Bhagodi ki Beti | Pre-Leap Dhara|Chap-4 (2) updt, pg 11-03/04/22 - Page 4

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Miss.M

This is so cute Rosh... Its nice to see something where the young boys bring Dhara and Gautam together... Please do tag me as I'd love to keep reading 😊

Aww, Hi, it is so nice to see you again here ☺️And for sure

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Unres 😊

This was insane😆

"Shaadi hui nahi, par peti-coat chap tu abhi se ban gaya," 🤣

This had me completely.

Also vanar sena trying to play cupid for Gaura was so cute.

This is whole different vibe from PS.

Loved it.❤️

Lmaoo, that word peticoat chaap makes me laugh always 🤣

Also, thank you so much for reading and appreciating Nicky

Vanar Sena will always be GauRa's cupid in all realties 🥳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Song: Some thing never change (Frozen)

Day 2. swear words and cute Krish

Hi,

Why are kids so cute and annoying at the same time? No, why are kids so sweet at times, and at times they just make you want to pull your hair off. And coming to annoyingly sweet kids, I'd have to say Krish is the only one who fits perfectly in this list. At times, I look at him and I want a few of my own, you know, pulling their cheeks, kissing their hair, and hugging them but after today's happenings, I am sure, I DO NOT WANT KIDS OF MY OWN.

I am telling you, having kids, is like a nightmare. Do not trust their soulful innocent eyes, and never melt for their puppy face, never. In fact get a puppy, but not kids. Never kids.

Why so rude, Dhara, you must be thinking, but I am not rude, I am practical if anything. And after I've narrated this day's happenings, pretty sure you will side with me too. You will be making faces right now, judging me infact as I raise my opinion against the idea of having kids, but trust me, it is not all cute and aww worthy.

Yes, I have a valid reason to be mad at kids.

So, after yesterday's sandwiches full of taunts, I managed to lay my back on the bed, which mind you, had very little space for me. And besides me, were three kids, Krish, Dev and Shiva, in that order, sleeping soundly and I had a narrow gap where I had to adjust.

Listen, Dhara Patel will adjust with everything, but not with her sleep.

But to keep Gautam's heart, I slept next to the kids, and honestly, I loved the vanar sena, I really do but this was not a plaything anymore. This was me being a guardian for them and I realised that I was not just Dhara, the Somnath's carefree girl, I was Dhara, someone who Gaumbi had trusted to be with his brothers.

Okay, so before I proceed to tell you what happened last night that made me decided against having kids, I need to tell you about the kids and my dynamics with them.

Before that, a little backstory.

Like I previously mentioned, Darshan Kaka (my sweetheart), raised mota-bhai and me, singlehandedly and along with him, Gaumbi tagged with us which left the three monkeys to Suman Kaki. I have heard people say that the only reason Suman kaki even had the kids was to divert Darshan Kaka's attention from us two orphans and like all rumors, I did not pay any attention to this. Never believe in anything these aunties speak, you should take this advise from me, because if you fall in this spiral of gossiping, it takes ages to get out.

Argh, I am diverting from the topic again. Apologies, my mind runs like crazy when it comes to my thoughts and I find it difficult to write it all down.

Alright, so like I said, Darshan Kaka and Suman Kaki, had these three kids after Gaumbi, each having a difference of a couple of years or so between them, so Dev was 4, Shiva 2 when Krish was born. And I was forbidden to hold any of the kids in the presence of a gathering, because I was an omen. Apparently I was a black something something, that would do something something to the kids something.

See, I do not pay any heed to any negativity, so I do not know what to fill in for that something. Feel free to add your own social slangs into it.

But, each of the kid, or monkey's like kaka would call them, have been connected to me since a tender age. And Suman kaki could do nothing to those incidents, since it was beyond anyone's control.

Okay we are now onto Krish Pandya, the youngest of the litter, I will tell you how we first connected. It was past a year since Krish was born and since he was the fairest, cutest and the most prettiest baby ever born in Somnath, Suman kaki was very much protective about him and I knew she would never allow him to be held by me, but I really really really wanted to hold him.

And that day arrived.

One night, Shiva Dev who were some 3 and 5 years old, were seated in the courtyard, hands covering their ears and loud crying noises of Krish enveloping the entire house and on enquiring they said that their mother was sleeping, unwell and Krish could not stop crying. My brother, Gaumbi and Kaka had gone out for store's work, Kanta Kaki was absent too, and when I entered Kaki's room, my heart broke at Kaki trying to quieten the kid but extremely sick herself.

