Abhiya AT #281 ~ Rabb Se Main Maangu Tujhe Har Ek Dafa - Page 64

Originally posted by: simply.meghana

Yeah I realize it need to bring it soon, perhaps as a climax 😆 but I don’t want to make it sloppy so been pushing it a little further just so I can plan it better

But i think just as i was saying there might be weak point. Why are they going to war? I mean define the stakes of each side and what they stand to gain. If you have already done then i believe i ahve missed.

Originally posted by: Abhaythevampire

so in my mind i dont see war as the end climax. Generally in my experience such kind of books take a lot of time to set up for the war and then they go to war where lot of things might be taking place. And then the climax comes when one starts to tip the scale in favour of them.

But i think just as i was saying there might be weak point. Why are they going to war? I mean define the stakes of each side and what they stand to gain. If you have already done then i believe i ahve missed.

Fair point 👍🏼 I do need to think about this more and if the chapters themselves need to be longer so be it.

Metz just wants power, perhaps I was too vague in my attempts to explain it? 😲 I do plan to go back after it’s concluded to tweak some of the chapters and edit again, for future readers

Originally posted by: simply.meghana

Fair point 👍🏼 I do need to think about this more and if the chapters themselves need to be longer so be it.

Metz just wants power, perhaps I was too vague in my attempts to explain it? 😲 I do plan to go back after it’s concluded to tweak some of the chapters and edit again, for future readers

Originally posted by: Abhaythevampire

i remember. And why also i remember. That is because that ayushman screwed her mind into thinking that. However in a book i would want to see why does ayushman want that power? Is there any back story to why do they want global domination? What i dont understand is what is the problem with that ambition. See logically if u ask me i would aay k yeah sure we dont want dictator. But thats logic. It does not invoke any emotion there. To invole emotion you need to show the stakes that everyone has to pay if metz comes into ruling. And that earth quake or controlling nature is not enough. I will tell u why. Because it can be temp move to get domination and stop abhay and company. After that may be she can make a good ruler and create better life for all. Thats what generally all dictators think they do. They are the heroes of their own stories. But abhay n company need a very strong motivation to stop metz. Metz will kill piya and claim abhay is only abhays motivation. Personal to him and may be his family. The world wouldnt want to interfere in that. its like imagine yaha india me koi random couple is not able to be together. You would feel sad for them sure. But you wont really do much about it unless u have a relation. And ofcourse not everyone is going to be related. So the motivation needs to be stronger and sth so generic every character can relate to and will impact of it. Define Why would others want to join the fight. What do they have to lose if metz comes to power?

I’ll definitely try and take this into consideration when writing the next chapters 👍🏼 hopefully it will make sense and my writer’s block doesn’t ruin anything 😆 because it hasn’t really gone away yet 😆

Originally posted by: simply.meghana

I’ll definitely try and take this into consideration when writing the next chapters 👍🏼 hopefully it will make sense and my writer’s block doesn’t ruin anything 😆 because it hasn’t really gone away yet 😆

Originally posted by: Abhaythevampire

sure. Hope it helps. I have been taking lot of lessons thought to share some with u as i read theough the story 😅

Much appreciated 🤗 even still my writing isn’t the best but always looking to improve 😆

Originally posted by: simply.meghana

Much appreciated 🤗 even still my writing isn’t the best but always looking to improve 😆

Originally posted by: Abhaythevampire

i understand. I keep doing this too. It takes lot of time to actually get to the level of a real fantasy book.

yeah it does 😆 and I tend to put more time towards art more than writing 🤣 writing is more of a side hobby and I want to only stick to fan fictions

Originally posted by: Abhaythevampire

i understand. I keep doing this too. It takes lot of time to actually get to the level of a real fantasy book. I even try n analyse the stories in this way to see what they did. Fee free to do the same for me if i ever writer next thing🤣

Originally posted by: simply.meghana

yeah it does 😆 and I tend to put more time towards art more than writing 🤣 writing is more of a side hobby and I want to only stick to fan fictions