The police raid epilogue pg 53 - Page 23

Originally posted by: Moor278

Why do you do this yaar????

Why do you end on cliffhangers???

😆😆

Loved it... obviously the end. V was super...

And Jeeju as usual the supportive one.

Please write him picking her up in his arms for whatever its worth

Cliffhangers are an essential part of creative writing. It keeps the reader glued on to the narrative.

Yes, V was super...I hope all his hurt came out on that instant when he saw Sai after so many days. He wanted answers.

Pulkit is super supportive..he will continue to be so.

About V picking her in arms...Ahem ahem...

Amazing update❤️

Virat should trash his family as soon as he discovers the truth.

Originally posted by: sadiltl

Wow it is suspenseful and emotional at the same time.

However I did not understand the last paragraph yaar. How did virat realize she did not give up on him?

Will it come in next chapter?

Thank you. Yes, suspense and emotions hand in hand.

About the last para..I think Moor has got it right. Look at her body language. Erect, looks straight at him. And she raised her handcuffed hand to him..didnt that strike you that she was conveying her majboori?

Anyway, it will be further explored in the coming chapter. Havnt thought about it, but a major pardafaash will happen.

Originally posted by: Moor278

He doesn't believe in his heart she will do something like this.

She is standing straight without a guilt and then when she falls, he sees a tear falling from her eyes which he wipes

Oh Sagi... you are a magician 😳

Please jaldi se update karo.... kutta billi fight to aai nahi isme 😉

You got it right.

Didnt I promise you that it will be a WOW scene? when V and S come face to face? Hope I have met your expectations.

More is round the corner, when Jyoti praises Virat right in front of Sai.

How does Sai react?

You might see this scene in lagnachi bedi.

Originally posted by: Thanuj

Oho no, every one thought sai is a culprit.

Virat still believed his family lies.

Hope, he vl get to know the real reason, why she left him.

Before that sai shud get a chance to prove her innocence.

Everyone believes that Sai is the culprit. The circumstances are such that way. Didnt everyone believe that Shruti was Virat's wife?

Virat was forced to believe the family lies again because of the same reason. He had no other choice. No other explanation.

Yes, Virat will come to know everything. Keep reading.

Originally posted by: kahkashansakina

Omg at last come face to face

Kay dekha virat ne jo samajh gaye sai ne give up nahi kiya mangalsutra or ring dekha😆

Ek toh aise cliffhang choda hai wait karna mushkil hai.

Loved it 🤩

Thank you 😊

Sai ki ankhon main dekha...sachhai dikh gayi..

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Devikadish

Amazing update❤️

Virat should trash his family as soon as he discovers the truth.

He will. Dont worry!

Whatever wont happen in the serial, will happen here.

Originally posted by: Sagi.

You got it right.

Didnt I promise you that it will be a WOW scene? when V and S come face to face? Hope I have met your expectations.

More is round the corner, when Jyoti praises Virat right in front of Sai.

How does Sai react?

You might see this scene in lagnachi bedi.

@bold... itne se mera man nahi bhara 😉. I want more 😆

@italics... oh I dont watch it regularly... abhi hook nahi ho pai hun. kounsa episode hai. might just watch that

Originally posted by: Moor278

@bold... itne se mera man nahi bhara 😉. I want more 😆

@italics... oh I dont watch it regularly... abhi hook nahi ho pai hun. kounsa episode hai. might just watch that

Yeh dil mange more..ahaa...

With the given constraints, even of background situation, this is the best that could be managed.

And I am a goner for Sanket Pathak.

I will let you know which one to watch.

I know I have repeated this manyyyy times but can't help with it.... This is soooooo INTRIGUING!!!!!!

Thanks to my full day tuitions and to u that I got to read 2 parts in a go!!!!

Sai left him but still loves him but then whyyyyy did she leave ..????

Also liked the way u penned the whole raid process! LOVED IT!

Very much excited for next part!

Thank u for tagging!