Love is all you need (original fiction) - Page 71

Originally posted by: Anjani9

You understood like that????? 🤣

I told you I'm nervous about this one! I have never written action like this before! 😔

Am very brave .....let me go and complete it......am brave....😳

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Nope. Is it good?

There is one scene in it....Comedy actor explains Knowledge is divine....Must watch...

Why this scene now....I was trying to tell you story has come out so well that am not able to read it due to tension....I was not able to convey it well to you....

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Am very brave .....let me go and complete it......am brave....😳

You finished it finally?

What did you think?

Did the reveals come as a surprise?

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

You finished it finally?

What did you think?

Did the reveals come as a surprise?

It has come out really well.....I thought it will be very plain.. as it reached final stage and there is delay....but it is really nerve gripping....

Originally posted by: Anjani9

It has come out really well.....I thought it will be very plain.. as it reached final stage and there is delay....but it is really nerve gripping....

Thank you! Happy to hear this.

I was fighting writer's block for such a long time and I always knew this update will be filled with all the action (that I had already planned to include). I just didn't know how to execute it.

I changed many things as I wrote, that's why I wanted to know if it was ok. And if you could see any holes in the narration.

I have to start 2nd time....life is going ulta pulta with some issue...

Originally posted by: Anjani9

I have to start 2nd time....life is going ulta pulta with some issue...

Oh no, I hope you’re okay.

You’re planning to read it again?

Let me know if some new thoughts occur to you 😳

You did a great job with the action. There was plenty of suspense and fear. If this was a first time writing action, it didn't look like it.

Originally posted by: coderlady

You did a great job with the action. There was plenty of suspense and fear. If this was a first time writing action, it didn't look like it.

Thanks so much. Yes, it was a first time for me writing action. Though I spent a lot of time planning it, but the execution was a different thing altogether.

I'm glad you found it okay.

Hope you're doing better.