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Posted: 4 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

OMG...this is unbelievable!! Yay!

Matlabh saari wishes poori hongi. Dora &Conka parda phase and Shivi going to settle in their own duniya!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️


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Wow. Dora can't be any more manipulative. The selfish lady decided to blame Raavi. So glad Shiva left the note and they kept Mama in the loop. Shiva are finally happy in their own little world and others can rot in hell.


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Raavi's parents angle was a nice twist. Mama came in the right time as a messenger. Looking forward to Shivi basaying duniya together.

thank you for reading❣️❣️
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Woww woww wowww this was so amazing as well as all their futureplanning looks so realistic mama helping them out and getting assured by shiva for his daughter has all my heart ❤️❤️

And also special mention mama giving advise to raavi to shower all love and care to shiva ohh my that's what a guardian actually do 💖💖

Loved loved loved the update excited to know what joseph decosta holds for them

Do update soon💜

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Posted: 4 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: sahapallavi

Woww woww wowww this was so amazing as well as all their futureplanning looks so realistic mama helping them out and getting assured by shiva for his daughter has all my heart ❤️❤️

And also special mention mama giving advise to raavi to shower all love and care to shiva ohh my that's what a guardian actually do 💖💖

Loved loved loved the update excited to know what joseph decosta holds for them

Do update soon💜

thank you so much♥️♥️

Will try to update soonish.......

Stay tuned......

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Posted: 4 years ago
#44
it was so good 😭😭😭 Shiva so broken 😪 I hope he gets the happiness he deserves with raavi alongside him.
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Posted: 4 years ago
#45

Loved their FB ❤️

Lovy uldate ❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kfof

Loved their FB ❤️

Lovy uldate ❤

thank you so much🥰🥰
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Posted: 3 years ago
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PART-IV

After having the breakfast. ShiVi got ready and they sat in the open vintage car which the peon handed them with the house.

Raavi wore a simple white knee lenght flowy dress while shiva was wearing his rustic style clothes.

Raavi had a visiting card on which address of Joseph Decosta was mentioned. They headed towards the place.

Here they stood in front of a rustic beachside restaurant which had special traditional pondicherry dishes. They entered inside and were about to ask about joseph but the lady on the counter says,

"Wohi ankhein........ Wohi naak......... Ikk tym ke liye aise laga jaise mrs. captain khud mere samne aa gayi ho......... But your eyes are like our captain....

If i am not wrong you are Raavi daughter of our captain Vikram Shah"

Raavi looked at them in confusion as how could they know her as she never seen her and then a man having a lean body and tall wearing a literal beach side shirt came with a accordian(instrument) in his hand playing it ever so Melodiously and comes to lady making rounds around the lady humming a song.

The lady says,

" Look joseph who is here.. . .. . "

He stops in front of raavi and instantly that jolly man who was singing and jostling around stood stunned he looked at the tatto on his wrist and his eyes grow misty, ShiVi looked at each other and than at the man and the man said, The man looked at her amazed and put his hand on her head and said,

"our Raavi......."

Raavi looked at him with moist eyes, his touch was so soothing and so parental that she felt peace just with that and she doesn't even realise when her eyes became glassy but she was still confused as how they know her without even meeting her once.......

Than the man says,

"Confused........ Ohkay let's start by introduction but first aao baitho............ "

Shiva hold raavi's hand and both sat on the table opposite both of them and the man said,

"main joseph decosta......"

"And main maria joseph decosta"

ShiVi smile and raavi says,

"Main raavi...... "

"Main shiva....... "

Joseph adds,

"Jagat ka call aaya tha bataya usne ki you are thinking of settling here........... Ghar toh mil gaya hoga na aur john ne keys de di thi na and all the belongings mil gayi na.....aur settling mein problem toh nahi huyi na........."

Shiva says,

"Jii..... John ne sab de diya tha aur sab ache se settle ho gaya hai..... "

Raavi says,

"Apne mujhe pehchana kaisa..... "

Joseph gives a warm smile and says,

"Main tumhe kaise nahi januga............ Tumhari shakal tumhari mom se itni milti hai aur tumhari aankhein wohi Sincerity hai jo tumhare dad ki aankhon mein hoti thi..............."