That was when I picked Krish up, swayed him around and he wrapped his little hands around my neck, sobbing and crying while Suman kaki still managed to glare at me.

"Bhagodi ki Beti hu," I told her, I still remember the confidence I had when I first raised my voice against her, "Bhagodi nahi hu, aap aaram kar lo, Kaki, bacche mere saath hai." And then she rested her eyes, sleeping like a baby while Krish sniffed, playing with my hair.

That was how Krish and I had first bonded.

That bond was in danger after what happened last night.

Yes, back to the bed where I was crammed with three kids, and Krish was the nearest to me. So, like the previous night, he woke up again. Since he had not visited the bathroom before sleeping, he got up with the urge to pee and when he woke up, he shook me or the others.

There are two thing that pisses me off, one, if you say anything against the people I love, and second, most importantly, waking me from deep slumber.

And Krish did exactly that, but not just by shaking me, by crying aloud because he wanted to go to the bathroom and then because Gautam was not besides him and then he did what I was not ready.

He peed on the bed.

The warm liquid and the strong smell woke me up, and after that things went completely downhill. I woke up with a headache, the kids woke up with Krish's loud screams, Gaumbi ran in the room after assuring Suman kaki that nothing was the matter and I felt my anger rising.

Just a kid, I told myself, it is not his fault.

Gaumbi gave me an apologetic look and took Krish to the bathroom, cleaned him up while I helped change the bedsheets with the help of the other sleepy kids. The clock on the wall showed it was 2 am, and that I had to be awake in less than three hours, making me even more frustrated. Once I changed the sheets, and my dress, I took the cot outside and lay on it, trying to sleep off my anger.

"Dhara..."

"Gaumbi, please." I looked at the man who was now standing besides me, "I told you that he would miss you and I really need some sleep if I have to wake up early. Can we just call it a night?"

I was not harsh, I was mad. And you would be too, I am sure, no one wants their sleep to be disrupted by loud cries and warm bedsheets. The noises settled soon but I was getting no sleep, the headache seemed to rise and I gulped, feeling bad that I removed my frustration on Gautam.

He did nothing wrong. But I was not wrong either.

Or was I?

But before anything else, I felt a little hand wrap around my waist and I was surprised to find Shiva cuddling with me, while I shifted a little to the side. Shiva carried a different smell, owing to the fact that he never had a bath daily and always toiled around the store, and before I could respond, another little figure enveloped me from the other side and I squirmed in the middle, when Dev, rested his hands on my stomach.

With a smile, I opened my eyes, the little munchkins were holding me and trying to sleep. "Kya hua?" I asked.

"Kuch nahi," Dev replied, "bas yaha aacha lagta hai."

"Aur woh Krish ka rona bhi nahi," Shiva said, and I had no heart to tell them to leave.

But instead of being upset over my sleeping space being stolen, I found a sense of comfort hold me as the kids slept on my either side and with my headache, my sleeplessness had vanished and I slept.

Maybe, sleeping space was not that important as cuddling was.

What?

It was cute, I never had anyone to hug and sleep before.

And then, the rest of the day was the same. Of course, I could not wake up on time, so Gautam woke me by 5 and pushed me in the bathroom, and I slept on his shoulder as usual at the six'o'clock prayer and he made tea for all of us, and I drank it without being affected by Kaki's glares. Unlike yesterday, I did not have to make the entire lunch, and while Kanta Kaki told me that she'd manage, I tried making atleast one dish for the huge clan. Of course, I made the dal too watery but hey, atleast I tried.

Shiva and Dev had school till evening and Krish, the youngest Pandya, his school was only for two or so hours and hence while I sat with my laptop, scrutinizing the accounts of the electrical shop mota-bhai co-owned, Krish sat next to me on the cot, and with him came his thousand questions.

"Dhara," Krish asked, eating a pack of wafers, hands messy and the tit-bits falling on the cot. "Tu mujhse gussa hai kal ke liye?"

Although I was in the middle of tallying the entries, I could not help but break my trance and look at the kid next to me. Krish was a cutie, with his long messy hair like a cute, dense bush and his smile being the cutest with few of his teeth fallen off.

Krish's one smile, and even Hitler would melt.

Not that I'd let Krish be around someone like Hitler.

But, why would Hitler be here in Somnath?

Wait- I am off topic again, sorry sorry, coming back to Krish. "Tu maaro Krishna che," I said, pulling his nose and he cutely pouted. "Bal Gopal se koi naraz hota hai kya?"

He shook his head, his floppy hair shaking with it and I smiled, focusing back on the accounts.

"Dhara..."

I smiled, shaking my head and looked at him.

