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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Hero_Coconut

My heart has swollen with happiness after reading this. Such a steamy part. RaYa's love story is so beautiful and the way you write just makes you fall in love with them all over again.


This actually reminded me of another show, Kasam Se with the real Ram Kapoor and Prachi Desai. Jiya Dhadak Jaye used to be their background song.


Please don't take long with the next part.

Thank you 😊 glad you enjoyed it. I have not watched that show. But I just can't stop thinking about Raya listening to this songā˜ŗļø

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: SEA05

Their closeness is as natural as their souls and feelings. Thank you for the wonderful moments of love

Thank you 😊 glad you enjoyed it

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Posted: 4 years ago

Will do yaar

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 18:

Ram woke up around 11 in the morning to see his beautiful wife sleeping only in his shirt. He kissed her forehead before getting up from the bed without disturbing her. He went to get freshen up. He looked at him in the bathroom mirror while brushing his teeth, he smiled seeing his messed up state. A wide smile spread across his face with little tinge of blush seeing the hickey that was given to him by his beloved wife. He smiled touching it remembering her antics.
After completing his morning chores, he came out wearing a fresh set of clothes to see his wife still sleeping, he decided to make their brunch ready before waking her up. Ram locked their room door from outside before moving towards to the kitchen. As he expected no one from their family was there as it was sunday. He went straight into the kitchen to see tarun working there. He asked tarun to wait outside for sometime as he wants the kitchen for himself. Tarun nodded at his boss and went away.
Ram decided to make some toasts, scrambled eggs, fruit salads and some fresh juice. He made it with little difficulty as he was an expert in only eating not in cooking but he made it with utmost concentration as he want his wife to enjoy it. Finally after an hour of battle he made everything and arranged it neatly in tray before taking it to his room.
He opened the room and entered sneakily as he didn't want his wife to get alert incase she had woke up from her sleep. But to his luck she seemed to be in deep sleep. He kept the tray in the table near couch and went to lock their room before joining her.
Ram went and sat beside her silently observing her. He never felt peaceful by simply looking at someone but here his wife is not someone. She is his everything.
He sat in half laying position with his back resting on the headboard of their bed. He touched her face softly, while in a Swift motion she scoooted and rested her head in his chest while encircling her hands around his stomach. He smiled at her reflex reaction. He started caressing her hair as he didn't not have the heart to wake her up seeing her tired face. He know he literally made her exhausted with their love making session as he can't seem to get enough of Her. The pent up love for her and finally acknowledging it openly made him crave for her more. He waited for her to wake up which she did after good 40 minutes.
Priya slowly opened her eyes to see her husband's love filled eyes looking at her intensely. She smiled at him while he wished her a good afternoon after giving a chaste kiss on her lips. Priya woke up startled listening to his good afternoon.
Priya: Mr. Kapoor afternoon?
Ram: what Mr. Kapoor?
Priya looked at him confused
Ram: I have a name Priya and I do clearly remember you using that name more than once yesterday night.
Saying so he gave her a naughty smile which made Priya cover her blushing face with her both hands. Ram slowly removed her hand from her face and asked her to use his first name, for which Priya shaked her head in a big NO. Ram smirked at her before rolling over her and pinning her under him.
He started placing a series of kisses on her before giving a small bite on her collor bone which made Priya to moan his name. He looked at her with satisfaction over the result he got. Priya hugged him tight blushing hard which made ram to give a throaty laugh. Then Ram moved from her and started picking her in his arms while Priya kept on asking what he was doing. Ram without saying anything took her to bathroom and placed her in the tub where he had already made a bubble bath ready for her. She looked at him with questioning eyes
Ram: I want you to take a relaxed shower and enjoy. I don't mind joining you but then I have already exhausted you more than I planned. So I will plan that shower for another day. Now you enjoy.
Ram left without waiting for her reply after kissing the top of her head leaving behind a proud wife.
Priya smiled remembering his antics, her husband never cease to amaze her. After their early morning romance, her husband went to washroom and bought luke warm water and a soft towel. She looked at him questioningly while he ignored her confused looks and started giving her a sponge bath. She tried to refuse him but he made her shut up and continued his work with utmost concentration. She started relaxing as it did give her some relief to her sore body. After completing the sponge bath, he made her wear his shirt and made her sleep by hugging her close to his heart along with whispering sweet nothings.