Raavi looks at them astonished and joseph says,

"Toh hum tumhe kaise nahi pehchange......... "

Maria adds,

"hum tumhari mom ko mrs. Captain bolte the............. Aur tumhari dad captain Vikram shah....... Hamare captain.......... We were a family....... "

Joseph says,

"Main tumhare dad ko pehli baar hamari posting par mila tha vahan vo captain the aur main vice captain............. Mere senior hote the aur mere sabse ache dost..... My best friend hamesha saath rehte the hum......... "

Maria says,

"Wahan yeh dono aur yahan tumhari mom aur main saath rehte the..... Inki 6 month long posting hoti aur hum yahan restraunts sambhalte the........

Din kab nikal jate pata hi na lagta......... Aur jab yeh log chutti par aate toh ghumna firna........ Picnic.... Family dinners........ Those were the days........ "

Raavi was indulging in the story just like a kid and joseph says,

"Captain and his love for mrs captain"

He gives a dreamy smile and continues,

"Both were deep in love..... Chahe dur ho par dil hamesha paas rehta tha........ Hamesha........ Captain itne smart the ki har ladki un par line marti thi par humare captain toh apni ladylove ke ilava kisi ko dekhte bhi nahi the........... Jab bhi h vapas aate chahe jo ho jaye vo tumhari mom ke liye kuch na kuch gift jaroor lekar aate.......... "

Maria says,

"Jab bhi inn dono ko posting ke liye chodne jate your mom...... She clinges to your father and cries and your father he used to make her stable....... Without even bothering or getting concious the surrounding.......... Pyaar they both defined this word solely........"

She continues and her eyes turn misty,

"Vo kehte hain na.. . .. . Do pyaar mein doobey panchi kab apne pyaar mein iss duniya ke pinjre ko tod LAPATA ho jate hain pata hi nahi lagta.. . .. . . "

And a lone tear escaped her eyes and joseph hold her hand and snaked his arm around her shoulder and whispered sone sweet nothings in her ear and maria laughs wiping her tears Raavi who herself had tears in her eyes looked at couple and shiva tightens his hold on her hand and both look at each other and share a warm smile and joseph says,

"Abb agar hum kahaniyan batane lag gaye toh tum log yahin reh jaoge........... Par abb toh tum log hamare saath hi rehne wale ho toh batein chalti rahengi kio kii vo log agar lapata ho gaye hain par unke kisse hamesha amar rahenge...... . "

All smile and maria says,

"Joseph let's hand them their belongings.. . .. . .. "

Joseph now stiffens a bit and says,

"Raavi, yeh jo restaurant hai tumhara aur mere dad ke naam par hai 50 50 unke jaane ke baad yeh hum dono ne sambhala hai...... Par iss par tumhara aur shiva ka hakk hai.........

Toh iski bhaag daur abb tum dono ko sambhalni hai........... Haan thoda tym lagega par main aur maria hain tumhe guide karne ke liye........... Aur haan ikk aur baat tumhare dad mere dost the toh uss naate tum meri beti jaisi hhi ho........... Iss liye yeh restaurant ki keys lo aur rakho apne paas aur mana mat karna....... Tum dono ka hakk hai........... Alright..... "

Raavi nods teary eyed and maria hand over the keys to shiva and says,

"Shiva restaurant captain ka aur joseph ka hai but captain nahi hai toh abb unke beti aur damad ko ise sambhalna hai....... Joseph accept nahi karenge par humari age ki wajah se humare liye kafi tiring ho jata hai par abb tum dono young ho aur tumhe yeh sambhalna hai....... "

Shiva holds her habd assuringly and says,

"App chinta mat kijiye........ Jaise apne raavi ko apni beti mana hai vaise hi app dono bhi hamare liye maa baba ki tarah hi hain....... Toh ajj se apki aur iss restaurant ki jimedari hamari....... "

Joseph comes near shiva and taps his shoulder in pride and says,

"Captain ka son in law toh captain ki tarah hi hai........ Raavi good choice......... "

Raavi smiles and shiva looks at her and than joseph says,

"Kal 7:30 am dono aa jana..... Will handover the work to you....... "

Maria adds,

"Chalo let's wind up tge restaurant vese bhi bhut tym ho gaya..... Batein karte huye pata hi nahi laga....... "

Four of tgem wind up the chairs and helped the chefs to place left over food in fridge and cleaning left over dishes and the table tops and tgey were done in 30 minutes. Joseph asks them to leave as it was late and getting dark as joseph and maria's house was 2to 3 footsteps away from the restaurant they walked till there and they bid a good bye. Raavi turned around and came in front of joseph and says hesitantly,

"Thank you.......... I don't know u should say it or not but thank you junior.......... "

Joseph looks at her tears escaping from her eyes and says,

"Tumhe kaise pata...... "

Raavi says,

"Dad ki diary padhi thi unhone Junior ke naam par bhut entries ki thi aur unhone likha tha junior se jyada close unki life aur koii nahi hai.......mom bhi nahi...... "

And they chuckle and joseph says,

"So you know it.......... My captain my friend........... Chalo go now warna yahin rok lunga aur jane nahi dunga......... "

Raavi laughs and hugs him and maria and they take a leave.

