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Posted: 4 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Nja91

Virat is doing actual work 😱😱😱

YEs...even I felt so. Just borrowed a lot from my previous writings for CID.

More is on the way. Ab khush?

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Posted: 4 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Devikadish

Your update reminded me of the fact that Virat is actually an IPS officer, warna uski harkatein dekh kar mere zahan se yeh baat uthar he gayi thi

Nice to see him do his real job rather than being an eye candy for all the bhabhis around him

amazing update❤️

Uske liye mujhe special effort karna pada. Warna IPS ka full form hota Idle Public service.

Thank you for the response.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Mish14bir26

Such a excellent chapter 👍🏼. A big shoutout to you for writing such a sensitive topic with excellence and perfection👏👏👏👏. This chapter is so relatable to us. Such cases of rapes , missing ,drugs are so common nowadays. Many teenage and young girls gets homeytrapped in these activities. The flashes of Sophia college ajmer rape scandal came to my mind while reading your story. We all need to be very careful in this world. Ohh finally virat ji is working 😆and working so good 😳.

Thank you.

Yes, thats the irony of today's free world.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Thanuj

I loved this virat, who uses brain to investigate the matter. Honest police officer. Is sai ok..nothing happened to her right.

Thank u for tagging me.

Sai is yet to come in this FF. She is safe.

Did you think of a name for the lady detective in this FF?

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Posted: 4 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Moor278

Wah wah... Amazing update...

Yahi wala V to chahiye hai...


So Vitthal Mane is back... Great...ab uske saath purani yaadein aur purani bhadas bhi niklegi...

Great going... Ab to ACP Chavan personally dhyan rakhenge is case pe 👏


Please update soon... Can't wait 😀

Ho, tech tar...Sadhyachya V la baghun to policewala aahe ase watatach nahi.

Vithal Mane has made a come back in this. Jagtap will follow soon.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: pari0706

Oh no Vithhal is back. Does that mean his son is too ? And is sai safe

Yes, Vithal is back. Jagtap is following next.

Read on...whether Sai is safe or not...

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Posted: 4 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: sadiltl

Wow such a good plot!! 👍🏼Hope they show something like this in the show

Read on. This is one of the most difficult FF I have ever written.

Hope I do a good job.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Moor278


Nirbhaya was my first thought when I read Jyoti Singh. Thank you for thinking of her and including her in this story. ❤️

Yes, thats her.

I am still searching for a name for the detective officer.

Barse ajun whayache aahe...

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Posted: 4 years ago
#79

Ok. Good. I want sai to be safe.

Ha i thought why u did nt mentioned the name of that lady detective officer.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: Sagi.

Read on. This is one of the most difficult FF I have ever written.

Hope I do a good job.

You are unfolding the story very well. Feeling like watching suspense thriller movie.

Tattoo

Then bracelet

I liked it very much.

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