FF: Dooriyan aur Nazdeekiyan part 31 pg 116 - Page 18

This is one of my most fan fic till date. First of all the plot is killing me and over that the shayris are taking my soul away. Beautiful the whole scenerio was but apart from that the small details like phone notification, gajar ka halwa, besabri and what not add freshness to the story and the best part is Samar. Banda true matchmaker hai, matlab itne kaand kar rakhe hai isne 🤣. Ek ke baad ek jo jhooth ki baarish karwa rha hai ye banda matlab waaahh, gazab hai. Anupama is glad for what he did but doubting her child in the process 🤣

Over all a complete hooker and arz kiya hai,

Aapke likhawat mai aisa nasha hai ki jaam bhi piche chut jaaye,

Aapki lafzon mai aaisa jaadu hai ki jaadugar sharma jaaye

Aur aapki tarif mai kya kahe app wo rooh hai jo doosre ko choo jaye.

Sorry lame but still....

Lovelyy...that besabri part was toooo good...🧡❤

"Jab door the unse tab

Milne ko besabar the.

Jab woh milne aaye tab

Unki qurbat me rehne ko besabar huye.

Ab unki qurbat haasil huyi hai toh

Unke aks banne ko besabar hain.

Lagta hai yeh besabri ka aalam

Yoon hi barqaraar rahega,

Jab tak fanaah na ho jaye sabhi faaslein

Tab tak humara dil besabr rahega!"

Beautiful Shayari. Seedhe rooh ko choo jati hai ❤️

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"Zor zabardasti zidd me hoti hai, pyaar me nahi!"

This is so so Anuj, thanks for retaining the essence of his character.

Besabri

Thats the state of my mind too. Thanks for this beautiful update, I fell in love with Anuj all over again after reading.

I was kind of hoping to read the next day morning part too, was so engrossed, only to realise have reached the end..

I can understand need to wait for next part, will try to keep intezaar.

Thanks Noorie for updates and special thanks again for the Shayari 🤗

This tadap...uff kya hi kahu🤗

Evenin the last part, I was so moved by their dil ki bechaini about being away from each other. Whaat is this behaviour yaar? Unki iss short term judai ka ghum mujhe unn dono se zyada hai.

Anuj asking Samar to leave aand then hugging anu in the car, both so not eager to let go..👏kya epic scene tha. Agar ye show main dikh jae toh bas

man your shayari🤗, anu k sath even i need a shabdkos😆 but Anuj ki besabri.

Am so in love with these two fools in love💗

Hey Noorie❤️

First of all thankyou for the tag. I feel honored. This is such a lovely,pious progression of Maan and suits them so much.

Ye dono kitne Besabr hai year par inse jayada to main hoon aage padne ke liye.

I deliberately missed part 8 and read last two together and I glad I did. Most recent wala thoda chota tha...tum apne waade ki pakki rehna ok?..☺️ Agla part hame BADA chahiye.

Shayri kya kamal likhti ho...🤗

Thankyou for lightening up the dull mood from yesterday's episode and brightening up the dry day.

Keep going like this dear.

Thank you for tagging me! Loving your story✨🙌🏽❤️

Thanks for tagging update was fantastic i like shayri part n maan part

Originally posted by: Zica04

This is one of my most fan fic till date. Hey dear! What's your name? Thanks for saying that! ❤️

First of all the plot is killing me and over that the shayris are taking my soul away. Uffff! Kya baat kahi hai! 👏

Beautiful the whole scenerio was but apart from that the small details like phone notification, gajar ka halwa, besabri and what not add freshness to the story and the best part is Samar. Banda true matchmaker hai, matlab itne kaand kar rakhe hai isne 🤣. Sach me! Humare MaAn jitne slow aur sanskari hai na unko Samar jaise quick thinking match maker ki hi zaroorat hai!

Ek ke baad ek jo jhooth ki baarish karwa rha hai ye banda matlab waaahh, gazab hai. Anupama is glad for what he did but doubting her child in the process 🤣 Haha! Typical mom! 😆

Over all a complete hooker Thank you so much dear!

and arz kiya hai,

Aapke likhawat mai aisa nasha hai ki jaam bhi piche chut jaaye,

Aapki lafzon mai aaisa jaadu hai ki jaadugar sharma jaaye

Aur aapki tarif mai kya kahe app wo rooh hai jo doosre ko choo jaye.

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Woah! God bless you meri jaan!🤗Shayari has a very very special place in my life! Back in the days "before whatsapp", me and my shayar Kapadia used to send shayaris to each other, forwarded ones, via SMS! You took me back to those wonderful days!Unki shayari ke bad pehli bar kisi ne shayari bheji hai mujhe, woh bhi khud likhkar! Wow! Thank you thank you thank you! I love you! (Anuj style!)

Sorry lame but still.... Please don't say sorry! You have no idea what this means to me! ❤️❤️❤️

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Originally posted by: Km181

"Jab door the unse tab

Milne ko besabar the.

Jab woh milne aaye tab

Unki qurbat me rehne ko besabar huye.

Ab unki qurbat haasil huyi hai toh

Unke aks banne ko besabar hain.

Lagta hai yeh besabri ka aalam

Yoon hi barqaraar rahega,

Jab tak fanaah na ho jaye sabhi faaslein

Tab tak humara dil besabr rahega!"

Beautiful Shayari. Seedhe rooh ko choo jati hai

❤️ Hey Komal! Thank you so much dear! Means a lot! ❤️

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"Zor zabardasti zidd me hoti hai, pyaar me nahi!"

This is so so Anuj, thanks for retaining the essence of his character. Unki is hi adaah pe toh hum fida hai! ☺️

Besabri

Thats the state of my mind too. Thanks for this beautiful update, I fell in love with Anuj all over again after reading. Aww! Pleasure!🤗

I was kind of hoping to read the next day morning part too, was so engrossed, only to realise have reached the end.. Sorry! Next update will have the morning part.

I can understand need to wait for next part, will try to keep intezaar. Sabar rakho dear kyunki sabar ka phal meetha hota hai! 😳

Thanks Noorie for updates and special thanks again for the Shayari 🤗 Pleasure is all mine! Thanks for sharing your feedback religiously after every update! Loads of love! ❤️

My replies in purple