The love we lost : a shivi ff chapter 9 updated page 17, complete - Page 11

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Posted: 4 years ago

Drashi, loved it ❤️

Raavi’s fear and insecurities were so real.

Shiva’s attempt and do or die situation.

You very well wrote their feelings.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Drashi, loved it ❤️

Raavi’s fear and insecurities were so real.

Shiva’s attempt and do or die situation.

You very well wrote their feelings.


Thank you so much❤

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Posted: 4 years ago

👍🏼🤗👏

loved it a lot😍😍😍

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Posted: 4 years ago

Loved it😘🥰😍

Finally they both confessed..........

All the conversation was really deep..........

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Posted: 4 years ago

I am so emotional right now.

The crazyyyyyy amount of build up, the crazyyyyyyyy longing for each other.

The moments before kiss were sooo awwwwdorableee ❤️

Pls pls pls continue this story. I am a huge fan waiting for this one. 🤪🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: prernapewdie

I am so emotional right now.

The crazyyyyyy amount of build up, the crazyyyyyyyy longing for each other.

The moments before kiss were sooo awwwwdorableee ❤️

Pls pls pls continue this story. I am a huge fan waiting for this one. 🤪🤗


Aww thank you so much❤

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Posted: 4 years ago

Oh my my i loved the tension here❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Just read the whole thing

It's amazing

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Posted: 4 years ago

Darshi! You finally updated!!! Hopefully the last update will come jaldi jaldi? That aside, I loved this update! You know what they say about letting go of the past in order to move forward? Raavi so far has shied away from talking about their pasts, and today she's finally let it all out. She's finally confronted him the way she ought to have a long time ago.

I like how Raavi didn't actually call him a coward but he still heard it. She tried so hard to talk to him and he just couldn't open up to her and I get that, but he had no right to hurt her the way he did and he's acknowledged that here. Their confession was admittedly a very in the moment thing, but atleast she finally admitted to loving him.

Looking forward to the family's reactions!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Darshi! You finally updated!!! Hopefully the last update will come jaldi jaldi? That aside, I loved this update! You know what they say about letting go of the past in order to move forward? Raavi so far has shied away from talking about their pasts, and today she's finally let it all out. She's finally confronted him the way she ought to have a long time ago.

I like how Raavi didn't actually call him a coward but he still heard it. She tried so hard to talk to him and he just couldn't open up to her and I get that, but he had no right to hurt her the way he did and he's acknowledged that here. Their confession was admittedly a very in the moment thing, but atleast she finally admitted to loving him.

Looking forward to the family's reactions!


Thank you so much for this review.. I'm going to update soonish & thank you so much for liking this ❤

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