Priya for the first time had a relaxed bath as she decided to enjoy her husband's pampering.
Meanwhile Ram came out of the washroom and decided to clean their room before his wife can came out as he didn't want her to exert herself. He looked around the room and smiled seeing their messed up room with melted candles, dried up roses, crumbled sheets and his wife's crushed Jasmine flowers all over the bed while her ornaments and their dress was thrown in the floor. He smiled once again before cleaning the room. After finishing the cleaning work, he went down to prepare fresh toasts as he didn't want her to eat cold ones.
He went and prepared some toasts and scrambled eggs again , this time he made it pretty easily. Before moving to their room with the tray, he ordered tarun to make variety of dishes for their dinner. Ram went to his room and started waiting for his wife impatiently.
He turned to see his wife hearing the door opening sound, he was awestruck seeing the beauty before him. She is wearing her regular simple salwar suit that she wears at home. Her face looked nothing less than a beautiful bloomed red rose. She looked exceptionally beautiful with the water dripping hair, what made her more beautiful was the glow that radiated from her.
He had to admit his wife had a remarkably special glow on her face which he had never noticed before.
She gave him a shy smile and stood near the bed. Ram moved towards her and took her in a bone crushing hug which she reciprocated in equal vigour.
They finally found their way to their home in truest sense.
Ram took her face in his both hands while looking into her eyes with unshed tears in his eyes before pressing his lips in her forehead.
He then held her close to him and pressed his forehead against her before whispering an I love you Priya in a barely audible voice but enough loud for Priya to understand which made her to tear up. Priya too held his face with her both hands still their forehead pressed against eachother before whispering an I love you Ram.
The tears started rolling down from both the pair of eyes. Priya softly moved forward and kissed away his tears which made him to hug her again and surrender himself to her.
They both stood in eachother's embrace to their heart content. They had reached this place after a long struggle but they felt all their struggle was worth as it gave their togetherness. It was Ram who broke their hug as he remembered their food. Ram just picked her in arms and took her to the couch. He placed her gently on the couch before taking his seat next to her.
Ram: Priya I made this specially for you, now taste and tell me how is it?
Priya was surprised with his sweet gesture, she eagerly took a bite from everything that her husband had made for her and she must say it was damn tasty food as it was filled with his love for her. He smiled seeing the twinkle in her eyes with every bite she took. He know he made the most basic food but then it is his Priya who always values love more than anything.
Seeing her take a bite of strawberry from the fruit salad, he got a naughty idea. Before Priya can realise anything her husband had took her lips in a passionate kiss. Ram left her after sensing her breathless. Priya looked at him with a puppy eyes while he chewed the strawberry that he stole from her which made Priya to bury her face in his chest seeing his naughty ways.
Ram: kya hua biwi. I waited for you to feed me but madam was busy in her food, so decided to get fed by you myself. Strawberry did taste more delicious in this way.
Hearing him talk like this she turned the darkest shade of red and gave a slight pat on his arms while he happily hugged his wife.
Ram: Atleast feed me now, I'm also starving due to the excess work I did at night.
He winked at her saying that, while Priya blushingly muttered a shameless to her husband before picking the spoon to feed him.
Ram: wait a minute madam
Saying so, in a Swift motion he picked Priya and place her on his lap. Priya tried to get down from his lap but he was adamant that he will only eat like this. Having no other way, she made herself comfortable in her husband's lap and strated feeding him. They ate sharing their food in their own unique way. Priya was pleasantly surprised with her husband's romantic gesture. Priya smiled thinking how he slowly made her comfortable and helped her in shedding her inhibition around him. After finishing their brunch, Priya hugged him tightly while Ram kept caressing her. Then later he took her to their bed and pinned her under him while Priya blushed seeing the desire for her in his eyes. She was surprised when Ram just kissed her forehead before laying down beside her.
Seeing his questioning eyes,
Ram: I know what you thinking and even I want the same. But it is necessary for you to get rest. We have our whole life ahead. I will collect it with interest and Priya your interest rate will be more than 22%.
Which made her to slightly punch in abdomen while he hugged her laughing wholeheartedly.
They cherished their time together, they were happy in their own little world. They slept hugging eachother while talking randomly.
Priya woke up listening to her phone ring. She was startled at first then relaxed seeing her husband. She had cut the call immediately as she didn't want her husband to wake up. She know even he was tired. She was touched by his sweet gestures, he had cleaned their room and made breakfast for her along with bubble bath. She felt proud being his wife as the love and respect he had given her was something she never thought she would ever get. Her love for him only kept increasing. She kissed his forehead and combed his hair using her fingers. She softly placed a kiss in his nose as he looked so adorable before getting up from the bed.
She was little shocked seeing the time as it was 7 pm. But then relaxed as it was Sunday no one will ask anything. She went to the vanity table and looked at herself in the mirror. The face reflected in the mirror was new to her. Her face had a smile that never left even for a fraction of second. Her husband's love did surely reflected in her face. She was not one who believed in something like this but even she can see the obvious difference in her. The happiness in her heart radiated in her face. She looked at herself in the mirror before whispering Ram which made her blush and cover her face with her hands. She turned to look at her husband who was sleeping peacefully with a smile in his lips. She said a small prayer for her husband's hapiness before combing her hair. She took a pinch of sindoor and kept it in her partition. She never keeps sindoor at night but today she felt different. Keeping sindoor of his name gave a different hapiness today. She smiled looking at herself, then seeing ram still sleeping she decided to talk to her family. Priya called Sara di and started talking to her, they asked her to video call them but today she didn't feel like talking in video call. So she diverted the topic and talked with them while standing in the balcony.
When Ram woke up he searched for his wife, then finally found her in the balcony taking in the phone. Seeing her talking animatedly he can understand it was her siblings. He went and back hugged her resting his chin on her right shoulder as she was speaking with her phone in left side. She was little startled at first then recognising his touch she smiled. She turned towards him still speaking in the phone and asked what happened through her eyes while ruffling his hair which made him to hug her more tightly. She can see he was still sleepy and woke up because he can't find her. She smiled at him as he looked nothing less than a kid. She silently dragged him with her to the bed and made him sleep. He slept within a second hugging her tightly and she continued listening to her siblings ramblings while caressing her husband and occasionally placing a few kisses. She felt as if this is the most natural thing to do. After ending the call, she simply stayed in that position looking at her Ram with all her love.
After Ram woke up, he asked tarun to bring the dinner to their room as they didn't feel like getting out of their paradise. Tarun bought all the dishes that ram had asked him to make, ram thanked tarun who went away after giving him a smile.
Then both Ram and Priya ate their dinner from a single plate while feeding eachother.
After completing their dinner, both sat hugging eachother in their balcony and started sharing anything and everything randomly.
Priya slept in the balcony while listening to him, he adored her sleeping form. He carried her in his arms and made her sleep in the bed, he kissed her forehead before joining her in the bed. Soon both Mr and Mrs. Ram Kapoor slept peacefully hugging eachother. The peace, happiness and love that finally they get to enjoy is nothing less than a miracle for them.

