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Posted: 3 years ago

Thanks yaar! Could have been better when I revisit it 😅

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Posted: 3 years ago

She looks beautiful 🤩. Hope there is no more crying 😢

And Neil should get a haircut too 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: sadiltl

Friday musings from these angsty track. How each of the 3 central characters feel when the love of their lives is leaving...I am not good at poetry but I want to write something succint and capture a lot. So chose this format.


Note: If you observe Pakhi in this whole situation, she is just gloating that Sai left, she is not bothered that Virat found another woman. It could be because only she knows how much Virat loves Sai. He had told her directly multiple times. And he rejected her advances downright when he had chance to take her EMA offer. So, if she really has courage to stand up for Virat, she could stop all the humiliation he is facing now by bringing out his love for Sai. And she can easily bring Sai back to him. Sai, unfortunately believes her :) for the history they share. Hence, I wrote this from Pakhi's perspective.


Pakhi (when Virat will be leaving)


I Wish I could stop you (my love) for

I could see the truth in those eyes from the time I met you

I could feel the passion to do the right thing since you first let 'that' girl in

I could weigh the hurt when your "love" left you, because

I could hear your countless professes of your love for her, still ringing in my head


I trust you with my life that you could not falter,

not after I saw you protecting her from every attack, that I planned for her

not after I saw you fall for her deeper and deeper every day

not after I saw you bawling on the floor when you pushed her to death

not after I saw you half dead when she met her death closely again


I wish I could say all this and stop every tirade that is attacking you

I wish I could stand in front you and show your love for 'Her,

I wish I could go and bring back your 'Love' in a jiffy

I wish I could protect your heart for "that" woman, who I made my enemy...

but Alas...my love as you say cant go beyond me!


Virat (when Sai was leaving the house)


Oh my love, how I can I go to any other woman

When I saw in you, the beauty that runs inside out, that attracts me

When I smell from you, the sweetness of your smile, that brings me immense joy

When I hear from you, the truth as bitter as Neem, that heals me still

When I feel your love, the passion that springs in me, that shows me my patience

Not to taste you, till you feel the same for me.


My dearest, you complete me because, only

You can show me the reality without any judgement

You can give me the love without expecting anything

You can accept me with all my faults

You can forgive me of all my mistakes, but

Can you for once trust me that I can love no one but you?


Don't go away please, for

I cannot be the same man without you,

I cannot live in the same space without you,

I cannot call you back with my rights, because

I did not give you the right to chose me at first, now

I can only wait for you to chose me, my love for you is beyond me!


Sai (before giving back the ring and leaving)


In you I see the love my father had for me, the love

Which gave me wings to fly

Which gave me voice to question

Which gave me courage to dream

Which gave me strength to fight, but

that makes me weak in my knees too...


Ofcourse, the love I have for you is so different, I want you

to be my best friend for life, who I can share all my secrets

to be my guide, who can correct me when I falter

to be my father, who pampers me with no bounds

to be my lover, who sees me as a woman

to be my husband, who gives me his name and family


And I cannot share your love with anyone because

I am selfish when it comes to you

I am jealous when someone calls for your attention

I am arrogant when you cant see me beyond my words,

I am taunting to dig out the love that seems covered with new burden,

Ahhh, Why cant you understand me now, when you heard my silences before!


I became all this 'vile' because

The walls I built around my heart to protect from your love, have crumbled

Crumbled inside and trapped me, under your "new" found love...or is it

Just my insecurity, wielding its ugly head?, come stop me

For as much as I want to fly and soar ahead

I want to come back into your arms and rest...

This is so beautiful. I remember when Sai was leaving Pakhi wanted her to leave and she was praying her not to return. It was her selfishness since she thought she would get Virat back in her life. And, most of all she's the only who knows that Virat loves Sai from the bottom of his heart.

Your insight of both Sai and Virat is perfect too.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: sadiltl

She looks beautiful 🤩. Hope there is no more crying 😢

And Neil should get a haircut too 😳

As much as I want your words to come true I know it's far fetched. There's plenty of things to make us cry. The courtroom drama is still looming large and then Virat getting injured. So much of tension coming up. I hope I'm wrong and we get a pleasant surprise.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Be ready every one to welcome Shriti as real Mrs Chavan in CN. Mitali posted her with the caption ‘ Could be Chavan”

Looks like time to quit this shit.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: sadiltl

Thanks yaar! Could have been better when I revisit it 😅

wecome🤗

Bold: it happens😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Shruthi will enter Chavan Mansion? Did this happen in KD? Or is this Vankar's creativity? Virat had left the house so, why would he come back again?

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Posted: 3 years ago

I know except Sadhika others don’t love Sai. So giving you a good news about upcoming track.

Bhavani accepts Shriti as her Bahu and Sahas as Chirag. Both will reach CN. Virat still keeps mum. Shriti Anyway is a manipulator.

I want to see what defence will you come up with to support Virat now.

His whole purpose of hiding truth will get nullified if he allows Shriti into CN as his wife.

When Ninad questioned why he didn’t bring Shriti home,Virat replied that she is in danger. Now what about that danger?

Vankar closed all doors to revive Virat’s image.

I know for all of you including Sadhika Virat did mahan kaam by saving Shriti even at the cost of breaking his marriage.

But my stand remained the same.

Let Sai forgive him but I won’t since he commited a sin not blunder by insulting his wedded wife by impersonating her with another who is a criminal by law.

Just wanted to give you good news. I doubt you won’t feel bad for Sai and are ok with Shriti..

Happy Sunday

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Posted: 3 years ago

chill yaar. nothing will happen like that. :)

Vankar has given some amazing twists. lets see.

my only disappointment would be if the family believes he is married for 1.5 years with Sruthi!!🤣 Then what did he have with Pakhi and why did they taunt him all along that he has become "Joru ka Ghulam" to Sai?

So I think someone's tubelight will be on! BK or Samrat's.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: sadiltl

chill yaar. nothing will happen like that. :)

Vankar has given some amazing twists. lets see.

my only disappointment would be if the family believes he is married for 1.5 years with Sruthi!!🤣 Then what did he have with Pakhi and why did they taunt him all along that he has become "Joru ka Ghulam" to Sai?

So I think someone's tubelight will be on! BK or Samrat's.

Whatever it is no one is going to calculate and analyse. They now have a readymade waris whose origin wont be disclosed either by Virat or Shriti.

So happy married life Virat and Shriti since Sai will file divorce to clear way for Shriti.

Probably Vankar thought enough of SaiRat let me explore Virat Shriti.

Their TRP will go down for sure since Home viewers also won’t tolerate this shit.

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