The Perfect Date - MaAn TS ( Updated Part 2 - Pg 7) - Page 10

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Posted: 3 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: arya212002



Arree… edit karte karte so jayi thi mai.. phir jab neend khuli toh post karke wapas sone gayi 🤣



Thank you soo much Ayu🥰🥰🥰🥰


I hope it really came out as garama garam as it was playing in my mind..



Toe rubbing toh was because of that discussion only.. return gift ko extend karne ka soch rahi thi then this topic came up toh aise mix karne ka idea aaya… all thx to our discussions 😉

Ye sach me bahut mast tha 😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: BaAZiGar0

Arya, you’re skilled at dialogue. Very good job with Mukku. Again, I watched this like an episode in my head. 👏



Thank you so much Ali for such a wonderful praise 😘😘😘

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Posted: 3 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: rupsii

Good lord!! Sweet torture man ☺️ dreamy


Stupid I-F didnt post my comment last night Arya.. read both parts again.. its awesome.. thanks for sharing and tagging me too ❤️ and yeah..please post next part soo ☺️



Super glad that you liked it ❤️❤️❤️…, thanks a lott Rupali 😘😘😘



I haven’t planned another part … let’s c

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Posted: 3 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Arshi67

Food and footsie with a sizzling tadka of romance... both parts were a wonderful read, Arya. Your understanding and portrayal of all of their dialogue delivery is very nuanced.


Thanks a lotttt Ruchi for such high praise ❤️❤️❤️

Glad you liked it🥰🥰🥰

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Posted: 3 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: ga1986

OMG Arya .. Read this just now ... Was so freaking hot !! 🔥🔥🤩 The sexual tension was so well described it’s like I was reading a professionally written romance novel ... only better cz I could actually see it playing out in my head ☺️.... Too good man , you really have a way with words .... N the 1st part with Mukku was cute too , very aptly described her



Thank you sooooo soooo much for indulging me dear 😘😘😘❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

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Posted: 3 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Ishabharatdwaj

Fantastic, the way you mix two of your shots, loved it 😍😍 inka sab khuch ghar mein hi hoga lagta hai.



Thanks a ton Isha ❤️


itne gharelu log jo hai yeh dono 😉🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
#97

Read both parts in one go...

Brilliant, obviously Ghar ke dinner date main jo sab ho sakta hai wo restaurant main kaha

Aur maan to dinner se pehle, kitchen main dinner banate waqt hi date start kar denge..

Only thing to be seen would be 'what' will be eaten or shall i say 'who'?


Beautiful work ❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Miniwatch

Arya 🤗❤️


What a lovely story! I loved them playing footsie!

Sorry for the late reply, but I'm actually glad i read them together. I loved the gifts that they shared!


As always, I'd love to read more about 🛬🛬

❤️❤️❤️



Thanks a ton Mini 🤗… glad you liked the gifts exchanged 😉



Our discussions on other day in T thread gave me the idea 💡 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: jyotikaur

Super hot❤️❤️❤️


Thank you Jyoti 🥰🥰

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SAMEERA008

Nyccc Part dear......plz continue



Thanks Sameera❤️❤️❤️


I haven’t planned another part yet but let’s c 😉

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