PriRa OS: Dressed up to get messed up - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Serpensortia

This is just so beautiful ☺️

Every time I read something new from you, I learn something new ⭐️

Loved it ❤️


Awww Shiri! Thanks so much for your generous words about my writing!

Just curious - what did you enjoy most about this story?

Thanks for reading, dear! 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: YeojaNextDoor

This was beautiful and full of feels !! ☺️ Gosh you made my imagination run wild ☺️


Ram's gesture was so sweet! This man is all heart 💓💝

And Priya being bold at the end.. ahh! She doesn't quite like losing control for long , does she 😆


All in all this was amazing Lizzie 😍 just love your writing ❤️!

Can we have a full fledged 16+ OS now on PriRa ☺️


Thank you!! 😳🤗

Ram is a sweetheart and I happened to watch that one episode where he went shopping with Priya (thanks to Shibz's prompt) and was bowled over by the colors he wears! Baby pink and orange plaid!! My Goodness! He sure makes a statement! 😆

Priya being bold at the end turned out to be in character though I hadn't quite planned it that way! 😆

Accha, you'll be happy with a 16+ story? Most people ask me for 18+ 😆


Btw, what should I call you?

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Posted: 4 years ago
#13

Thanks a ton! 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: evilxbalaa

Thanks so much for tagging!

This story was so cute and passionately intense at the same time. I love your writing for this aspect as only some writers manage to pull that off!

You always amaze me with your twists and the ending was just perfect

The prompt by Shibu was really good and you have done justice to it

Please keep tagging me whenever you write❤️


Aww thank you Hinna for your kind words and am happy you enjoyed the story!

Do you mean the twist about Ram tricking Priya?

Yeah I kinda liked the ending too, and the beginning where Priya faces off with the saree.

Saree -10, Priya -0! 😆


Yeah, it was a such a great prompt and I'm glad you think I did justice to it!

Thanks for reading, Hinna and sure I'll keep tagging you! 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: tournesol

Omg, this is so beautiful 😭🥺 and cute, and funny, and sensual, all at once. I am awed by your writing ❣ Can't believe Ram tricked Priya to wear his choice 🤣 Also, loved Priya's taunts for sequence sarees, very creative. Loved it!


Oh man, thank you Tiara for you kind, kind words! 😳 I'm flattered and humbled!

Yes, Priya's taunts were my favorite part of this update too! Thanks for bringing that up! 😳


Thanks again for reading and the comment, Tiara! 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet


Aww thank you Hinna for your kind words and am happy you enjoyed the story!

Do you mean the twist about Ram tricking Priya?

Yeah I kinda liked the ending too, and the beginning where Priya faces off with the saree.

Saree -10, Priya -0! 😆


Yeah, it was a such a great prompt and I'm glad you think I did justice to it!

Thanks for reading, Hinna and sure I'll keep tagging you! 😳

Yeah the twist about him lying to him about where the saree came from😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
#17

Woah!

How're you able to write such great scenes that leaves me breathless all the time👏


It was an awesome read & since I love Brinda & you included her in a small scene, I love this piece even more

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Posted: 4 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Woah!

How're you able to write such great scenes that leaves me breathless all the time👏


It was an awesome read & since I love Brinda & you included her in a small scene, I love this piece even more


😆 You could say it’s a speciality of mine! 😆 I love writing slow burn, almost moments!

Ohh, you like Brinda? Then I’m glad she was in this!

Thanks, Sonia! Glad you enjoyed this!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet


Thank you!! 😳🤗

Ram is a sweetheart and I happened to watch that one episode where he went shopping with Priya (thanks to Shibz's prompt) and was bowled over by the colors he wears! Baby pink and orange plaid!! My Goodness! He sure makes a statement! 😆

Priya being bold at the end turned out to be in character though I hadn't quite planned it that way! 😆

Accha, you'll be happy with a 16+ story? Most people ask me for 18+ 😆


Btw, what should I call you?

Haha.. yes! Its Nakuul's personal input I guess, lol.. to wear all those colours 😆 But yes its amazing how well he can pull those off ❤️


Nooo! Ofcourse I want an 18+ story! 🤣 I was just thinking if it would be too much to ask for at this point lol..

Do write an 18+ fiction ❤️


P.S. Call me Shazzy 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#20

This was so much fun! Please do write more :)

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