Another advice, never sit with Krish when you are doing important work. Trust me.

"Dev aur Shiva kab aayenge? Aur main Gaumbi se milne kab jaa paunga dukaan pe?"

"Tere bandar bhai aatey honge," I said, as he offered me some chips but I refused. "And once I am done with my work, we'll both go to Pandya Store, okay?"

He nodded, his hair nodding with him.

"Dhara..."

I told you, sitting with Krish was like sitting against a wall where you had to beat your head against. "Bol mere baap!"

He giggled, making me smile in my frustration, "when done with your work?" He said in his broken English.

"WHEN YOU WILL LET ME!" I slapped my hands, pleading as I bowed to him and he giggled all the more, "please, Krish? I have to finish this today, else I get no money to spend for the next week." I tried explaining but before Krish could question on my source of income, I placed my palm on his mouth. He tried talking while I focused back on the accounts, the amount had a mismatch for a couple of bucks but it was buzzing me off.

You'd say, come on, just a couple of rupees, but I was Dhara Patel, the greatest accountant there was in Somnath and if I cannot maintain the consistency of no errors, then I should be ashamed of myself and my existence.

Yes, I am dramatic at time, like we did not know that already.

But, Krish had its own plans, being impatient as he was, he slapped my hand away and the mere action also knocked the open bottle of water kept besides us. The mini-heart attack I got, fearing that my precious laptop would die soon, made me utter words I would never think of uttering in front of my precious kids.

"F*CK!" I stood up immediately, raising the laptop like a flag as Krish got up too and while I kept the laptop aside, Krish did what I never imagined in my nightmares.

"F*ck," He responded, rather cheerful when he kept chanting it, happy to learn a new word. "F*ck," He repeated and my heart skipped a beat.

Mari gayu

Gaumbi will kill me.

"Krish," I stopped him from taking another round of the house with the chant of that not so holy word, "Krish, please, woh word mat bolna, waapas okay?"

He frowned, "you mean, f*ck?" He asked aloud and I shut his mouth, fearing that if someone hears him speak this shit, then I was a goner for sure.

"Krish, that is not a good word." I said, rather tried to not breakdown, and knelt in front of him. "You are a good boy right?" I asked, gulping in nervousness, "my goody two shoes right, mere Bal Gopal?"

He nodded, again with a cute smile.

"Toh please apne Dhara ke liye, never use this word okay?"

"Par kyu?" He asked.

"Kyuki agar tumne ye kaha, toh Gaumbi aur Dhara ke beech ki dosti khatam ho jaayegi." I explained, and he pouted, feeling sad. "Tu chahta hai ki teri Dhara yaha aati rahe right?"

"Theek hai Dhara, I will never f*ck, ever." He smiled and I face palmed myself. "Oops, sorry." He bit his tongue and thankfully Shiva and Dev came running through the front door with chocolates in their hands and Krish forgot everything.

These kids, I tell you, seriously. Like I said, kids are not for me. These three are enough to last me a lifetime.

After that nothing much happened, we had dinner peacefully, kaki did not touch the dal I made and the kids were drinking it like milkshake, Gaumbi did not flinch once when he ate the feeki dal and I smiled at the lot.

I do not deserve them.

Later in the night, I settled on the cot, tired by waking up early every day and was not in the mood to write the day's events but Gaumbi came and sat next to me and said something that woke me up, never to fall asleep in this life time.

"Dhara," He said, facing me and I smiled.

"Bacche?" I asked and he looked at the closed door, all of the kids were asleep. Gautam then turned to meet my eyes, and I realised that this was the first time I sat this close to him.

He had brown eyes.

They reminded me of chocolates.

I could even see my reflection in his cute eyes, you know, and I looked pretty even after a tired day.

After all I was Dhara... arrey Somnath, I am getting out of synch again.

Focus Dhara!

Right, so we sat on the cot and Gautam cleared his throat to break my trance. "Dhara, did something happen?" He asked and I shrugged, "sab theek che?"

"Saaru che," I replied, too sleepy to understand anything. "Su?"

"Kyuki shaam ko bacche dukaan aaye the," Gautam said, ignoring my yawn and tilted his head. "Toh woh Pushpa maasi ka bhaanja, shehar se aaya hai," He said, and I found my eyelids dropping, "so you know how city lads are,"

"uh-huh,"

"yeah, so baaton baaton mein, usne aise hi jhor se kaha, 'f*ck my life,' in front of the kids."

I swear, my eyes widened instantly at the mention of the curse and I gulped looking at Gaumbi, hoping that Krish kept the promise and did not keep chanting it.