Edited by Supercool30 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome update amazing it was so beautiful words are short to describe how beautiful was update continue soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Incredible flowering of love in one chapter. They are made for this. Like every heart on this planet. Let everyone get their dose of love, but for now let's be happy with love PriRaā¤ļøšŸ’“ā¤ļø

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Posted: 4 years ago

I am not sure if you’ve read this book called ā€œGariel’s Infernoā€ but the male protagonist of that book— Gabriel— YOUR Ram reminds me of him… he, too, after their first night together, cleans up his lady love in the same intimate caring love-filled gesture, then draws her a bath and lets her relax there.

It’s beautiful…. Nothing short of phenomenal beauty! And I can’t wait for your story to unfold even more beautifully with the coming chaptersšŸ’“

Way to go, lovešŸ’“

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Posted: 4 years ago

OMG such a long update! Thank you for listening to our requests.


This was such a treat. Perfect in every way! Please let me know if there's a word for beyond perfection because that's what your writing is.


I love how you never forget to say that Ram locked the door šŸ˜‚


I wish I could show this to my husband instead of the show.

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Posted: 4 years ago

It was so beautiful.My most loved part-

She can see he was still sleepy and woke up because he can't find her. She smiled at him as he looked nothing less than a kid. She silently dragged him with her to the bed and made him sleep. He slept within a second hugging her tightly and she continued listening to her siblings ramblings while caressing her husband and occasionally placing a few kisses.

I JUST LOVED IT .

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Such a lovely update

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