OUR LITTLE SECRET-RECREATING SHIVI (FF)PART 25 PG 64 - Page 12

Hello Virangna❤️!!!

3rd part: Loved it! The intentional sabji marna, and how Krish caught onto the fact that not one actually came close to touching her... 😆Loved Shivi's conversation after that the most though. How Raavi's worried for their future and Shiva promised her his support, understanding that she would be pulled between two families if things didn't set right right from the start. Show Shiva only learnt this lesson after the Kangan Kaand! 😒

4th part: Loved the text format! You did a good job with it Virangna, but maybe you could consider leaving all the text in black? The colours were a bit too light to be easily read, the green atleast.

That aside, the writing was great! The little flashback, how Shiva makes lame excuses when caught in the act was so him! And Krish? Love how you're keeping him as the observant but immature kid he was at the start of the show🤪! Raavi wants to study further and is taking advice from Shiva regarding it, such a couples thing to do, but also shows how much she wants his support behind her every step forward in life....

PS Recreating the kidnapping track? I have no objections so long as it means a protective Shiva! 😆

Part 3 was super cute ❤️

I loved how Raavi asked Shiva to throw vegetables on him😆

Krish is getting suspicious of ShiVi

Both of them on Shiva's tree was so cute! I want to see such a scene in the show too

Part 4

ShiVi's phone conversation was adorable.. it was typical them.. thoda banter, thoda love aur thoda romance.. mujhe padhke maza aaya ❤️

I'm loving how you're recreating all the scenes!

Originally posted by: virangna2005

guys, what do you think about recreating shivi's kidnapping🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔?

kidnapping is one of my fav tracks of PS.. would love to read! ❤️

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Makers se koi hope nahi h mujhe ab toh inse hi chalana padega😅

Bas misunderstanding na ho show ki tarah rest I trust your creativity 😄

Show me toh misunderstanding ka level hi kuch tha🥺

But mere shivi ki understanding high level achi hai💖

And further story will but serious and full of twist ......kyunki shivi ka secret bhi toh revel Karna hai 😁😆

Originally posted by: Jiyakumari

Next update kab milega?🥺

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Hello Virangna❤️!!!

3rd part: Loved it! The intentional sabji marna, and how Krish caught onto the fact that not one actually came close to touching her... 😆Loved Shivi's conversation after that the most though. How Raavi's worried for their future and Shiva promised her his support, understanding that she would be pulled between two families if things didn't set right right from the start. Show Shiva only learnt this lesson after the Kangan Kaand! 😒

4th part: Loved the text format! You did a good job with it Virangna, but maybe you could consider leaving all the text in black? The colours were a bit too light to be easily read, the green atleast.

That aside, the writing was great! The little flashback, how Shiva makes lame excuses when caught in the act was so him! And Krish? Love how you're keeping him as the observant but immature kid he was at the start of the show🤪! Raavi wants to study further and is taking advice from Shiva regarding it, such a couples thing to do, but also shows how much she wants his support behind her every step forward in life....

PS Recreating the kidnapping track? I have no objections so long as it means a protective Shiva! 😆

I always wanted krish to be in this way......he is the only one who speaks his heart out😁😁

here I made shiva a very supportive partner here because I always felt the need of this in show......

sorry for the text part's colour😅😅

krish is 🤣😂

raavi's study, I just wanted this topic to be their, don't know why........will try to add shiva's study too.......😊

recreating kidnapping😁it's going to be fun for me and the reader

you'll get a protective shiva soon😉😉

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Part 3 was super cute ❤️

I loved how Raavi asked Shiva to throw vegetables on him😆

Krish is getting suspicious of ShiVi

Both of them on Shiva's tree was so cute! I want to see such a scene in the show too

show se koi umeed mat rakho......kuch nhi milega😕

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Part 4

ShiVi's phone conversation was adorable.. it was typical them.. thoda banter, thoda love aur thoda romance.. mujhe padhke maza aaya ❤️

I'm loving how you're recreating all the scenes!

trying best to recreate the scene....let's see till where I'll be able to do that😊😊

NOTE.....................

hey guys, as I trying to recreate the best shivi scenes in this os....so please suggest me scene you want me to recreate here......if possible I'll recreate them where ever possible😊😊😊😊