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Posted: 4 years ago
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Amazing 👏👏

Your writing sparks so much joy :') what to say

Loved every line 💓

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Posted: 4 years ago
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How beautifully you have penned it.❤️!! I fell in love with detailing you have presented. Poor Aryan! Be it sleep or his self control wasn't with him. It's very difficult to stay away from a person you love. Imlie's mental state, It has that real essence. Waiting for more os like this.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I can actually imagine all that happening

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I will comment just keep writing you are amazing go for it...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priti1610

I will comment just keep writing you are amazing go for it...


Priti you always, always write nice comments 😃 I was just pulling SundariP's leg. 😉

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Posted: 4 years ago
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But i really meant it... You are the best

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Poor Aryan. pata nahi kya kya karna padga pyaar mein.🤣. Nice writing keep going 👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This was too cute!! I found myself smiling throughout it all!! Can ITV's just focus on the relationship between ML and FL and none of this OTT drama that plagues leads and only leaves 0.2 seconds of actual drama!! arrrgh!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: radicalleftist

This was too cute!! I found myself smiling throughout it all!! Can ITV's just focus on the relationship between ML and FL and none of this OTT drama that plagues leads and only leaves 0.2 seconds of actual drama!! arrrgh!!

Think about it this way, if they focus in like we do toh mere jaise velle log kya likhenge. Their OTT drama makes these simpler stories that much sweeter. Agree though that the accompanying acting and visuals would make the stories so much more alive. Someone had posted a thread about doing limited part series and I so agree with that. Better watch something short sweet and meaningful than a 5000 part cringe fest? 🤓🤓🤓


I so appreciate the time you have taken to write your feedback and therefore encouraging me. 🤗🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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re-reading.... (just for the stomach flips😆 & microscopic analysis😎)


ok who washes hair @ night... imlie ko pakka zukham hoga next part me

lo... room me ac bhi on hai.... wet hairs + AC (plus i need to knw the weather)


i feel sad that she still thinks its "his bed" smiley13 poor baby is traumatized!!!


everything about the "awkward first night" was in order including the pillow wall & morning embarresment... except they didn't fight for which side of the bed to sleep.

lol.... reaching the right mutually agreed AC temperature is the highest level of intimacy in a relationship imo!! poor them yet to reach there.


so... my fav part... when he asks for her hand to admire her mehendi...

you say he speaks softly but why do i read it in his husky voice in my head ☺️

i know... because of imlie's reaction... chatur ho aap! aru doesn't realise his voice is husky at all 😆


everything else was covered in prev comment! 😊

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