OS: Kaun mera...Mera kya tu laage... - Page 3

Originally posted by: tptwi

Satyaaaa you are truly so so so incredible at coming up with concepts and bringing them to life beautifully with your ability to write so vividly 🤗 I loved the entire story, but the ending especially. That one line from Akshu about Abhi being a part of her and them being one and the same is all he needed to hear. I hope that after all the family drama happens, Abhira have a moment alone and what you have described happens in the show too.... hayeeeee.... Thank you so much for all of your stories that you share with us. I am greedy and already waiting for your next one 🤣

Thank you Pooja. Glad you enjoyed this one too.

Arre that moment alone hi toh nahi milraha hain inn dono ko! Honestly they had more one on one moments (pun intended) before her confession 🤣

Originally posted by: anuandavi

Satya sweetie... 👏👏👏👏👏 It is fabulous.. Sumply superb... Naira's diary showed her what the actual prb was... Beacuse Akshara does need aoneone who can guide her, tell her, explain it to her... Now our Abhimanyu will b happy, with his Akshu with him...

And thank u for this OS.. Also, can u send me the other OSs/stories that u have written? I would love to read all of them

Thank you Anu. 🤗🤗🤗

Yes she needed someone to guide her and I couldn't find anyone until I remembered Naira's diary

Links for my previous OS:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5277825

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5281061

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5281385

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5281826

Originally posted by: DiscoDhokla

Satya, this is beautiful. ❤️

I wish it was shown like this in the show. Thank you so much for writing this beauty!!

You are most welcome. Glad you enjoyed.🤗🤗

Originally posted by: SatyaVS

Thank you Anu. 🤗🤗🤗

Yes she needed someone to guide her and I couldn't find anyone until I remembered Naira's diary

Links for my previous OS:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5277825

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5281061

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5281385

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5281826

All these links open this very page... Pls chk na

Originally posted by: anuandavi

All these links open this very page... Pls chk na

I'm typing thru my phone. Give me a few. I will edit

Wow! Amazing Satya. Really really enjoyed reading this. Weekend treat. If only, our Abhira would sort out things as easily in the serial too 😇

Originally posted by: SatyaVS

I'm typing thru my phone. Give me a few. I will edit

Mil gaya.. Thank u

Originally posted by: anuandavi

All these links open this very page... Pls chk na

Links for my previous OS:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/yeh-rishta-kya-kehlata-hai/5277825/os-aajkal-paon-zameen-par-nahi-rehte-mere

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/yeh-rishta-kya-kehlata-hai/5281061/os-yeh-moh-moh-ke-dhaage

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/yeh-rishta-kya-kehlata-hai/5281385/os-lal-ishq

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/yeh-rishta-kya-kehlata-hai/5281826/os-jaane-kis-aag-mein-yeh-shabnam-jalti-hain

Have copy pasted the links without selecting the insert link option. If you are on a laptop / ipad / chrome, it will be easier to select and copy paste.

If that doesn't work, you can search for the OS titles directly.

1. OS: Aaj kal paon zameen par nahi rehte mere

2. OS: Yeh moh moh ke dhaage

3. OS: Laal Ishq

4. OS: Jaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hain

Originally posted by: surbharati

As usual ...wow...... excellent......just love reading your OS

Thank you so much 😃

Originally posted by: Nikki_love

Kaaash show Mai aisa kuch ho and Abhi ke Dil ko sukoon mile..... brilliant writing. .

Thank you. I wrote this one for my own dil ka sukoon too. Not just to fulful Anu's khwahish 😉😆