Bhagodi ki Beti | Pre-Leap Dhara|Chap-4 (2) updt, pg 11-03/04/22 - Page 5

Part 2:

This one was just hysterical!! 🤣

Krish's night-time adventures were super-funny, and I can sympathise with Dhara (it happened to me once when my youngest cousin slept with me). Then, Shiva & Dev cuddling with Dhara... Aww!! 😳

Then the most epic dialogue -

"Krish said, please do not f*ck, because if you f*ck then Gaumbi and Dhara cannot. And I would want Dhara and Gaumbi and so please never f*ck."

Dear God!! I laughed so hard my stomach started hurting. This was just too good. 😆

Dhara seems to be noticing Gaumbhi in a new light! Dil mein kuch kuch hota hai?!

Waiting for the next one!! ❤️

How do you come up with such good scenes & a cute Krish with Cuter dialogues

Damn! This was so Gooood...I was ROFLing ... literally don't have words to describe how Awesome the continuation was🤣

Dhara tu gheli chhe & Gautam toh tujh par poora hi gir chuka hai😆

Dude, please tell me you have written before Pandya Stores - I really want to read your works for another shows.

Originally posted by: SONIA441

How do you come up with such good scenes & a cute Krish with Cuter dialogues

Damn! This was so Gooood...I was ROFLing ... literally don't have words to describe how Awesome the continuation was🤣

Dhara tu gheli chhe & Gautam toh tujh par poora hi gir chuka hai😆

Dude, please tell me you have written before Pandya Stores - I really want to read your works for another shows.

Aww, thank you so much! Means a lot, and I normally write heartfelt stories and hence thought of writing something light-hearted with the vanar sena

Yes I have written Shivi FF here : LINK

And a sequel to it which is a work-in-progress: LINK

And a Abhira story (my fanfiction on YRKKH): LINK

Originally posted by: VNuts

Part 2:

This one was just hysterical!! 🤣

Krish's night-time adventures were super-funny, and I can sympathise with Dhara (it happened to me once when my youngest cousin slept with me). Then, Shiva & Dev cuddling with Dhara... Aww!! 😳

Then the most epic dialogue -

"Krish said, please do not f*ck, because if you f*ck then Gaumbi and Dhara cannot. And I would want Dhara and Gaumbi and so please never f*ck."

Dear God!! I laughed so hard my stomach started hurting. This was just too good. 😆

Dhara seems to be noticing Gaumbhi in a new light! Dil mein kuch kuch hota hai?!

Waiting for the next one!! ❤️

haha, thank you so much 🤗 bas yuhi likha, chotu Krish ko soch ke.

Really? Did your cousin wet the bed too haha, poor you 🤣

Originally posted by: Gadbad_Ghotala

Aww, thank you so much! Means a lot, and I normally write heartfelt stories and hence thought of writing something light-hearted with the vanar sena

Yes I have written Shivi FF here : LINK

And a sequel to it which is a work-in-progress: LINK

And a Abhira story (my fanfiction on YRKKH): LINK

Yep. I have definitely read the ShiVi work before but wanted to know'bt other works.

Don't watch the show YRKKH but yes, Harshad is a charming guy & I would love to give this a chance🤗

Does it mean you have not written before these 2 shows? Then Wow my Lady! You're gooooood

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Yep. I have definitely read the ShiVi work before but wanted to know'bt other works.

Don't watch the show YRKKH but yes, Harshad is a charming guy & I would love to give this a chance🤗

Does it mean you have not written before these 2 shows? Then Wow my Lady! You're gooooood

Not on the forums, but on WATTPAD since five-six years. A lot of different shows.

Link to my profile: AgentRomanoff12

No, it has been a long way to get to this level of writing and a lot more improvement is required but thank you so much ❤️

Originally posted by: Gadbad_Ghotala

Not on the forums, but on WATTPAD since five-six years. A lot of different shows.

Link to my profile: AgentRomanoff12

No, it has been a long way to get to this level of writing and a lot more improvement is required but thank you so much ❤️

Woohoo! I have got stuff to read

Ofcourse! And I hope we're able to provide you with Amazing platforms through here 🤗

Glad to have such a Modest person amongst us

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Woohoo! I have got stuff to read

Ofcourse! And I hope we're able to provide you with Amazing platforms through here 🤗

Glad to have such a Modest person amongst us

you are really sweet and I am anything but modest.

And yes, nice to have the forums as an additional platform. ❤️

The only content other than MKBKB is this one lol. And I know how much you absolutely love Dhara 🤣and how much you love me

P.s. I'd love you to give it a try. It's nothing cliche or Dhara from the show, I promise. And it's okay if you won't 🤗

Originally posted by: Gadbad_Ghotala

The only content other than MKBKB is this one lol. And I know how much you absolutely love Dhara 🤣and how much you love me

P.s. I'd love you to give it a try. It's nothing cliche or Dhara from the show, I promise. And it's okay if you won't 🤗

Okayyy I did see this story and I did adore pre-leap Dhara a lot. Considering the fact that I have watched post-leap first and then went back to Pre-leap I guess it speaks for itself lol. Right now though in the show? After they've ruined her SO MUCH...I don't resonate with the character anymore. Pre-leap Dhara was a dreammmm...truly.

Can't promise as of now as Imma SUPER BUSYYY LIKE OMG...Once I get my life sorted though? Definitely I'll give it a go...It is on my TBR...so yeah I will read but not daily not now...not until I get a life I'm trying to get lol. I hope its okay? 😳