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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Thanuj

So, virat heard everything. I want virat grill his family members, especially ashwini, i least bothered about kaku and omi. She failed as a mother.

Next chapter will answer all your questions.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Thank u. Waiting eagerly for next chapter.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Sagi.

Yes, thats how defence lawyers work. Just deny that the problem exists. In this case he accused Virat and Sai of cooking up the evidence. Unfortunately the evidence that the minor girls identified Vitthal Mane he didnt know and couldnt refute.

The judge took suo moto cognisance of the crime (so many day nobody had acknowledged that something wrong was happening!). More investigations follow to bring the culprits to justice.

But this is a Sairat Story.

Yes, V's protective instincts. I just replied to Sairat07. Imagine holding the collar of the public Prosecutor just because he hinted on some harm to Sai..

Agar Sai main itna dum hota to Why did she get captured?

About V looking at Sai..you caught it right. V realizing that he has been fed lies about Sai..he wants to communicate with her. Wants to tell her that he is there for her, no matter what. I actually wrote a scene wherein they chat during her safe house stay, but then her mobile is in police custody. Chat kaise kya? Also that BK goes to meet her during this time..even that didnt look right. So deleted a lot..Also Jyoti going out of turn for Virat..even that didnt seem right. Jyoti is an IAS officer and wont blabber out like this.

I think thats a part of my training as a creative writer.

Ashwini se Bhandaphod..again I wanted the truth to come out of someone else, like Devi or even Harini. But didnt work out.

Next update on Monday. That is the final chapter.

Yes, Ugadi pachhadi is a chutney with all flavours of life. Neem ka flower, raw mango, jaggery, Chana dal and grated coconut. Tastes Yuck. Uske oopar yahan Telangana people also make you drink a sherbet of jaggery and sugarcane.

Bhago...

I understand. Defence lawyer to vahi karega. After all that's why he is paid for. And some of them are highly paid (by hour or so). So yes. Uska questioning is valid.


I meant V se kiya ye acchha kiya bcoz Sai se bulvana would have questioned her character. People are already doubting her.

That's why she is not even looking at him. But a glance wouldn't hurt. Especially when he says she 'is' my wife. 'is' not 'was'... Totally my POV though.


I am hating Ashwini in the show right now. That woman needs some sense put back into her. Among all the characters they destroyed, hers hurt me the most.

Whatever her hysterics (partly to blame the actor), she was the only genuine and true supporter of Sai. Had a very unique Saas bahu bond. Vanku ko is chij ke liye yaad rakha jaata. 👎🏼


The next update as last makes me sad 🤔. I want to read more about this. 😆. Please do an epilogue... Few years/months down the line for a happy sexy SaiRat. Just a tiny update will pacify my heart. .

I just absolutely love this story. This is my most fav of yours. 😍😍😍


And i have eaten the pachadi. Remember now 😃

Edited by Moor278 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Moor278

I understand. Defence lawyer to vahi karega. After all that's why he is paid for. And some of them are highly paid (by hour or so). So yes. Uska questioning is valid.


I meant V se kiya ye acchha kiya bcoz Sai se bulvana would have questioned her character. People are already doubting her.

That's why she is not even looking at him. But a glance wouldn't hurt. Especially when he says she 'is' my wife. 'is' not 'was'... Totally my POV though.


I am hating Ashwini in the show right now. That woman needs some sense put back into her. Among all the characters they destroyed, hers hurt me the most.

Whatever her hysterics (partly to blame the actor), she was the only genuine and true supporter of Sai. Had a very unique Saas bahu bond. Vanku ko is chij ke liye yaad rakha jaata. 👎🏼


The next update as last makes me sad 🤔. I want to read more about this. 😆. Please do an epilogue... Few years/months down the line for a happy sexy SaiRat. Just a tiny update will pacify my heart. .

I just absolutely love this story. This is my most fav of yours. 😍😍😍


And i have eaten the pachadi. Remember now 😃

Answering the bold red parts.

In the CCTV Clip, Sai was the unconscious one. The cradling of head, wiping of tears was all done by Virat. hence the judge questioning him.

I have corrected that part in the chapter. Sai thinks about all that before BK and all come to meet her. But she could have given him a startled glance or shown her vulnerability..I missed out on that. Just assume that Sai is stunned.

Epilogue: yes, not planned as of now. Lets see what happens next.

Thanks for the compliment. I have written a sexy scene somewhere, lets see whether that can be brought here.

Happy Pachadi!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wohi toh! I literally got chills reading that! I was like bhai calm down😅

Liked imagining it...

Will be waiting eagerly

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Posted: 4 years ago

ACP Virat Chavan in action..👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago

Fabulous!!!! The ACP is back or should I say Sai’s husband! Amazing writing …. Literally felt the chills!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Can you please write for the actual show!! We might get some sanity! 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow what a master stock 👏👏👏👏👏👏thanks for tagging

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Coolmeg

Fabulous!!!! The ACP is back or should I say Sai’s husband! Amazing writing …. Literally felt the chills!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Can you please write for the actual show!! We might get some sanity! 🤣

Yes, even I felt goosebumps while writing it.

Unfortunately this is missing in the show.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Maarij86

Wow what a master stock 👏👏👏👏👏👏thanks for tagging

Thank you for reading it.

Seeing you respond here for the first time..thanks for that.

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