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Posted: 4 years ago

So damn beautiful

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Monaparekh12

Awesome update amazing it was so beautiful words are short to describe how beautiful was update continue soon

Thank you so much 💗💗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: SEA05

Incredible flowering of love in one chapter. They are made for this. Like every heart on this planet. Let everyone get their dose of love, but for now let's be happy with love PriRa❤️💓❤️

Thank you..

Hope everyone gets their soulmate ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: SummerBorn

I am not sure if you’ve read this book called “Gariel’s Inferno” but the male protagonist of that book— Gabriel— YOUR Ram reminds me of him… he, too, after their first night together, cleans up his lady love in the same intimate caring love-filled gesture, then draws her a bath and lets her relax there.

It’s beautiful…. Nothing short of phenomenal beauty! And I can’t wait for your story to unfold even more beautifully with the coming chapters💓

Way to go, love💓

Thank you so much 😊

No I haven't read that story, whoever may do but that gesture will always be sweet.

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Posted: 4 years ago

True! Veryyyyy true! 💓

P.S: at the risk of sounding “desperate and hungry”, just gonna ask you… when are we getting the next part🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Hero_Coconut

OMG such a long update! Thank you for listening to our requests.


This was such a treat. Perfect in every way! Please let me know if there's a word for beyond perfection because that's what your writing is.


I love how you never forget to say that Ram locked the door 😂


I wish I could show this to my husband instead of the show.

Thank you so much for your beautiful comment.

Ram is very possessive about his biwi.. and also both are very private people in this story.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: lourel24

It was so beautiful.My most loved part-

She can see he was still sleepy and woke up because he can't find her. She smiled at him as he looked nothing less than a kid. She silently dragged him with her to the bed and made him sleep. He slept within a second hugging her tightly and she continued listening to her siblings ramblings while caressing her husband and occasionally placing a few kisses.

I JUST LOVED IT .

Thank you yaar. I'm very glad that you loved the update.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: SummerBorn

True! Veryyyyy true! 💓

P.S: at the risk of sounding “desperate and hungry”, just gonna ask you… when are we getting the next part🤣

Not today for sure..😬

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 19:


Next morning Priya woke up at her regular timing and went to get ready without disturbing her husband. She got ready and went to prepare the breakfast. After completing her work in the kitchen, Priya came to their room to see Ram still in bed but was speaking in the phone. Priya smiled at him while Ram signed her to come near. She went and sat in the bed beside him while Ram immediately kept his head in her lap still speaking in the phone. She sat silently adoring his antics. He had took hold for hand and kept it in his head. She sat there caressing his head with a smile in her face.

Ram: Adi you take care of that meeting.

Adi: Ram what happened to you? Why are you not coming to office?

Ram: Adi I'm not feeling well and I have not taken proper rest for more than two-three weeks. I'm totally drained yaar. I'm just taking two days off. It's not a big deal na.

Hearing him say not feeling well, Priya started panicking and started fussing over him. Seeing her restless, Ram kept the call in a mute before talking to her.

Ram : arey biwi calm down, I'm totally fine and I'm not in mood to go office. Now keep quiet.

He removed the call from mute while adi went on speaking.

Adi: It's not a problem, I will handle the everything, you take rest and take care of your health. If you want anything call me, I will do it. You don't have to exert yourself.

Listening to him Ram started feeling guilty for saying a lie to him.

Ram: Adi I'm totally fine, just thought to take a small break as we have worked relentlessly for last few weeks. Actually you know what adi, you should take my Jaan to a trip. I will join the office day after tomorrow and you can take small break after that. I will handle everything in your absence.

Priya smiled listening to his care and concern for their friends.

Adi: Ram are you okey?

Ram: yeah I'm totally fine, why are asking me this question?

Adi : you idea is brilliant Ram, anyway brindha is already torturing me for not spending enough time with her. This will make her happy for sure. Thanks Ram.

Ram: Now you will say thanks to me.

Adi: Okey okey enjoy your day. Take rest. Bye.

Ram: bye.

Ram threw the phone on the bed after ending the call before lying on his stomach with his head in Priya's lap and his hands around her waist.

Priya: what was that?

Ram just hummed in response.

Priya: why are not going to office Mr. Kapoor.

Ram raised her head to look at her with a naughty glint in his eyes which made Priya to back track.

Priya: okey okey what was the need for this day off Ram?

Ram gave a victorious smile to her before speaking

Ram: Don't tell me you are going to attend your classes.

Priya: ofcourse infact I'm ready.

Ram: Priya we are going to mandir now.

Priya: Mandir. We can go in evening Mr. Kapo I mean Ram

Ram: No way Priya, we are going to temple now. Can't you take off a day or two for your pati.

Saying so, he started making puppy face at her which she can never resist.

Priya: okey okey, I will ask twinkle to submit my leave form.

Ram: Two days biwi, for today and tomorrow.

Priya nodded her head in okey.

Ram gave her his full fledged smile before pecking her lips while Priya kept looking at him in shock. Then blushed realising his antics and ruffled his hair lovingly before placing a kiss on his nose which made Ram to blush a little and buried his face more into her lap. She laughed more seeing his blushing face.

