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priyanka

@Dimagkidahi

Dazzler

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Posted: 3 years ago

😍😍good one with all the feels

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hurrom moqsurat

@hurrom

Voyager

+ 12

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: blackfaree
😍😍good one with all the feels

Thanks... Can u tag others. Now my tag is not working.. I wanted to tag u. But u r online... 😊

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lovereading14

@lovereading14

Rocker

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: hurrom
OS update......

res... will come back!

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diya

@Diya121

Navigator

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Posted: 3 years ago

That there is a pretty lovely OS, I can visualize it I wish they show something like that in show. One can wish:p

DO WRITE MORE🤗

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moksha89

@moksha89

Rocker

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hey Hurrom!

It’s so lovely that you’re writing - this OS gave me a feel of an episode with the intrigue, romance, action and even comedy. I can totally see Imlie trying to be undercover as the actress to get a story as we’ve seen her do it once before. You also captured Aryan’s smart, determined and edgy nature. It was nice to see the concept of the phone app and tracking here, bc I don’t know when the users will utilize it 😆 or if they will

I really loved your opening quote 😍 it really set the mood ! My only question is that you mentioned she was married 3 times before the age of 21 - will you creating a backstory for that?

I enjoyed reading ☺️

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hurrom moqsurat

@hurrom

Voyager

+ 12

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Diya121
That there is a pretty lovely OS, I can visualize it I wish they show something like that in show. One can wish:p
DO WRITE MORE🤗

Thanks... 🤗... yeah sure..😊......I completed it today.... First thought that I will post this after 3/4 days....but I couldn’t sleep so completed it and post it....yeah I will write when I will be free.....because I am going to be really bsy this coming days regarding a case....😊

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hurrom moqsurat

@hurrom

Voyager

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: moksha89
Hey Hurrom!
It’s so lovely that you’re writing - this OS gave me a feel of an episode with the intrigue, romance, action and even comedy. I can totally see Imlie trying to be undercover as the actress to get a story as we’ve seen her do it once before. You also captured Aryan’s smart, determined and edgy nature. It was nice to see the concept of the phone app and tracking here, bc I don’t know when the users will utilize it 😆 or if they will
I really loved your opening quote 😍 it really set the mood ! My only question is that you mentioned she was married 3 times before the age of 21 - will you creating a backstory for that?
I enjoyed reading ☺️

No....she married 3 times with AKT... First forced marraige... Then PD with rituals following her mother wish....and table tod shaadi with AKT....

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moksha89

@moksha89

Rocker

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: hurrom
No....she married 3 times with AKT... First forced marraige... Then PD with rituals following her mother wish....and table tod shaadi with AKT....

Oh! Lol, I never saw them separately 🤣

Maybe they’re not really divorced … teen bhar papers ko sign karwana padega 🤣