TS: Will you marry me! - Page 2

How you do manage to put down the words so amazingly?

Excellent chapter❤️❤️. I really liked the way you penned emotions of both sai and virat. And virat was the one to confess, i really liked that. Let's hope vanku get some inspiration from your writing. Kudos to your writing👏👏. Thanks for the tag.

Happy?! I'm on cloud nine!

Love this!!!❤️👏

So beautifully written... Loved how u went with the flow and also one thing... Dr Sai Joshi's first patient! Liked that particularly

Thank u for tagging🤗

Originally posted by: sadiltl

For those who are wondering why pakhi didi is not in the viscinity while the proposal happened, she is sure this time that Sai had left and hence is busy decking herself up! 😆

Acutally didnt want to spoil the mood with adding details of her presence. In Ghum reality she would be seeing all this from a small distance.

Yeah! We should assume she is watching everything like this.... Kyunki aakhir didi kar bhi kya sakti hai🤣

Good one. Hope things happen this way in the serial.

But it wont. Dont expect too much.

Soo nice❤️

Atleast Virat is apoligising for his mistakes, thoda chain mila

Waiting for part 2

Thanks for the lovely comments.

I think they will make the confession emotional though sai comes as a barati! Still have confidence that’s Vankar doesn’t spoil sairat scenes!! Let’s see.

when emotions are high, you just do what is required. So I didn’t add too much apologizes. They might tell sorries for the worst mistakes. So I chose sadas kidnap more because that is the dangerous outcome of virat’s decisions. And sai for her words because they pushed him away.

Post confession is the right place elaborate apologizes have to be made but there are too many and too much to write. Post confession talk has a separate fan base for a reason. In KD it was nearly 2 episodes. So yeah very difficult to write because of the sheer volume it becomes if written properly :)

Another difficult thing to write is their consummation. For me Atleast it is going to be super passionate, and laced with urgency that is very hard to describe 😅. The actions will be too quick to describe 😉. Anything other than this looks insipid for me to write. 😬

Next chapter is marriage which I envisioned long back when virat went for mission and sruthi track was not expected. It happened in the same temple at GC but now circumstances changed. I m warning you that I might go easy on ashwini and the brothers. I m going to use the whitewashed characters 😬

How did I forget to tag you!!!

See you have to come to the forum often. I tagged only the ones I see regularly. will tag on the next one for sure 👍

Wow, itna respectful proposal and confession. 🙏

Vankar can't give 1/10th of this.

Amazing part !!

This was beautiful. ❤️

Hopefully the existing fans won't be too disappointed with the execution in the show.