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Posted: 4 years ago
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Rula ke gaya ishq mera

Maana thi khata meri

Par dil todna uska

Marzi nahi majboori thi meri

Nanhi si thi main

Jab saath chhuta apno ka

Sambhala maine khud ko bhi

Khayal rakha sabke sapno ka

Behan me hi ab

Basti thi jaan meri

Aur wo lagati dosh

Kehti hai sab galti thi meri

Kiya kya gunaah jab

Behan ke liye chhoda maine

Jisne jaan ne ki koshish hi na ki

Dil uska tukdo me toda maine

Dard hua jab usne

Dhoya rang mehendi ka hathon se

Galti nahi hai uski par

Dil to bahut roya uski baaton se

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Do tag more people as I don't know who all will be interested in this creation of mine ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Rula ke gaya ishq mera

Maana thi khata meri

Par dil todna uska

Marzi nahi majboori thi meri

Nanhi si thi main

Jab saath chhuta apno ka

Sambhala maine khud ko bhi

Khayal rakha sabke sapno ka

Behan me hi ab

Basti thi jaan meri

Aur wo lagati dosh

Kehti hai sab galti thi meri

Kiya kya gunaah jab

Behan ke liye chhoda maine

Jisne jaan ne ki koshish hi na ki

Dil uska tukdo me toda maine

Dard hua jab usne

Dhoya rang mehendi ka hathon se

Galti nahi hai uski par

Dil to bahut roya uski baaton se

Wow, your on a roll today. This is just perfect on how Akshu’s feeling.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: jani_faizal

Wow, your on a roll today. This is just perfect on how Akshu’s feeling.

Yippee 🥳 I am so much happy

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Rula ke gaya ishq mera

Maana thi khata meri

Par dil todna uska

Marzi nahi majboori thi meri

Nanhi si thi main

Jab saath chhuta apno ka

Sambhala maine khud ko bhi

Khayal rakha sabke sapno ka

Behan me hi ab

Basti thi jaan meri

Aur wo lagati dosh

Kehti hai sab galti thi meri

Kiya kya gunaah jab

Behan ke liye chhoda maine

Jisne jaan ne ki koshish hi na ki

Dil uska tukdo me toda maine

Dard hua jab usne

Dhoya rang mehendi ka hathon se

Galti nahi hai uski par

Dil to bahut roya uski baaton se


This explains her state of mind so well... And this is so so well written ❤️ you have such an impeccable talent Nidhi 🤗 truly fabulous...


She lost him for a person who does not fear loosing her and this pricks her the most ... She deserves love... Hope Abhi tells her that and she do the same to him ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9


This explains her state of mind so well... And this is so so well written ❤️ you have such an impeccable talent Nidhi 🤗 truly fabulous...


She lost him for a person who does not fear loosing her and this pricks her the most ... She deserves love... Hope Abhi tells her that and she do the same to him ❤️


Yr being the target of someone you have loved since childhood and always being guilty for something u r not even resposible for cause so much pain . But we always let it pass away as something not so serious

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445


Yr being the target of someone you have loved since childhood and always being guilty for something u r not even resposible for cause so much pain . But we always let it pass away as something not so serious



For Akshara and Aarohi, if someone I have to blame then it's Goenka. Akshara never shared and they never bothered, Aarohi goes on to blame nd they never stopped her.


And now there is Akshara who is lost. Abhi was her shore but she pushed him away with the wave which Aarohi was. And now she is broken. The girl will pick herself soon ❤️ she will be okay

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is so beautiful and Akshu's pain is so visible through this poem

It's like summing up journey and pain of Akshu❤❤

Last 3 lines 🥺

Keep writing dear

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is such a wonderful piece. Akshara's pain and heartbreak 💔 😢

Keep writing more.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#10

Rula ke gaya ishq mera

Maana thi khata meri

Par dil todna uska

Marzi nahi majboori thi meri

Nanhi si thi main

Jab saath chhuta apno ka

Sambhala maine khud ko bhi

Khayal rakha sabke sapno ka

Behan me hi ab

Basti thi jaan meri

Aur wo lagati dosh

Kehti hai sab galti thi meri

Kiya kya gunaah jab

Behan ke liye chhoda maine

Jisne jaan ne ki koshish hi na ki

Dil uska tukdo me toda maine

Dard hua jab usne

Dhoya rang mehendi ka hathon se

Galti nahi hai uski par

Dil to bahut roya uski baaton se


❤️

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