After few minutes, Priya made Ram to sit in the bed

Priya: now come on Mr. Kapoor go and get freshen up. I will get your dress.

Saying so she went towards the wardrobe to get his dress. Seeing her busy with her selecting a suit for him, he went and back hugged her nuzzling his face into her neck which made her to stand still. As his proximity is making her turn into a puddle. He turned her and arrested her between him and the wardrobe. Both shared a beautiful eyelock. Ram slowly moved forward and started placing a line of kisses on her nape.

She closed her eyes in pleasure. Ram showered her face with wet kisses before claiming her lips in a hot passionate kiss. Soon both started fighting for the dominance over the kiss. They both broke the kiss when they went breathless. Priya hugged Ram resting her head in his chest. After sometime, Priya came out the hug and thrusted a towel to her husband before pushing him into the washroom to get ready.

Ram: Priya how about you helping me in showering?

Priya: shameless.

She ran out before he can tease her more which made Ram to laugh out loud.

Ram came out all ready in pink suit which his wife had selected. He stopped in his tracks seeing his wife. He was mesmerized would be an understatement. She looked outstanding in her plain baby pink saree with teal colour floral blouse. She looked simple and elegant with the jhumka, chooda,mangalsutra and the sindoor adorning her partition. She had used a small clutch to hold her top section of hair and left her hair in open just like how he loved. He was surprised with her dressing style as he thought she will be in her regular suit. But looks like his wife had planned to take his breath away.

He dragged her to him by holding her waist while she kept her hands in his chest for her balance.

Ram: what is your plan biwi?

Priya had her head down due to the shyness.

Ram: I don't think we can go to temple now

Priya: why what happened?

Ram: we can plan something within in this room.

Saying so he showed the bed which made her turn red like tomato.

Priya: ji nahi

She dragged him outside their room before he can say anything naughtily.

Priya was going towards the dining table

Ram: Priya we will have the food on our way.

Priya nodded her head at him while he dragged her with him by holding her waist towards the entrance.

Priya: where is the car Mr. Kapoor?

Should I call the auto wala Bhai?

Ram: No need to call anyone.

Ram closed Priya's eyes with his hands and took her to the other side of their parking spot. He removed his hands asked her to open her eyes.

She opened her eyes to see the bike she had selected standing majestically. She had totally forgotten about the bike.

Priya: Are we going to ride in a bike?

She asked excitedly looking at him while holding his hands tightly. He was little surprised seeing her excitement as she had a neutral reaction when he ordered the bike but now he can see how much she had desired for this.

Ram: Yes, come on let's go.

Ram dragged her near to the bike.

Priya: what is the cost of this bike Mr. Kapoor? It's amazing.

Ram: woh 1.2

Priya: wow, this looks so cool.

Ram: come on, for how long you are going to stand here and see?

Ram started the bike and asked her to sit through his eyes. She nodded and sat holding his shoulders which a bought a sweet smile in his lips.

Soon both were enjoying their first ride together.

Priya: I never know that you know to ride bike.

Ram: Arey I love bikes more than car. But then with the work load, I forgot everything. Now, thanks to you for turning my fantasy into real.

Priya just pressed his shoulder and both silently enjoyed their ride.

Ram parked the bike and both went to temple together. Priya bought the Pooja thali while Ram stood near her.

Priya: Ram paise deejiye.

While he kept looking at her standing still.

Priya shaked him a little

Priya: kya hua

Ram: woh nothing

Priya: toh paise deejiye

Ram: Haan haan ek minute

Ram took out his wallet and going to give 2000 Rs to the seller. While Priya stopped him and took the wallet from him

Priya: what are you doing? who will give 2000rs for a simple pooja thali. Aap bhi na.

She opened the wallet only to see 2000 rupees notes inside it. That's when she realised it was Ram Kapoor who uses only cards.

Priya: You should start keeping change with you. It will be useful in emergency.

She started rummaging through her bag for the change but to her unluck she had forgotten to bring her purse.

Priya: you give that money to him. I didn't bring my purse today.

She looked up to see him, while he was standing there with a goofy smile. Wife asking husband to pay for something she bought was the most mundane thing in everyone's life but this will be the most cherished moment of his life forever.

Priya: arey give the money.

Which bought him out of his lalala land. Ram nodded and gave the money to the seller. That's when he noticed jasmine flowers.

Ram: woh priyaaaa

Priya looked at him questioningly as he kept stammering while he showed the jasmine flowers through his eyes to which she smiled and nodded her head asking him to buy.

Ram gave her a full fledged smile bouncing in his feets before asking the seller to give the flowers.

Ram got the flower and thali while Priya got the change.

Both started walking towards the temple.

Ram: Priya wohhh

Priya looked at him with a smile and took the Pooja thali from him leaving the gajra in his hands while Ram looked at her confusion. Priya slowly turned and showed her back to him which made him smile like a fool. Ram took the flower and pinned it on her hair still smiling like a fool while Priya to smiled with a blush adorning her beautiful face.

Ram took her right hand and entwined it with his left hand before moving towards the temple to thank the God for this beautiful life.

-to be continued.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome update ram is so cute loved their moments continue soon

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