ABIRA OS - Heart Break PART 4 Pg 3 (24.1.22)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Abhi waiting at the sunset point. Akshu didn’t turn up. He waited till 5 pm. No sign of Akshu.

Neil called up to tell about Aarohi’s trip and he had also found out college management seat.

Abhi took a deep breath. He decided what to do.

He went straight home and saw only Neil waiting for him asall the other jus left for the venue of marriage

Neil : Bhai! Shall we leave?

Abhi : Haan Neil! I am ready!

Neil: what have you decided!!

Abhi : Don’t worry!! I have decided well! You will feel happy with my decision.

Neil was very happy!!!

Neil and Abhi left in the fully decorated car!!

AT THE MANDAP

Everyone was waiting at the gate to receive him.

Abhi: Namaste Mimi!!! I need to talk to Aarohi in front ofyou all.

Manish: Lekin now its time for muhurat!

Abhi: I insist!!( abhi was standing like a statue)

Manish: Swarna! Call Aarohi!

Aarohi comes. Fully decked up for the marriage!!!!

Abhi: Hi Dr. Aarohi!! Can you please tell me who saved mefrom the fire in the camp???

Aaro: …………blank…………

Abhi: How much did you pay for the management seat forMD???

Aaro: ………..shocked……………

Abhi: Did you take care to hide the duplicate bill?

Aaro: Abhi !!! What are you saying??

All this while Akshu was standing near Aarohi! But Abhi didn’tbother to see her.

Everyone were confused hearing to what Abhi is saying.

Abhi told in details about what had happened.

Abhi: I don’t want to marry Aarohi.

Earlier I thought I will marry Aarohi for my moms sake butshe kept on lying and all she wanted was to become Birla Bahu.I am not ok withthat.

He then turned to Akshu!!!

He looked at everyone and spoke

I loved Ms. Akshara. (Ms. Akshara- Akshu felt a thorn inher heart)

I thought she too loved me.

When I came to know about the truth I asked Akshara and asked her to come and meet me at sunset point today at 4 pm thinking that she too loves me.

I am wrong. She sacrificed her love for her sister. For Ms.Akshara only Dr. Aarohi matters not anyone else in this world.

Ms. Akshara was also hand in glove with Dr.Aarohi. She kept on agreeing with Dr. Aarohi and supported all her lies.

For me lie is a lie and it is a mistake!!!!!! No concessions!!!!

Akshu: No it is not like …

Abhi: raised his hands in mid air…… Without uttering a word to Akshu, he turned and said I am speaking to you Bade Papa.

Few people are lucky to have their loved ones in their life. Hope I m not that lucky.

I loved Ms. Akshara truly madly. But when she asked me infront my parents that being a heart doctor I cant understand my own heart broke me half.

Her lies today and not speaking up and not even now uttering a single word broke me fully.

I am done with you all. I m leaving. Don’t worry, It happens Not everyone get what they want!

I am not that weak to take my life. I m planning to go to London.

I have got a job offer there.

Saying this Abhi left!!!!!

Akshu was too shocked to say anything.

Aarohi was embarrassed.

Neil felt happy but was sad that Akshu didn’t confess herlove to Bhai.


PART 2 UPDATED

PART 3 UPDATED PAGE 2

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Will continue if u all want me to may be another 1 or 2 part!!!!

My first try!!!

sorry for the type errors!

Sorry if it hurts any of your sentiments!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Its an interesting concept.

Please continue soon

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This is so much needed right now

Good to see that he left both of them

Interesting...continue soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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plz continue, akshu needs to work so hard to earn back abhi😭

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 2

Akshu was devastated.

Aarohi was seething with anger.

Akshu decided to meeti Abhi . She went straight to Birla Mansion.

Akshu went straight to Abhi’s room

Abhi: Hi Ms.Akshara. Kaisa Aana hua???? Any thing I can do for you?

BTW I don’t do any hospital related work at home.

Akshu: Abhi I am sorry.

