abhi, Neil holding Abhi by his shoulders just in case he collapses.

Mimi started crying and Abhi’s heart crunched thinking the worse and was praying hard for it to be not true.

"Please tell me that she is fine, please, I beg you," cried Abhi folding his hands in front of Mimi and Badi Mama.

She was in the room and suddenly we heard Kairav scream, Akshu and we saw him carrying her downstairs. She lost conscious after a terrible panic attack. We couldn’t control it so they took her to the hospital. She told everything that happened after they left. How Aarohi continued to blame her and how others didn't say a single word and didn't let her explain.

"Meri bacchi, hospital mein.....," cried Mimi.

All Abhi could hear was hospital, panic attack, couldn’t control. Which means, she saw the message and she got a panic attack because of it. He felt the world slipping beneath his feet at that moment as a single tear dropped from his eyes.

“No, no, it is not true, you are lying,” stumbled Abhi backwards and hit the couch behind him and fell on it.

Mimi and Badi Mama who were already crying for their Akshu, felt terrible looking at Abhimanyu’s condition hearing about her. They know how much Abhi adores their Akshu, even more than them to be honest. He gave her all the love that they failed to give due to Aarohi.

Abhimanyu was thinking of all the times Akshara got panic attack and remembered how much pain she was in when he had to inject her to stop it.

What if she can’t breathe on her own again?

Will they give her the right dosage of medicine?

What if she needs beta blocker?

Abhi’s mind was spiraling down thinking of the worse consequences that could happen to Akshu. Neil can see his brother going from bad to worse. They need to reach Akshara before his brother loses his mind completely overthinking.

“Dadi, aapko pata hai kis hospital mein hai Akshara?” asked Neil slowly.

Mimi shook her head indicating a no. Neil can slowly feel the panic entering his body.

Where is he supposed to find his bhabhi? Maybe she was taken to Birla hospital?

“Nahi, nahi, chance hi nahi hai, concluded Neil. After all those dramas that went down earlier, the Goenka’s would never bring her near the street of the hospital, let alone admit her in that hospital, said to himself.

He knew he had to call one of the Goenka to know the location of Akshara.

Kairav? NO.

AG? No.

Bade papa? A big NO.

Vansh?

Yeah, Vansh seems like a good option right now and the only option. He immediately took out his phone and called his friend like brother.

Vansh immediately told Neil the name of the hospital that they took Akshara to. They knew that only Abhi could save their Akshu and clear the whole misunderstanding that has happened.

“Bhai, let’s go, bhabhi ka location pata chal gayi hai,” told Neil as he started walking to the entrance.

Abhi who was waiting for that one answer, stood up in a lightning speed and sprinted towards the car even faster to reach her quickly and solve everything.

“I am sorry, Akshu. I am coming. Please Mahadev, Akshara ko kuch mat hone dena,” cried Abhi silently as Neil sped through the lane to reach Sunrise Hospital.

Thank you so much for the patience. I will update part 4 tonight as an apology. Do like and leave your comments on how you think the whole will take place and what kind of scenes you expect to see cause I know we all want the real show to go in a different way. I also watched today's episode and I HATE how they concluded the accident fiasco. It had so much potential and I hated Akshu for starting her Aaru jaap over and over again. Thank you so much. Do like and comment.

Brilliantly written, i hope akshra herself backs out from the marriage and at the same time stops her aru jaap its getting too much now. And confront everyone who wronged her, like Elder Birla's for mistreating her, Goenka's for ignoring her pain, even kairav who waa ready to send her away to make arohi happy and also abhimanyu for not trusting her, and how he chose his mother's happiness when he brought the alliance for arohi

Originally posted by: chremma

Brilliantly written, i hope akshra herself backs out from the marriage and at the same time stops her aru jaap its getting too much now. And confront everyone who wronged her, like Elder Birla's for mistreating her, Goenka's for ignoring her pain, even kairav who waa ready to send her away to make arohi happy and also abhimanyu for not trusting her, and how he chose his mother's happiness when he brought the alliance for arohi

Nice written and Thanks for your reply....

Well your writing style is nice....

Waiting for the next Update.....

Originally posted by: priyavishu18

Nice written and Thanks for your reply....

Well your writing style is nice....

Waiting for the next Update.....

heyyy, thank you so much for the feedback. might take a little while before i upload part 4. but it might be out by tomorrow morning. it will be a good one, don't worry.

Please update soon..waiting for the same