Originally posted by: Rsrockz
I have watched some of season 1 and never watched season 2 at all, but started season 3 only for the ❤️ story of the leads initially. I love Yrkkh season 1 for its realistic portrayal of characters and depiction of a close to real life journey of married couple in a typical Indian household.
My only request to the makers please don't make YRKKH like the unrealistic ekta kapoor serials instead please keep YRKKH realistic, keeping true to its essence.
Below are my expectations or suggestions for improving the storyline. I need comedy, well written characters, good looking FL, romance, love and entertaining content. All in all 20 minutes of entertainment per episode.
- Abhimanyu character during the initial days was smart, intelligent, talented, handsome, honest, dignified doctor detached from others in the family except his mother but post tilak 2.0 he is shown as a cry baby, volatile person breaking things, a stuntman for no apparent reason which is unnecessary. Him breaking things shows signs of a mental illness.
Yaar the last line 😆 but yes you are right. His violent side does show he is disturbed in someway. However, I do not think that the show should necessarily stop showing this just because it is a bad trait. In the real world, people like this do exist who have little self control and anger issues and I like imperfect characters more than "ideal" characters who frankly speaking, so not exist. It's how Abhi's character evolves that is the main thing. For example, he apologised to Akshara for that mithai scene and for me, that was his redemption. it shows his character is not perfect but he is learning and improving.
- Him jumping and doing stunts at the drop of a hat reminds me of a mentally unstable and volatile guy In my college days, the most such boys can be is failed lovers but not lover boys irrespective of their handsome looks.
I also dont like the unnecessary stunts, makes abhi look like a kid who is a wannabe spiderman.
- Abhi tashan avatar with AK was good and probably they can continue such scenes with Arohi like her trying to create disturbance and him countering her. But only to the point of thakkar. While Arohi remains a grey character not a completely dark character. Abhimanyu should be the Darcy'esque personality, cocktail of Darcy with kabir Singh doesn't suit well to the maturity of the character.
I like the Kabir Singh element tbh. I've always enjoyed the unpredictable Abhi. This doesn't mean I want him to deprive Akshara of her rights or own like a property. I just want the passion that KS had and I like that the show was able to achieve this without making Abhira toxic. Today's scene had perfect amount of passion and sexual tension without it being disturbing to watch. That is not a easy feat so well done to Harshad Pranali and the yrkkh team.
- Akshara(FL) wardrobe choices and her dialogues are getting overbearing for her age, her imagination of songs and scenes are definitely unbearable. She can simply wear beautiful Kurti's, tunics and skirts with tops like the one worn in the night of AR and Abhi engagement. She needs clothes which define her physique and simple indo Western or ethnic wear in natural color palette.
I liked her clothes in the recent episodes. Her dreams though are too Kiddish. I hope they make her wear a sari after marriage, I feel Pranali looks much more elegant and mature in a sari judging by her previous shows.
- AK should be a smart, shy but bubbly, happy go lucky girl next door character. Please don't depict her always as a damsel in distress, always bothered about people around her.
Yes. That's one reason I cannot like female leads as they are too perfect and I can't relate because noone can be right 24/7. I want Akshara to make mistakes too.
- I cant understand the rationale behind AK wearing oversized upholstery like tacky and gaudy outfits. The last good dress I have seen was the powder blue churidar during AR haldi before that oversized red dress during their confession. Even If they wanted to portray Abhi is not bothered by her looks, still audience expect the FL in decent clothes.
- Love is a special feeling and courtship is that period when without getting intimate 2 people get to know each other, physical intimacy can only strengthen the mental connect but here both the leads are being led by the circumstances and we never get to see them have opportunities for them to understand each other mentally, hence their affection seems superficial and airbrushed.
- It is sleaze when akshu drags out a shirtless Abhi onto a ladder, instead show them having sensible romantic conversations and gestures like the blushed pink cheeks of the FL, ML speechless or incoherent blabber etc.
Sleaze toh sleaze he Sahi. I want the best of both worlds 🙈
Methidana reference has gone overboard pleeease!!!. All the trip, fall and eyelock scenes have become routine and clichéd.
Arohi should be shown as a determined strong woman, please dont make her the unrealistic sadistic dark character who would spoil her own life because of her thirst for revenge. If she doesn't regret her choice, she should be made to look strong enough to face the consequences.
I think they are trying to make her human but audience is not accepting only. They have to think of trps at the end of the day. People always need to point a finger at someone and everyone enjoyed blaming Arohi before (and abhi) so they will defo keep her character extreme grey for now. Yrkkh is at least sensible in that you can see arohis insecurity, goal and POV. While other shows ke grey characters are fueled by abba daba jabba goal.
Why should ambition be bad people can make mistakes but they can learn and progress. World is full of many colors and hence its bad to portray her only in a bad light she can be slightly grey character, a person low on morals but should not be a completely gone case.
Some of the dialogues seem to have been straight away lifted from KRPKAB season 1 the haath agarbathi Paav mumbathi, muddha samjho, point samjho, hasne keliye tax lagna etc.
Invest in a good dialogue writer or dialogue writers please sharpen up your minds.
💑 is a beginning not the end and dont make the leads run after marriage as if its salvation from mortality, marriage should be the yearning of 2 souls.
Improve the comedy and bring in more light hearted humorous moments, like having to part with a gif🛍 meant for AK given to noodles(Anisha)/Nishta, not being able to meet at a specified time ⏰️thereby having to apologise to each other, being teased by cousins or daydreaming 🙇♂️about EO and making silly mistakes while doing a work etc bring in the freshness and beauty of being in love.
Finally let them have casual dates at cafés, restaurants talking about their likes and dislikes in food choices preferences etc. How did Abhi compensate for the café gaffe due to Anisha each shouldnt take the other for granted, nok jhok accountability is what gives authority to one over the other in a natural love story.
Let them compliment the look of each other. It's a way of getting audience know the personality of the leads. We have not seen them showering each other with GIFTS, COMPLIMENTS, WORDS OF PRAISE for instantaneously doing something really well. like a painting done well or something silly but which deserves an appreciation.
Example: how beautifully AK sculpted the shivling during AR and Abhi "ganpati sthapna" at that time Abhi couldnt appreciate properly but now he can and create such opportunities.
Don't let the leads move with the baggage of gratitude and respect they developed during their first trip. Their relationship should evolve, progress and develop naturally.
The characters can have dimensions but their boundaries should be watertight with no scope for deviation they can evolve learn and metamorphose but as long as there's evolution, I will not have any problem but deviations in the name of revolutionary changes can be painful to witness.
Agreed.
...they left these unexplored so it would provide the conflict they needed in an organic way. So it may look like they had moved on by next episode but they haven't...it's boiling away nicely under all the smiles, fun and games. So for instance Akshu never answered Abhi about how she keeps talking about family and he about their love. This will blow up in a major way on them...already the seed has been sown.....it will come up in their married life or just before. Mostly likely to happen after marriage as that would be the perfect setting to highlight it
. Yes some things are suppressed and I can only tell you it is because 1. it's not important as it does not impact their conflict or trauma, 2. it has been addressed in another way by either the MC's or another character. Sometimes some things are casually mentioned in Act1 and only addressed in the finale and then you see the link. 
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