How can story properly develop from here?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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As we see story is lacking depth...i want ideas how they can actually add meaning to the story...would love to see everyone share theirs n let see if it comes out true in the story

1)I want... Akshara to sing n dance more. Like naira dance academy something like that and not just social work . She should have a proper career. I can't tolerate akshara doing nothing but sitting at home or being Manish's driver or bringing strangers

2) abhimanyu and akshara to have a meaningful conversation that why they chose each other? What do they expect from each other?

3) abhimanyu to make akshara stronger as she is too sacrificing n all. He should appreciate her and make her understand her family

4) abhimanyu to leave birla hospital, start dadaji ka clinic n akshara supporting him...them being independent of family

5) i want them to share a mature relationship instead of just being koochi koo

6) i want a lot of nok jhok like in Christmas happened. Flirting too should be mature

7) some new abhira songs to be introduced

8) a new rishta for akshara and abhimanyu going mad and abhira fighting this together could be fun too( but this only after they form a proper bond, else it is another bad track)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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We have to give writer some time. Mess is sort out only when we clear about ani kv relationship. We can't even imagine what ' ye rishta kya kehlata hai' bet them.

My head spinning now 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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First off I would like to appreciate the writers ability to think of so many plot, but the problem is they think of it at the same time. It seems like 5 yr old wanting to try everything that is bought home.

I want writers to gather all the raitas that they so dearly spread across the table. To begin with I want to know why is Akshara not working on Naira's Dance academy she could very well make it a music academy also. If she wants to n if it still runs or not of course.

I've nothing against house wives but when you are capable of something n you love that as she claimed in Resignation episodes why waste your abilities of doing so.

Abhi leaving Birla Hospital seems impossible now considering everyone wants to get treated by him.🤣 If he leaves, Harsh will harass Akshu about the same till eternity. The man called Goenkas to eat their ears out regarding the same.

For starters they could fix this Noodles together, cuz she bothers me more than Manju ki Tomato chutney now. I can watch Manju's masterchef class instead of her cooking noodles everywhere.

I could also go on the sets n steal all the methi dana that they have stocked in, Scene ke naam par methi dana zyada screen space khata hain aaj kal 😡

Posted: 4 years ago
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Good points. Agree with most of it. Also I want side characters to be developed well and have proper tracks.

Posted: 4 years ago
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Great points ya.... They equally need to give screen space to all other characters and give pakka wala story line too .... Keeping fingers crossed

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishapl013

First off I would like to appreciate the writers ability to think of so many plot, but the problem is they think of it at the same time. It seems like 5 yr old wanting to try everything that is bought home.

I want writers to gather all the raitas that they so dearly spread across the table. To begin with I want to know why is Akshara not working on Naira's Dance academy she could very well make it a music academy also. If she wants to n if it still runs or not of course.

I've nothing against house wives but when you are capable of something n you love that as she claimed in Resignation episodes why waste your abilities of doing so.

Abhi leaving Birla Hospital seems impossible now considering everyone wants to get treated by him.🤣 If he leaves, Harsh will harass Akshu about the same till eternity. The man called Goenkas to eat their ears out regarding the same.

For starters they could fix this Noodles together, cuz she bothers me more than Manju ki Tomato chutney now. I can watch Manju's masterchef class instead of her cooking noodles everywhere.

I could also go on the sets n steal all the methi dana that they have stocked in, Scene ke naam par methi dana zyada screen space khata hain aaj kal 😡

@bold: yes i remember yrkkh season 1. They only brought one track at a time and focused on just that. It looked simple and realistic. It had a lot of light hearted moments.

I feel they shouldn't have brought noodles. Anisha track could be brought later n that too with a good actress not a psychotic one.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Give Utkarsh a chance to write the script and screenplay. The dialogues were decent in the initial episodes.

Send Rishi to direct pilot episodes of Rajan Sir's new project on Star Bharat and get back Romesh Karla.

I have seen only Humsafars out of the 9 or 10 shows done by Harshad Chopda. The dialogue has class. He can be hired.

Harshad has to review the script.

Otherwise it his loss.

Producers also depend at bankable stars.

Pranali is represented by a agency and it is a known fact that their representatives coordinate and give inputs to the creative team.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: borntorule12

@bold: yes i remember yrkkh season 1. They only brought one track at a time and focused on just that. It looked simple and realistic. It had a lot of light hearted moments.

I feel they shouldn't have brought noodles. Anisha track could be brought later n that too with a good actress not a psychotic one.

That's the main thing, even if writers want to show Noodles as a positive character the girl seems to give spoilt brat expression only.

Isn't Parth her brother better let her learn from her Bhaiyya, how to Suno Sabki aur Karo Kuch bhi Nahi.

They could even show some heart felt moments like cousins celebrating the patch up of Akshu n Aarohi. Isn't that what they dreamed from childhood, But No, they want to have go around playing Detective games with one being Byomkesh Bakshi, one home delivering strangers, one is trying to decode mystery, n the other is roaming on Mars with no connection with mother Earth

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Can we create a yrkkh season 1 and season 2 good scenes thread? like post the scenes with link if it's posted somewhere

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Sure, But pls don't kick me out for spamming it with Luv n Kush, I had loved them so much 😆

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