Arylie OS: Wedding night - Page 4

Originally posted by: SundariP

re-reading.... (just for the stomach flips😆 & microscopic analysis😎)

ok who washes hair @ night... imlie ko pakka zukham hoga next part me

lo... room me ac bhi on hai.... wet hairs + AC (plus i need to knw the weather)

i feel sad that she still thinks its "his bed" poor baby is traumatized!!!

everything about the "awkward first night" was in order including the pillow wall & morning embarresment... except they didn't fight for which side of the bed to sleep.

lol.... reaching the right mutually agreed AC temperature is the highest level of intimacy in a relationship imo!! poor them yet to reach there.

so... my fav part... when he asks for her hand to admire her mehendi...

you say he speaks softly but why do i read it in his husky voice in my head ☺️

i know... because of imlie's reaction... chatur ho aap! aru doesn't realise his voice is husky at all 😆

everything else was covered in prev comment! 😊

On point behen, Aru knows if he turns on his sexy mode (dude you don't have to turn it on, you ooze it by just breathing but I digress, focus on the answer dammit), if he does, she might just run away from him at this particular point. He knows girl is not ready to go there even though her body thinks otherwise. 😒

Waise, when I am in India, I do wash my hair at night. What are hair dryers for??? I cannot stand the dirt and grime from Mumbai's pollution. I never could, not even when I was a teenager. Abhi toh it is more congested and polluted if it is even possible. I mean SV Road traffic, stuck in an auto for at least an hour or two ....can do that to you. Mumbaiites probably can identify.

Originally posted by: mltr16

Here I go quoting my own answer instead of editing it. Tells you how sleep deprived I am 🤣🤣

Originally posted by: mltr16

On point behen, Aru knows if he turns on his sexy mode (dude you don't have to turn it on, you ooze it by just breathing but I digress, focus on the answer dammit), if he does, she might just run away from him at this particular point. He knows girl is not ready to go there even though her body thinks otherwise. 😒

Waise, when I am in India, I do wash my hair at night. What are hair dryers for??? I cannot stand the dirt and grime from Mumbai's pollution. I never could, not even when I was a teenager. Abhi toh it is more congested and polluted if it is even possible. I mean SV Road traffic, stuck in an auto for at least an hour or two ....can do that to you. Mumbaiites probably can identify.

he's going to be a really passionate lover... given what a passionate hater he is...

waise its so funny.... lol (the past relation b/w whom he hates and whom he's going to love... dark humour 🤣)

eeeeks!! Life is keeping me super-busy or you would've read all this squealing the very first time I read this piece. Still my favourite favouuuurite thing that's written on them! I've literally re-read this quite a few times but was actively trying to avoid logging on to IF or the next thing I know, there's a 600 word essay churning out 😆

Coming back, the part where he finds his name in her henna and the whole part where it strikes her what's going on and Aryan's 'grin' at finding it are super adorable! I'm so in love with the Aryan in your stories!! Always respecting boundaries and promises.

Ah, also Imlie, my baby girl, there's so much healing to do on her part, and her hesitancy was so heartfelt. But, I feel Imlie naturally gravitates to him (even if we keep his physicality aside ) and that's a major reason how that might work in Aryan's favour later on, because it's not going to be an easy ride.

The pillow fortress didn't even last ONE day!?! lmaooo

Just sending loads of love @ your writing for giving Aryan and Imlie their rightful, gradual progression, and @Aryan for maintaining that resolve for 3 years (or longer?) with Imlie making him experience this torture every night!?! Bless him and his resolve, honestly 💗

This is my first post on this forum. Absolutely loved your story. I could definitely imagine Aryan lying stiffly on his edge of the bed with eyes wide open waiting for imlie to wake-up. Do keep adding more parts to this one!

Originally posted by: GenMed

This is my first post on this forum. Absolutely loved your story. I could definitely imagine Aryan lying stiffly on his edge of the bed with eyes wide open waiting for imlie to wake-up. Do keep adding more parts to this one!

GenMed if you haven’t already, check out the SS Full circle. This story is a small part of that one. I admit the chapters are long but hopefully engaging enough. Do try and let me know your thoughts.

pillow wall was a common scene but mehandi reading and their feelings were awesome ..

He thinks of her as his wife his patience with her is awesome ..

It is somewhat painful for her again and again remembering she is adi's ex wife and she has to be aryan's wife ..she is trying but this is weird for her ..if possible continue ..

At last their cute banter how his pateince levels are increasing because of her love to know ..

Originally posted by: mltr16

Sarce, this came out of the blue. Even I didn’t know I was going to write this one 😜
These two characters are dangerous. They make me do things I would never normally do! 🤦🏻‍♀️

They've both hit me too out of the blue. 😆But I've just been stuck to the DT and haven't done much otherwise. Though I'm glad that they've turned you from a newbie writer to a damn writing machine!🤣

I see you have started at the very beginning. A very good place to start indeed. 😃

Might as well follow the sequence instead of going random. 😆