RAYA SS: RAM.... (Completed) - Page 8

Hey loved the story... Ram really wants to work his marriage... And him realizing that and working on it and whole turmoil is beautifully written.... Please continue soon... Eager to read more... Take care :)

Fiesty priya blasting people - check

Ram ignoring Vedu darling- check

Ram finally scolding Shubu for his mistakes- check

Ram warning subhu for disrespecting priya-check

Puppy Ram -check

This ticked all the right boxes👏

And this part deserves its own fandom🤣

"his eyes landed on a gel haired barbarian talking with a certain dark-haired siren in olive green saree enchanting everyone around her without any notice"

Originally posted by: ajacob31

Loved it. I like how Ram has his priorities straight. I liked the way Vedika was ignored of her undue advances. I wish our show story moved along the same lines.

Waiting for your next update.😍

Well if the story was going the same way no one will be writing any fanfiction 😂

Originally posted by: Shivpriya6

Love Bri so much- “ whenver your wife ignores you, just say sorry to her “;). This is so true. Could totally relate to it. Priya may appear tough, but she is quite sensitive. Also the Vedika and Shubhu scenes - all wow!

Thank you 💕🤭

Originally posted by: oye_nakhrewaali

Awww, this is some awesome work. I love how vulnerable Ram is and how sensitive and kind Bri is. Pri was literally on fire, setting everyone on fire🔥🔥🔥

Keep'em coming

Thank you 💕 means a lot🤭

Will update soon.

But you will be getting a couple of chapters on your prompt soom too.

Originally posted by: TheCoolDocSid

Oo oo.. read it in one go! Super good! Keep the next update quik Ritika! Can’t wait!

I kind of have a hunch ..priya fell for ram and is processing her hurt/feelings by avoiding him.. while he is behind her as a puppy 🐶 with his own mission.

Also what a thoughtful gift by ram yaar..he is so

Thank you 💕

Will update soon.🤭

Originally posted by: Biggboss15

Hey I loved reading your stories🤗❤️. Will be waiting for chapter 2🥳

Thank you 💕

But there are already 4 chapters available, but soon will be updating more.🤭

Originally posted by: Veruthe

But the Ram we know is mentally retarted can't do this. Good one Ritika ❤️🔥

🤣 that's why I'm giving him a brain in my story😂😛

Thank you💕

Originally posted by: aisha_ranbir8

Hey loved the story... Ram really wants to work his marriage... And him realizing that and working on it and whole turmoil is beautifully written.... Please continue soon... Eager to read more... Take care :)

Hey! Thank you ❤️ means a lot. Yes will update soon. You take care too😚

Originally posted by: Winteriscoming

Fiesty priya blasting people - check

Ram ignoring Vedu darling- check

Ram finally scolding Shubu for his mistakes- check

Ram warning subhu for disrespecting priya-check

Puppy Ram -check

This ticked all the right boxes👏

And this part deserves its own fandom🤣

"his eyes landed on a gel haired barbarian talking with a certain dark-haired siren in olive green saree enchanting everyone around her without any notice"

Thank you 🙈🙈🙈🙈

I'm glad you enjoyed but I have 3 more chapters before this if you didn't notice 🙈😛