I have watched some of season 1 and never watched season 2 at all, but started season 3 only for the ❤️ story of the leads initially. I love Yrkkh season 1 for its realistic portrayal of characters and depiction of a close to real life journey of married couple in a typical Indian household.
My only request to the makers please don't make YRKKH like the unrealistic ekta kapoor serials instead please keep YRKKH realistic, keeping true to its essence.
Below are my expectations or suggestions for improving the storyline. I need comedy, well written characters, good looking FL, romance, love and entertaining content. All in all 20 minutes of entertainment per episode.
- Abhimanyu character during the initial days was smart, intelligent, talented, handsome, honest, dignified doctor detached from others in the family except his mother but post tilak 2.0 he is shown as a cry baby, volatile person breaking things, a stuntman for no apparent reason which is unnecessary. Him breaking things shows signs of a mental illness.
- Him jumping and doing stunts at the drop of a hat reminds me of a mentally unstable and volatile guy In my college days, the most such boys can be is failed lovers but not lover boys irrespective of their handsome looks.
- Abhi tashan avatar with AK was good and probably they can continue such scenes with Arohi like her trying to create disturbance and him countering her. But only to the point of thakkar. While Arohi remains a grey character not a completely dark character. Abhimanyu should be the Darcy'esque personality, cocktail of Darcy with kabir Singh doesn't suit well to the maturity of the character.
- Akshara(FL) wardrobe choices and her dialogues are getting overbearing for her age, her imagination of songs and scenes are definitely unbearable. She can simply wear beautiful Kurti's, tunics and skirts with tops like the one worn in the night of AR and Abhi engagement. She needs clothes which define her physique and simple indo Western or ethnic wear in natural color palette.
- AK should be a smart, shy but bubbly, happy go lucky girl next door character. Please don't depict her always as a damsel in distress, always bothered about people around her.
- I cant understand the rationale behind AK wearing oversized upholstery like tacky and gaudy outfits. The last good dress I have seen was the powder blue churidar during AR haldi before that oversized red dress during their confession. Even If they wanted to portray Abhi is not bothered by her looks, still audience expect the FL in decent clothes.
- Love is a special feeling and courtship is that period when without getting intimate 2 people get to know each other, physical intimacy can only strengthen the mental connect but here both the leads are being led by the circumstances and we never get to see them have opportunities for them to understand each other mentally, hence their affection seems superficial and airbrushed.
- It is sleaze when akshu drags out a shirtless Abhi onto a ladder, instead show them having sensible romantic conversations and gestures like the blushed pink cheeks of the FL, ML speechless or incoherent blabber etc. Methidana reference has gone overboard pleeease!!!. All the trip, fall and eyelock scenes have become routine and clichéd.
- Arohi should be shown as a determined strong woman, please dont make her the unrealistic sadistic dark character who would spoil her own life because of her thirst for revenge. If she doesn't regret her choice, she should be made to look strong enough to face the consequences.
- Why should ambition be bad people can make mistakes but they can learn and progress. World is full of many colors and hence its bad to portray her only in a bad light she can be slightly grey character, a person low on morals but should not be a completely gone case.
- Some of the dialogues seem to have been straight away lifted from KRPKAB season 1 the haath agarbathi Paav mumbathi, muddha samjho, point samjho, hasne keliye tax lagna etc.
- Invest in a good dialogue writer or dialogue writers please sharpen up your minds.
- 💑 is a beginning not the end and dont make the leads run after marriage as if its salvation from mortality, marriage should be the yearning of 2 souls.
- Improve the comedy and bring in more light hearted humorous moments, like having to part with a gif🛍 meant for AK given to noodles(Anisha)/Nishta, not being able to meet at a specified time ⏰️thereby having to apologise to each other, being teased by cousins or daydreaming 🙇♂️about EO and making silly mistakes while doing a work etc bring in the freshness and beauty of being in love.
- Finally let them have casual dates at cafés, restaurants talking about their likes and dislikes in food choices preferences etc. How did Abhi compensate for the café gaffe due to Anisha each shouldnt take the other for granted, nok jhok accountability is what gives authority to one over the other in a natural love story.
- Let them compliment the look of each other. It's a way of getting audience know the personality of the leads. We have not seen them showering each other with GIFTS, COMPLIMENTS, WORDS OF PRAISE for instantaneously doing something really well. like a painting done well or something silly but which deserves an appreciation.
- Example: how beautifully AK sculpted the shivling during AR and Abhi "ganpati sthapna" at that time Abhi couldnt appreciate properly but now he can and create such opportunities.
- Don't let the leads move with the baggage of gratitude and respect they developed during their first trip. Their relationship should evolve, progress and develop naturally.
- The characters can have dimensions but their boundaries should be watertight with no scope for deviation they can evolve learn and metamorphose but as long as there's evolution, I will not have any problem but deviations in the name of revolutionary changes can be painful to witness.
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