"Aur?" I squeaked, quite literally.

He chuckled, "Shiva aur Dev ko pata nahi chala, like I anticipated, because we never spoke such words in front of them." His words making my heart beat loudly in anxiety, "pata hai Dhara, Krish ne kya kaha?"

"Kya?"

He edged closer and I shut my eyes, waiting for the scolding to come.

"Krish said, please do not f*ck, because if you f*ck then Gaumbi and Dhara cannot. And I would want Dhara and Gaumbi and so please never f*ck."

I opened my eyes, and looked at Gautam and Gautam met my eyes too.

And just two seconds later we burst out laughing. He leaned back on the cot and laughed and I held my stomach, laughing hysterically and that lasted for a good five minutes.

I thought I was going to be disowned instead Gautam said something that tugged my heartstrings.

"Gheli che tu Dhara," He shook his head, as he tucked the hair strand off my cheek and I felt a warm tingle on the spot where his fingers brushed, "pan, pyaari."

And I swear, I never felt my heart skip beats at his words before.

This was normal right? Right?

Or was I truly a gheli Dhara?

Never mind, but Krish really made me laugh today. And now that I think about it, maybe kids are not that bad.

And kids like my vanar sena?

Never

Yours sleepy as always,
Dhara Patel

9th February, 2022

p.s. heart skipping beat means nothing right?
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A/N: Two days done (and two characters too), five more!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Arey this one was cute smiley42smiley42

I so loved her bond with kids smiley27

This is a parallel world where Dhara don't wish to have her own kids..smiley36

Krishhhsmiley37

"Krish said, please do not f*ck, because if you f*ck then Gaumbi and Dhara cannot. And I would want Dhara and Gaumbi and so please never f*ck." smiley37

Loved Gaura though their moments are subtlesmiley27

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Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Arey this one was cute smiley42smiley42

I so loved her bond with kids smiley27

This is a parallel world where Dhara don't wish to have her own kids..smiley36

Krishhhsmiley37

"Krish said, please do not f*ck, because if you f*ck then Gaumbi and Dhara cannot. And I would want Dhara and Gaumbi and so please never f*ck." smiley37

Loved Gaura though their moments are subtlesmiley27

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Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Arey this one was cute smiley42smiley42

I so loved her bond with kids smiley27

This is a parallel world where Dhara don't wish to have her own kids..smiley36

Krishhhsmiley37

"Krish said, please do not f*ck, because if you f*ck then Gaumbi and Dhara cannot. And I would want Dhara and Gaumbi and so please never f*ck." smiley37

Loved Gaura though their moments are subtlesmiley27

Thank you for your kind words ❤️

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Lol... Dhara does not want to have kids🤣

Oooh then omen thing... The society the culture... It binds only women..only they have to undergo every ridiculousness.

Kids literally tortured her.. But I loved the scneario🤣🤣 Happens in every house hold with kids.

Awwww at dev and shiva coming to dhara for sleep.

Krish learning the.. Oooh so not holy word...

Why no warning Roch...I was fasting today.....🤣🤣(just joking)

It was such a comic relief to read this one...

The kids were sweet in the show tooo... Had loved their stint in the show... And loving them here too❤️

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Originally posted by: Ocean_breeze

Lol... Dhara does not want to have kids🤣

Oooh then omen thing... The society the culture... It binds only women..only they have to undergo every ridiculousness.

Kids literally tortured her.. But I loved the scneario🤣🤣 Happens in every house hold with kids.

Awwww at dev and shiva coming to dhara for sleep.

Krish learning the.. Oooh so not holy word...

Why no warning Roch...I was fasting today.....🤣🤣(just joking)

It was such a comic relief to read this one...

The kids were sweet in the show tooo... Had loved their stint in the show... And loving them here too❤️

Thank you so much. This legit made my day, i had a really sour day today. ❤️


Yep, this Dhara 2022 does not wants kids haha. And all for valid reasons🤣

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Originally posted by: Gadbad_Ghotala

Thank you so much. This legit made my day, i had a really sour day today. ❤️


Yep, this Dhara 2022 does not wants kids haha. And all for valid reasons🤣

Hope you feeling good now🤗

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Part 1:

How cute was this!!

Bechaari Dhara was woken up and then slept through the prayers. Reminds me of when I was younger and would do the same during vacations. 😆

And then her cooking skills!! 🤣

The sandwich-making scene was adorable.

So Gaumbhi got Dhara home so that he convince Suman Kaki about his and Dhara's marriage?! Everyone except Dhara seems to know about his feelings for her. 😆

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