SaiRatFF:I want to leave(Epilogue-pg.20) - Page 12

Wonderful 😊❤️

Pyaar mein sab chalta hai

Sairat ke beach jo bhi ayega uska dil tote ga🤣

Do pagal Premi kuch bhi kar sakte hai ek dosre ke liye ❤️❤️

Sai abhi se shaadi nahi karna chahti thi woh toh challenge pura karne aur virat ko jalane ke liye tha.

Finally dono ek hogaye 😘❤️

End Acha sa hot romance hona ☺️ 😳

Waiting

I don't give a f**k about what these two decide to do, I just know that Abhi deserves better. Yes, even better than Sai because these 2 have behaved like insensitive jerks and 'knowingly' hurt him in the worst way possible. Virat was gonna arrange for a fake pandit, really? Man, what about Abhi's heart and his dreams of a good future? Sai was playing stupid games with Abhi and using him just to make Virat jealous, really? Girl, what about the times he stayed by you and helped you heal? This is how you pay him? No, not done. I don't even feel happy about them coming together!

Can you do me a favour Niki Di? I have an inkling that the epilogue is going to be all Sairat but still, can I get a small part where Abhi temporarily breaks ties with Sai and Virat and stops talking to both of them? He can, of course, rekindle friendship later(if he wants to) but initially behave indifferently. I believe you have your story planned but still, a small part please! Abhi deserves this much, right?

Thank you so much for the tag❤️ Irrespective of the characterization, the story is very well-written😳

Originally posted by: Flying_High

I don't give a f**k about what these two decide to do, I just know that Abhi deserves better. Yes, even better than Sai because these 2 have behaved like insensitive jerks and 'knowingly' hurt him in the worst way possible. Virat was gonna arrange for a fake pandit, really? Man, what about Abhi's heart and his dreams of a good future? Sai was playing stupid games with Abhi and using him just to make Virat jealous, really? Girl, what about the times he stayed by you and helped you heal? This is how you pay him? No, not done. I don't even feel happy about them coming together!

Can you do me a favour Niki Di? I have an inkling that the epilogue is going to be all Sairat but still, can I get a small part where Abhi temporarily breaks ties with Sai and Virat and stops talking to both of them? He can, of course, rekindle friendship later(if he wants to) but initially behave indifferently. I believe you have your story planned but still, a small part please! Abhi deserves this much, right?

Thank you so much for the tag❤️ Irrespective of the characterization, the story is very well-written😳

I knew you would be angry at the characterisation, especially of Sai, but if you see through the FF, Sai is impulsive throughout. She is confused and stupid and at last selfish too. I wrote this keeping in mind that love is selfish. Abhi is a nice guy but surely cannot get Sai at the end of it all. I agree it would have been better if she told him, she tried too but emotions override. Also, you cannot be mahaan or perfect all the time. Either SaiRat would be shown mahaan or Abhi, here it's abhi's turn.

Draw a parallel with kuch kuch hota hai where Salman was a nice guy but kajol goes with Shahrukh.

However, worry not, I have planned something for abhi too.

Originally posted by: Devikadish

Bechara Abhi😭, he deserves true love🥺

Kya paagal hai yeh dono🤪

Waiting for the epilogue

Abhi...

Both are mad and dumb and stupid and impulsive and selfish...😵

Will be posting the epilogue soon...😳

Originally posted by: Forgetmenot620

Virat honest police officer or scammer kya se kya ho gaya...jo bhi ho Abhi is heartbroken 💔💔 that too by two important person of his life not fair Sairat

Virat can do that, if he can shield a naxalite, he can very well do that...😆

Abhi💔

par pyaar aur jung me sab jaayaz hai...🥺

Originally posted by: kahkashansakina

Wonderful 😊❤️

Pyaar mein sab chalta hai

Sairat ke beach jo bhi ayega uska dil tote ga🤣

Do pagal Premi kuch bhi kar sakte hai ek dosre ke liye ❤️❤️

Sai abhi se shaadi nahi karna chahti thi woh toh challenge pura karne aur virat ko jalane ke liye tha.

Finally dono ek hogaye 😘❤️

End Acha sa hot romance hona ☺️ 😳

Waiting

Thank you...❤️

Epilogue awaits...

Being impulsive is one thing and doing things deliberately and then stalling a man at the altar is not cool.

Originally posted by: nikita05

I knew you would be angry at the characterisation, especially of Sai, but if you see through the FF, Sai is impulsive throughout. She is confused and stupid and at last selfish too. I wrote this keeping in mind that love is selfish. Abhi is a nice guy but surely cannot get Sai at the end of it all. I agree it would have been better if she told him, she tried too but emotions override. Also, you cannot be mahaan or perfect all the time. Either SaiRat would be shown mahaan or Abhi, here it's abhi's turn.

Draw a parallel with kuch kuch hota hai where Salman was a nice guy but kajol goes with Shahrukh.

However, worry not, I have planned something for abhi too.

Actually the characterization is not a big problem you know. You can't be mahaan, no one is in real life but they were both extremely selfish and....um..despicable too. But I don't have a problem with the way you have written it. You have established them like that throughout and that is the major reason why I couldn't connect to Sai in the story from the beginning itself because your writing made it pretty clear as to what she was gonna do in the end. Your characters were just like that, selfish, impulsive and stupid. Love can be selfish, but not at the cost of someone else's love. Being impulsive and all is fine, but leaving a man minutes before the marriage is not. It's downright cruel and obnoxiously selfish. So the problem lies not in the writing, you wanted to show them like this, you did and I hated them😆 Am I even writing sense, do you understand what I am trying to say?🤣

But yes, I hate them both and want Abhi to go far away from these two😳

What have you planned for Abhi btw? Meri request maan li kya?😳

BOLD- That movie when I first watched, I loved everything about it. But when I re watched it after growing up a bit, I disliked both SRK and Kajol's character. I actually felt bad for Salmaan's character, he was the innocent one yet, he got his heart broken. Your story actually matches with it man😲 Did you take inspiration from there?

Originally posted by: Flying_High

Actually the characterization is not a big problem you know. You can't be mahaan, no one is in real life but they were both extremely selfish and....um..despicable too. But I don't have a problem with the way you have written it. You have established them like that throughout and that is the major reason why I couldn't connect to Sai in the story from the beginning itself because your writing made it pretty clear as to what she was gonna do in the end. Your characters were just like that, selfish, impulsive and stupid. So the problem lies not in the writing, you wanted to show them like this, you did and I hated them😆 Am I even writing sense, do you understand what I am trying to say?🤣

But yes, I hate them both and want Abhi to go far away from these two😳

What have you planned for Abhi btw? Meri request maan li kya?😳

BOLD- That movie when I first watched, I loved everything about it. But when I re watched it after growing up a bit, I disliked both SRK and Kajol's character. I actually felt bad for Salmaan's character, he was the innocent one yet, he got his heart broken. Your story actually matches with it man😲 Did you take inspiration from there?

@bold: no I didn't, it just matched after I completed the story...🤣

Also, it's a cliche used in many TV shows and movies though...😆

@red: you do and I understand what you are saying...😳

Ek baar phir se padhana padega.

Just one comment: Bechara Abhi...

Waiting for the epilogue.