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Heys guys thanks for coming here i don't know what i wrote... Indeed long but let's be honest do give your views and tell me any manifestation you have aur do give suggesrion so do i improve my mistake.....

Yours

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hi just started reading your story, love how you've portrayed Shiva and Ravi's character

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: alisha17

Hi just started reading your story, love how you've portrayed Shiva and Ravi's character

thank you so much ❤❤

It means a lot😇😇

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Posted: 3 years ago
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PART-V

Shiva and raavi sat in their car. Raavi kept on telling him about the entries and all the feelings she felt meeting joseph and maria and there morning routine. She just kept on speaking like a excited child and shiva while driving kept stealing glances at her and was smiling internally seeing her Happy and dreamy again.

Soon they reach home and shiva sat on the bed after changing and was just surfing through his thoughts and lines of thought brought somnaath back to him and raavi came after sometime she saw him sitting tense so she went and sat behind him and said,

"Shiva......... 3 din ho gaye tune ghar par baat nahi kii........ Yaad aa rahi hai kya....... "

Shiva looked at her and his eyes turn misty raavi hold his hand tightly and assuring him. Shiva looked at her and lone tear escape his eyes and raavi wipes it with her hand and cups his face and says,

"Shiva........... Main janti hoon bhut mushkil hai tere liye......... Tu ikk baar bol agar vapis jana chahta hai main aise hi tera haath pakad kar chalungi.......... "

And the next moment shiva hugs her placing his head on her chest whimpering like a little kid and raavi caressed his head slowly and shiva says,

"Raavi sab logon ne theek nahi kiya......... Tujhe pata hai dhara bhabhi jinhe main itna pyaar karta hoon unhone mujhse pyaar kiya hi nahi.......... Gaumbi dev sab log sunte rahe ikk baar bhi nahi kaha kii shiva bhi ghar ka hissa hai usse bhi barabari milni chahiye....... Mujhe paise nahi chahiye..... "

He lifts his face and looks at her and says,

"Tujhe pata hai na mujhe paise se koii matlab nahi hai....... Par bhabhi ne mujhe bedakhal hi kar diya aur sirf ikk naukar ki hasiyat se dekha........ Sari duniya mujhe naukar bolti thi par maind kabhi dil par nahi lagaya par uss din sabki batein sunkar mujhe bhut bura laga........"

Raavi holds him tighter and let him speak his heart out and he tightens his hold on her he kept on crying and complaint,

"Mujhe vapas nahi jana Raavi...... Vo log sab dikhawa karte hai....... Unn logon ki vajah se maine tujhe bhut hurt kiya hai na......... I am sorry....... Par main tujhse bhut pyaar karta hoon......aur main tujhe unn logon ke paas kabhi bhi nahi lekar jaunga.............. Vo log ache nahi hai..........."

Raavi nods her head in a no carresing his hair soothing his pain and says,

"Shiva.......... Jo hota hai ache ke liye hota hai............iss mein bhi kuch toh acha hoga hi....... Aur haan rona band kar........ I know yeh bhut hi difficult hoga kio kii tune unn sabse dil se pyaar kiya hain........ Aur jiske man mein khot nahi hoti na bhagwaan unke saath bura nahi hone dete bas sambhlna seekhate hain........ "

Shiva holds her more tightly and raavi places his head on her lap and humms him till he sleeps. Soon he fell asleepasleep raavi adjusts him and look at his face which was full of innocence and pain of being alone she wanted to heal him and wanted to snatch all his pain from him and sooth him.

She than herself sleeps as tomorrow is a big xay for them as tgey have to take up the restaurant's responsibility.

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Thus was a short one but i think was needed too....... Do share your views so that i can improve.....

And do share suggestions for upcoming.........

Yours

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