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Considering V's age, it can be Raveena Tandon or Shilpa Shetty. And tip tip barsa Pani 😆

Actresses from growing up years 😜😜. If you know what i mean ☺️

Originally posted by: Moor278

Considering V's age, it can be Raveena Tandon or Shilpa Shetty. And tip tip barsa Pani 😆

Actresses from growing up years 😜😜. If you know what i mean ☺️

Even Ninad, Omi and Pulkit will pop up at that 🤣🤣

Amazing 👏

Update soon

Originally posted by: Moor278

Even Ninad, Omi and Pulkit will pop up at that 🤣🤣

Actually I had something in mind for a long time… to discuss about chavan girls … Devi and shivani especially. Virat saying the backstory and his childhood with them to sai…I find the Chavan girls bold and beautiful and rebellious than the boys 😅

And the important discussion on why virat ignored Devi’s condition for so long.

Originally posted by: sadiltl

Actually I had something in mind for a long time… to discuss about chavan girls … Devi and shivani especially. Virat saying the backstory and his childhood with them to sai…I find the Chavan girls bold and beautiful and rebellious than the boys 😅

And the important discussion on why virat ignored Devi’s condition for so long.

That would definitely be worth writing about. 👍🏼

Here is the review, only about part I. Part II and III will follow later.

We see a good relationship between V & S, going beyond the paradigm of CN. Virat, for instance, asking for a separate breakfast, also a separate hobby (Or fitness regimen). Sai supports him, at the same time tells Aai that she is still confirming to the rules herself.

Pakhi doesnt seem to be moving on. Though counselled by her father (I assume thats the term) she is still there, taunting Sai and feeling jealous all the time. Other members of the family have got used to those taunts, somewhat even desensitized. Nobody cares for her anymore.

Virat's memories of their room are cute. Well written, well thought about. The realization that they had missed so much has hit him again and again. Him smelling her discarded bra...was ahem...ahem. So finally he got the trick to unhooking it? I thought he would study that mechanism in detail.

Finally the college scene: Sai is proudly referring to her husband as Virat! no sir...and all her friends know that she is happy in her married life, despite the initial hiccups.

Sai advising her friend to confess her feelings is from her own experiences and mistakes. Too good.

Basically they have both learnt from their mistakes.

More later.

That’s so sweet of you. You captured my thoughts nicely. My additions in blue

Originally posted by: Sagi.

Here is the review, only about part I. Part II and III will follow later.

We see a good relationship between V & S, going beyond the paradigm of CN. Virat, for instance, asking for a separate breakfast, also a separate hobby (Or fitness regimen). Sai supports him, at the same time tells Aai that she is still confirming to the rules herself.

yeah I want to show that as husband and wife they have their own small family built inside the joint family. Inside their room it is their rules. I want to show they are getting closer not only physically but as a one single entity. As a married person I can vouch for these changes where you not only overcome the shyness but also ickiness around things, say morning breath or vomit etc. 😆 because you treat both of you together as one unit! Ofcourse you own each other tasks like ironing the clothes, polishing shoes etc. simple details that show they are truly together!

Pakhi doesnt seem to be moving on. Though counselled by her father (I assume thats the term) she is still there, taunting Sai and feeling jealous all the time. Other members of the family have got used to those taunts, somewhat even desensitized. Nobody cares for her anymore.

yeah she moved on from virats physicality . I mean she doesn’t get affected by it anymore but she can’t see sai happy with him. She doesn’t have sense of purpose in her life so she makes sai as one. She can’t get herself to be happy even there are opportunities and she knows it. I want to show her trying to move on but her inherent selfishness doesn’t let her do things for Sammy.

Virat's memories of their room are cute. Well written, well thought about. The realization that they had missed so much has hit him again and again. Him smelling her discarded bra...was ahem...ahem. So finally he got the trick to unhooking it? I thought he would study that mechanism in detail.

This I want to show in detail. Sai must really be living in shell in that room for that one year!!! No privacy because they are like not even friends but roomies. She must be so guarded and all. That’s why I wanted to show how she is completely opposite of what she has been. Being a single child, she must be very free in her house. Claiming the entire house and leaving things as she wanted. So I brought that in. She doesn’t organize while virat being in a strict family with service men is more organized . 😅 inside their room, he does heavy lifting 🤗. I wanted to bring these small details to relate to them more. I wish they could show all this with sairat.
so virat should know how much she compromised in that room

Finally the college scene: Sai is proudly referring to her husband as Virat! no sir...and all her friends know that she is happy in her married life, despite the initial hiccups.

Yeah the friends know her struggle so now they are all happy now. As I mentioned it before, this part comes from my own experience where one of our batchmates got married at 18-19 and we would listen to her romantic stories in awe blushing profusely.

Sai advising her friend to confess her feelings is from her own experiences and mistakes. Too good.

Basically they have both learnt from their mistakes.

More later.

Awesome story

Loving this normalcy in Sai and Virat’s life

But Pakhi won’t let it happen

Atleast Sai knows how to tackle her

Please update soon

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Awesome story

Loving this normalcy in Sai and Virat’s life

But Pakhi won’t let it happen

Atleast Sai knows how to tackle her

Please update soon

I have the Day 3 of chapter written, but recent episodes pissed me off so much that I wanted bigger punishment for Pakhi. but my story has to stick to the flow right? so buying time to see if I can make it work with current obscenity of pakhi 😡