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stay tuned for next part❣️❣️Originally posted by: sandrasheron
Awesome. Different story. Well done. Please update the next part soon.
PART-ll
It was morning in pandya niwas everyone woke up and were just following there daily routine. Dhara enters the kitchen and is suprised to see raavi has not prepared lunch and she herself is not visible anywhere. She shouts her name,
"Raavi...... Kahan hai tu....... Breakfast nahi banaya abhi taak....... Sab uth gaye hai....... "
But no reply than other members also gather in aangan and Dhara heads towards the aangan and saw Shiva's cot empty she thinks of checking on their room.
So she heads there us no one in tge room,but room is empty unusually empty like a newly built room woth furniture but no trace of humanly living.
Dhara shouts,
"Gaumbi......... Dev...... Rishita...... Maa.....idhar aayiye......... "
Everyone arrives in shivi's room and dhara says,
"Gaumbi, Shiva aur raavi dono nahi mil rahe hai........ "
Gaumbi looks arounfmd tensed and found a note attached to mirror. He goes and plucks it and everyone gather around him and it was written,
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"Hum kahan hai........ Kaise hain........ Yeh janane ki koshish mat kijiyega......
Hum nikal pade hain apni ikk duniya basane app logon se dur abb apko mera aur raavi ka bhoj uthane ki koii jaroorat nahi hougi
hume dhundhne ki koshish mat karna
~SHIVA AUR RAAVI
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Everyone look at each other and Rishita says,
"Matlab Shiva aur Raavi LAPATA ho gaye hain"
Suman comes shouting,
"Ae dhara kya shor macha rakha hai.......... "
Everyone comes in aangan and gaumbi tells everything to suman and than dhara goes to suman's level and says,
"Maa......... Raavi shiva ko lekar chale gayi........ "
Suman was about to regort but than a voice comes,
"Raavi lekar nahi gayi hai......... Dono khud gaye hai tum logon se dur apni marji se........... "
Here comes mama. With anita and mami those have a guilty in eyes and mama stood with angst and proud.
He comes forward and says,
"Abhi bhi raavi ki hi galti nikalegi dhara tu......... Bhagwan jaise mana hai shiva aur raavi ne tujhe aur tune kya kiya........ Haan...... Dono se apni baatein manvayi......unnki jindagi ke bade se bade faisle liye................badle main dono ne sirf pyaar manga aur tum log vo bhi nahi de paye............"
Gaumbi says,
"Mama app yeh kya keh rahe ho..... "
Mama's eyes shot and says,
"Tu bol bhi sakta hai gaumbi...... Mujhe laga ki baas apni biwi ki boli bolta hai........... Maine apni beti ki zimmedaari di thi tum logon ko aur tumne kya kiya.......... Jab jab meri beti ki bezzati huyi tum sab logon ne dekha ikk baar aawaz nahi uthayi...........toh abb kio bol raha hai........."
Gaumbi stays quiet and he comes to suman and says,
"Apki wajah se suman ben unka rishta aage badh nahi saka.......... Apne toh kuch choda hi nahi raavi ko shiva ki jindagi se nikalne ke liye...... Main bhu kisse baat kar raha hoon jab meri biwi jo raavi ko apni beti kehti hai usne apne badle je liye raavi ki jindagi kharab ki hai toh app toh kya hi karogi........... "
He than says to prafulla,
"Tune kabhi usse sach mein apni beti mana hi nahi............... Vo bachi sirf pyaar chahti thi aur app logon ne tod diya use. ......... Vo toh shukar hai somnaath ka jo Shiva use yahan se le gaya app logon se dur ikk nayi jagah jahan vo apna rishta sawar sakein......... "
He moves to the door and says,
"Meri beti aur damad dono hi theek hai aur main toh khud jaa raha hoon......... Pichli baar meri galti ki eajah se rishta toota tha abb app logon ki galti se rishta tootega aur main toodta hoon yeh rishta........ "
He walks out leaving behind guilty pandyas and mami and anita.
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SOMEWHERE IN PONDICHERRY
A young couple was moving on a street hand in hand moving in their own bubble smiling whispeeing in each other's ear walking along tge sea side and laughing.
The couple is our shivi. Raavi looks at him lovingly.
Aankhon ko yun band karke
Dheeme dheeme gin gin ke
Dhundo humein, hum hain kahaan?
raavi runs enjoying the breeze on her face and turns to look at shiva who was looking at her and moving in slow pace adoring her.
Ho bhoole se fasaane hain
Zameen se begaane hain
Dekho huey hum to hawaa
Raavi stucks her tongue at him and Shiva starts chasing raavi.
Dil ke kinare, khwaabon ke neeche
Hai khoya khoya apna jahaan
shiva wraps his arm on her waist and picks her up and twirls her. Both were laughing, giggling and adoring each other.
Main laapata aa aa... tu laapata...
Hosh o hawaas hai laapata
Both sit in a open vintage car and ride to other side of the city. Raavi was looking out when shiva hold her hand and pulls her to him erasing the distance between them. Raavi smiles and inteins their hands and rest her gead on his shouldershoulder while shiva kept on driving and smiling.
Haan ye zidd hai meri
Tujhko hi sochenge ab hum
Roshni ye teri khwaabon mein rakhenge band hum
They reach a well furnished house and a peon let them enter it. Raavi jumps seeing the house in excitement. Shiva takes the keys from peon and bids him a good bye. Raavi stands in the balcony and
Shiva comes and hugs raavi from behind kisses her earlobe.
Raavi gasps and leans in his embrace.
Haan subaha kab soyi? taare kab jaage?
Hum bhoole hain ki kab kya huaa
Main laapata aa aa... tu laapata...
Hosh o hawaas hai laapata
Shivi sit on the hanging chair just like a coccon placed in the balcony large enough to adjust both of them. Shiva pulls raavi almost on his lap and carreses there intwined hands and raavi keeps her head on chest.
Le rahe thhe saansein
Zinda nahi the kabhi hum
Dil ye tujhko de ke
Dhadkan se waaqif huey hum
Raavi burries her head in crook of his neck and shiva holds her waist protectively
Haa tujh mein hi gum hain
Tujh mein hi khoye
Ab dar se tere jaana kahaan?
Main laapata aa... tu laapata...
Hosh o hawaas hai laapata
Shiva lays on the chair with raavi on top of him and kisses top of her head and raavi snuggles more into him carresing his cheek with her thumb.
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Hey guys yesterday i got free with my exams and i thought to write this one first.
This is my exam frustratio wending out hope you all like this and do leave suggestions for upcoming storyline.
Yours
ODETTE_ DELUSION
This is beyond what i expected and i m not at all complaining 😍😍
Mama sunaofying dhara and breaking bonds with pandyas or kya chahiye dil ko sukoon milta hai jab jab dhara ko koisunata hai 😎
Shivi away from pandyas is the best best best thing that can happen in the show
I m too excited how this story gonna unfold further😍😍
Excited for next part💜
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