Abhi: Sorry. For what Ms. Goenka???? Did you do anything wrong???

Akshu was not able to take this indifferent behavior of Abhi anymore.

Akshu: What should I do to make you believe that I too love you?

Abhi: YOU!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow I didn’t expect that. I thought you loved only your sister and no one matters to you in this world. Not even God!!!!

Akshu: PLeaseeeeee……..

Abhi: I am sorry Ms. Akshara. Like you have your priorities that is your only priority is your sister I too have my priorities.

And now if you are finished talking I have to sleep. Today was a long day .. heart breaks, acceptance, punishment etc etc etc…..

He went straight in to his rest room and switched on the tap.

Akshu was waiting for him patiently outside.

Abhi came out after good 30 minutes.

The time was already 11 pm.

Akshu: Abhi I m not going to go without an answer from you.

Abhi: Mam strangers and my colleagues call me Abhimanyu FYI.

Akshu: I don’t care what others call. I will call you only Abhi. And you are MY ABHI!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Abhi: I am sorry Ms. Akshara. I think I have come out of delusions by 5 pm today evening.

Akshu: Are you angry with me?

Abhi: Angry and care should be shown to people whom we love. Not to strangers.

Akshu: Yeah ok let me be a stranger. But I will not let you like this. I will come behind you till you accept me.

Akshu stood up and said bye Abhi.

Abhi: Bye

Akshu: it is 11:30 in the might and I have to travel nearly25 minutes alone. Will you not drop me?????

Abhi: Sorry mam! I thought you like travelling with your sister and to my knowledge I am not your sister to be an important person in your life.

Akshu: I can understand the sarcasm and the taunt!!!

Abhi: Bye Ms. Goenka. From now on please maintain distance. I don’t entertain any strange women in my room that too late in the night.

Akshu: I’m your would be wife. So this room belongs to means much as it belongs to you.

Saying this she stomped out of th room.

Neil: Please drop me at my home. Your brother is not bothered about me.

In Abhi’s room

Akshu slightly opened the room to see his reaction. Abhi doesn’t seem to bother he took his quilt and lied comfortably in his bed and got ready to sleep.

Akshu: Abhi I know you are angry with me. I will convince you. I m confident of that.

End of Part 2.

Will continue

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I dont know how to edit the topic saying part 2 updated!!!!

So jus posted.

PL tell your comments

Rotten tomatoes adn Chappels are also welcome!!!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I m just so excited for this fic, its really hard to wait for the next part

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: sredaa

Part 2

Akshu was devastated.

Aarohi was seething with anger.

Akshu decided to meeti Abhi . She went straight to Birla Mansion.

Akshu went straight to Abhi’s room

Abhi: Hi Ms.Akshara. Kaisa Aana hua???? Any thing I can do for you?

BTW I don’t do any hospital related work at home.

Akshu: Abhi I am sorry.

Abhi: Sorry. For what Ms. Goenka???? Did you do anything wrong???

Akshu was not able to take this indifferent behavior of Abhi anymore.

Akshu: What should I do to make you believe that I too love you?

Abhi: YOU!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow I didn’t expect that. I thought you loved only your sister and no one matters to you in this world. Not even God!!!!

Akshu: PLeaseeeeee……..

Abhi: I am sorry Ms. Akshara. Like you have your priorities that is your only priority is your sister I too have my priorities.

And now if you are finished talking I have to sleep. Today was a long day .. heart breaks, acceptance, punishment etc etc etc…..

He went straight in to his rest room and switched on the tap.

Akshu was waiting for him patiently outside.

Abhi came out after good 30 minutes.

The time was already 11 pm.

Akshu: Abhi I m not going to go without an answer from you.

Abhi: Mam strangers and my colleagues call me Abhimanyu FYI.

Akshu: I don’t care what others call. I will call you only Abhi. And you are MY ABHI!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Abhi: I am sorry Ms. Akshara. I think I have come out of delusions by 5 pm today evening.

Akshu: Are you angry with me?

Abhi: Angry and care should be shown to people whom we love. Not to strangers.

Akshu: Yeah ok let me be a stranger. But I will not let you like this. I will come behind you till you accept me.

Akshu stood up and said bye Abhi.

Abhi: Bye

Akshu: it is 11:30 in the might and I have to travel nearly25 minutes alone. Will you not drop me?????

Abhi: Sorry mam! I thought you like travelling with your sister and to my knowledge I am not your sister to be an important person in your life.

Akshu: I can understand the sarcasm and the taunt!!!

Abhi: Bye Ms. Goenka. From now on please maintain distance. I don’t entertain any strange women in my room that too late in the night.

Akshu: I’m your would be wife. So this room belongs to means much as it belongs to you.

Saying this she stomped out of th room.

Neil: Please drop me at my home. Your brother is not bothered about me.

In Abhi’s room

Akshu slightly opened the room to see his reaction. Abhi doesn’t seem to bother he took his quilt and lied comfortably in his bed and got ready to sleep.

Akshu: Abhi I know you are angry with me. I will convince you. I m confident of that.

End of Part 2.

Will continue

nice waiting for pt 3😊
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: sredaa

Part 2

Akshu was devastated.

Aarohi was seething with anger.

Akshu decided to meeti Abhi . She went straight to Birla Mansion.

Akshu went straight to Abhi’s room

Abhi: Hi Ms.Akshara. Kaisa Aana hua???? Any thing I can do for you?

BTW I don’t do any hospital related work at home.

Akshu: Abhi I am sorry.

Abhi: Sorry. For what Ms. Goenka???? Did you do anything wrong???

Akshu was not able to take this indifferent behavior of Abhi anymore.

Akshu: What should I do to make you believe that I too love you?

Abhi: YOU!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow I didn’t expect that. I thought you loved only your sister and no one matters to you in this world. Not even God!!!!

Akshu: PLeaseeeeee……..

Abhi: I am sorry Ms. Akshara. Like you have your priorities that is your only priority is your sister I too have my priorities.

And now if you are finished talking I have to sleep. Today was a long day .. heart breaks, acceptance, punishment etc etc etc…..

He went straight in to his rest room and switched on the tap.

Akshu was waiting for him patiently outside.

Abhi came out after good 30 minutes.

The time was already 11 pm.

Akshu: Abhi I m not going to go without an answer from you.

Abhi: Mam strangers and my colleagues call me Abhimanyu FYI.

Akshu: I don’t care what others call. I will call you only Abhi. And you are MY ABHI!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Abhi: I am sorry Ms. Akshara. I think I have come out of delusions by 5 pm today evening.

Akshu: Are you angry with me?

Abhi: Angry and care should be shown to people whom we love. Not to strangers.

Akshu: Yeah ok let me be a stranger. But I will not let you like this. I will come behind you till you accept me.

Akshu stood up and said bye Abhi.

Abhi: Bye

Akshu: it is 11:30 in the might and I have to travel nearly25 minutes alone. Will you not drop me?????

Abhi: Sorry mam! I thought you like travelling with your sister and to my knowledge I am not your sister to be an important person in your life.

Akshu: I can understand the sarcasm and the taunt!!!

Abhi: Bye Ms. Goenka. From now on please maintain distance. I don’t entertain any strange women in my room that too late in the night.

Akshu: I’m your would be wife. So this room belongs to means much as it belongs to you.

Saying this she stomped out of th room.

Neil: Please drop me at my home. Your brother is not bothered about me.

In Abhi’s room

Akshu slightly opened the room to see his reaction. Abhi doesn’t seem to bother he took his quilt and lied comfortably in his bed and got ready to sleep.

Akshu: Abhi I know you are angry with me. I will convince you. I m confident of that.

End of Part 2.

Will continue


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loved it! It’s high time Abhi leaves these 2 crazy girls! Just Arohi roasting in part 1 was longer 😆
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Pls update the next part ,it’s very interesting want to know how they meet again 😍

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